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Fantasy Fallen Snow || An Ode to Nightingale || OOC

Did i mention the CS is done? How is it? I think i went overboard and off topic a lot during the History part of it honestly. StoneWolf18 StoneWolf18
 
The Broken Mind said:
Already ahead of you. I tend to hate em too. I just had to get something up to be 1st. XD 1st is MINE!
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Overall it's pretty good, the only notes I have...
  • First... this is just an observation, her breast size to me, as a woman, would be a rather big cause of back issues at that size due to the weight. Just a note.
  • Hair constantly grows. That being said, dye only affects what's currently grown or people who dye their hair natural colors consistently wouldn't have to keep doing so. Unless she affected the follicles directly, I'm pretty sure growing that color hair would require medical attention.
  • Ehehehehe, so it seems she's a bit gay now. Gotta admit I do love a bit of FxF so this should be interesting to watch x3
 
StoneWolf18 said:
Overall it's pretty good, the only notes I have...
  • First... this is just an observation, her breast size to me, as a woman, would be a rather big cause of back issues at that size due to the weight. Just a note.
  • Hair constantly grows. That being said, dye only affects what's currently grown or people who dye their hair natural colors consistently wouldn't have to keep doing so. Unless she affected the follicles directly, I'm pretty sure growing that color hair would require medical attention.
  • Ehehehehe, so it seems she's a bit gay now. Gotta admit I do love a bit of FxF so this should be interesting to watch x3
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Thinking about it... Yea. Need to go change that size. XP

Should i have her follicles directly modified then? I mean, her hair is naturally white anyways. Below will be a pic of her Pastel pink hair.Basically white. Super light pink tinge.

SOMEONE ELSE LIKES FxF! And i already can bet you know how not to disappoint in a post! (Bad Post Ex: Beth looked at her and bit her lip. 'She looks nice but..." Beth sits by Jade. "Hiya jade. You look pretty." Beth shifts, a bit uncomfortable. END POST)

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The Broken Mind said:
Thinking about it... Yea. Need to go change that size. XP

Should i have her follicles directly modified then? I mean, her hair is naturally white anyways. Below will be a pic of her Pastel pink hair.Basically white. Super light pink tinge.

SOMEONE ELSE LIKES FxF! And i already can bet you know how not to disappoint in a post! (Bad Post Ex: Beth looked at her and bit her lip. 'She looks nice but..." Beth sits by Jade. "Hiya jade. You look pretty." Beth shifts, a bit uncomfortable. END POST)

11HMuPWULjL.jpg
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Yeahhhh...

As far as I know, it isn't possible or it would be a huge trend with no one ever having to go gray and most dye companies going out of business. And a hair color would be a more platinum blonde rather than a white... I think so anyway.

FxF is my life, good lord. I dunno how much romance is gonna occur in this roleplay as I'm not playing a character, but if you ever wanna delve into a 1x1 alongside this, lemme know.
 
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I finished my CS. Had a bit of a writers block on the bio, hope it isn't too tragic-backstory cliche. Anything to correct?
 
StoneWolf18 said:
Yeahhhh...

As far as I know, it isn't possible or it would be a huge tend with no one ever having to go gray and most dye companies going out of business. And a hair color would be a more platinum blonde rather than a white... I think so anyway.

FxF is my life, good lord. I dunno how much romance is gonna occur in this roleplay as I'm not playing a character, but if you ever wanna delve into a 1x1 alongside this, lemme know.
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Fixed their size i think. If i had boobs, i'd know, but i don't. Nor do i plan to. Lol. I need guidance oh Wolfy one! Help me be a better rper in the ways of the fee-male! XD

Hmmm... Idk. I've used Peach before. (A lot honestly) She has different versions but very minor differences between any of them. Her hair has been her main staple along with her being preggers. For once, This idea generator hasn't any solutions/ideas for this predicament.

I would LOVE THAAAAT! If you could hear me, i would be cheering. But because it is nearly 2 where i am, it would be a whisper cheering. =3 If you wanna PM ideas or we could do a 1x1 thread if you prefer. Later though, as this idea comes first. Ik how it feels to yearn for a rp, bad. Lets make this work and the 1x1 can be a fun lil thing as i said, for later. Does that sound alright?

*Coughs* I wouldn't mind getting one started now though. *coughs*
 
The Broken Mind said:
Fixed their size i think. If i had boobs, i'd know, but i don't. Nor do i plan to. Lol. I need guidance oh Wolfy one! Help me be a better rper in the ways of the fee-male! XD

Hmmm... Idk. I've used Peach before. (A lot honestly) She has different versions but very minor differences between any of them. Her hair has been her main staple along with her being preggers. For once, This idea generator hasn't any solutions/ideas for this predicament.

I would LOVE THAAAAT! If you could hear me, i would be cheering. But because it is nearly 2 where i am, it would be a whisper cheering. =3 If you wanna PM ideas or we could do a 1x1 thread if you prefer. Later though, as this idea comes first. Ik how it feels to yearn for a rp, bad. Lets make this work and the 1x1 can be a fun lil thing as i said, for later. Does that sound alright?

*Coughs* I wouldn't mind getting one started now though. *coughs*
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There we go, makes much more sense. x3

She would just have to dye it more often. Depending on how fast her hair grows and what type she uses, I'm pretty sure thats once to twice a month. Don't quote me on that though, since I don't dye my hair xD (I've considered it, but eh, don't wanna put in the effort.)

