Grey
Dialectical Hermeticist
So, as some of you know, I've been working on one TTRPG in particular for quite a while.
It's gone through various revisions, rewrites, rebalances, and adjustments.
It is not yet quite done, but when I next take time of work, it could be.
Anyway, if anyone is interested, I'd very much appreciate honest feedback on the current version from people of all experience levels.
What do you like? What do you hate? What's confusing, and why? What could be worded better?
You might also glean some insight into the design process, enjoy yourself, or just pass quarantine faster.
Also, you are welcomed and encouraged to use the material. The whole point of the project is to give people RP content; pirates gonna pirate, so when the Kickstarter comes up I'm really only charging for fancy art and editing.
Don't feel a need to put a ton of effort in.
It's gone through various revisions, rewrites, rebalances, and adjustments.
It is not yet quite done, but when I next take time of work, it could be.
Anyway, if anyone is interested, I'd very much appreciate honest feedback on the current version from people of all experience levels.
What do you like? What do you hate? What's confusing, and why? What could be worded better?
You might also glean some insight into the design process, enjoy yourself, or just pass quarantine faster.
Also, you are welcomed and encouraged to use the material. The whole point of the project is to give people RP content; pirates gonna pirate, so when the Kickstarter comes up I'm really only charging for fancy art and editing.
Don't feel a need to put a ton of effort in.