Swwweeeeet. Yeah its around 1 for me so if you could just toss a PM my way and we could start plotting sometime tomorrow (or later today? 0-o) that would be great!

You're character's accepted! :D

Ms. Sparrow said:
I finished my CS. Had a bit of a writers block on the bio, hope it isn't too tragic-backstory cliche. Anything to correct?
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Well... the bio needs a bit of work.

You see, the way adrenaline affects the body isn't how most would think (seeing as most action movies and such portray this wrongly.) Its a chemical our body releases to keep ourselves alive, like taking a powerful drug. So instead of turning someone into a killing machine, it instead would make them wholly unsteady and shaky. Piling that on top of being intoxicated (and most likely not used to that amount of alcohol), there's no way she would've been able to kill two men as she had, especially when they could've easily overpowered her.

In short, I would change it up a bit and remember, not all tragic backstories have to do with being attacked by a guy. (As thats seeming to now be a common theme.)

Also, she seems to be rather underweight for her height as well. I would say after checking a bmi calculator that, if you wanted her to be be borderline underweight, 125 is the lowest you could go I suppose unless she had some form of medical condition/other factors playing into it.

If you need any help with the edits lemme know!
 
StoneWolf18 said:
There we go, makes much more sense. x3

She would just have to dye it more often. Depending on how fast her hair grows and what type she uses, I'm pretty sure thats once to twice a month. Don't quote me on that though, since I don't dye my hair xD (I've considered it, but eh, don't wanna put in the effort.)

Swwweeeeet. Yeah its around 1 for me so if you could just toss a PM my way and we could start plotting sometime tomorrow (or later today? 0-o) that would be great!

You're character's accepted! :D


Well... the bio needs a bit of work.

You see, the way adrenaline affects the body isn't how most would think (seeing as most action movies and such portray this wrongly.) Its a chemical our body releases to keep ourselves alive, like taking a powerful drug. So instead of turning someone into a killing machine, it instead would make them wholly unsteady and shaky. Piling that on top of being intoxicated (and most likely not used to that amount of alcohol), there's no way she would've been able to kill two men as she had, especially when they could've easily overpowered her.

In short, I would change it up a bit and remember, not all tragic backstories have to do with being attacked by a guy. (As thats seeming to now be a common theme.)

Also, she seems to be rather underweight for her height as well. I would say after checking a bmi calculator that, if you wanted her to be be borderline underweight, 125 is the lowest you could go I suppose unless she had some form of medical condition/other factors playing into it.

If you need any help with the edits lemme know!
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Alrighty, I'm sure I can think of something. Thanks for telling me! I'll get to editing now.
 
StoneWolf18 said:
There we go, makes much more sense. x3

She would just have to dye it more often. Depending on how fast her hair grows and what type she uses, I'm pretty sure thats once to twice a month. Don't quote me on that though, since I don't dye my hair xD (I've considered it, but eh, don't wanna put in the effort.)

Swwweeeeet. Yeah its around 1 for me so if you could just toss a PM my way and we could start plotting sometime tomorrow (or later today? 0-o) that would be great!

You're character's accepted! :D
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Gonna annoy ya here but... Is it alright if it's dyed every two months? Every month is annoyin. XD

Pm? did someone say pm? THINK FAST! *Gently tosses a paper airplane for a PM*
 
The Broken Mind said:
Gonna annoy ya here but... Is it alright if it's dyed every two months? Every month is annoyin. XD

Pm? did someone say pm? THINK FAST! *Gently tosses a paper airplane for a PM*
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Technicalities~

God. All the nitpicking I'm doing with these characters.

I'm surprised y'all are still here.

-chants- PmPmPmPm
 
StoneWolf18 said:
Technicalities~

God. All the nitpicking I'm doing with these characters.

I'm surprised y'all are still here.

-chants- PmPmPmPm
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Atleast you're not just like "GET OUTTA HERE WITH THAT. TRASH." Lol. Most i've ran into come off as assy when they tell me what to edit in my CS but you come off with a good feeling. Hard to explain without my voice honestly. Even then i'd be like a wet sponge being thrown on a cactus. God. it's too early/late for me. :deadopenmouth:

Ima sleep before my father wakes and takes my comp. Lol. See ya in a few hours peeps! Mind out! (Bonus, i'll give a name to call me. I used to go by GoldenCharizard4, GoldenChari. I have other names but eeeh.)
 
The Broken Mind said:
Atleast you're not just like "GET OUTTA HERE WITH THAT. TRASH." Lol. Most i've ran into come off as assy when they tell me what to edit in my CS but you come off with a good feeling. Hard to explain without my voice honestly. Even then i'd be like a wet sponge being thrown on a cactus. God. it's too early/late for me. :deadopenmouth:
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Well, I try not to be the most common types of GMs I see. An in between of the laid back "do whatever the hell you want" and hard ass-ish "get that filth out of my sight" you know?
 
jinkx said:
StoneWolf18 StoneWolf18 i'm gonna get a character sheet up sometime today, apologies. i was asleep.
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If all of the characters are gay, this'll be fucking amazing.

Overall she's well put together. I would've expected more of PTSD to come from such a traumatic incident than OCD but either way, accepted! ^^
 
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