Dorian Aurel

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 Name: Dorian Aurel


Nicknames/Titles (if any): The Tinker


Race/Type: Human (Earth II)


Age: 23


Gender: Male


Description of Appearance: 5'8", 180 lbs, Stocky Build, Pale Skin, white hair, Some facial scruff, Mahogany eyes, Wears a Dark Brown (Almost Black) Duster, Blue Jeans, Steel Toed Combat Boots, Red Wife Beater, and a single padded glove on his right hand.
Wears a exosuit of his own make, when in combat.


Picture:
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Exosuit:
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Background: Dorian was born in one of the outlying villages of Keone. He was the Son to a Blacksmith and a mage, hence already influencing his lot in life from an early age. Since as long as he could remember, he had a fascination with the metallurgical arts, and from the age six helped his father in the forge. His mother being a mage, was hardly ever home due to always being on call to help create the many Mechanized Suits that the people of Keone use. By the time he turned 16 he had begun tinkering with both the mechanical aspects and arcane of the suits, drawing up blueprints of his own design. Having the skill and materials, he set to work on his suit. It took him five years to get the mechanical work down, using spare parts and leftovers from older models. when he turned 22, he had completed the suite. While inferior to the other Exosuits in utility and weaponry, he lefft plenty of room for improvement, always making adjustments when he could get the parts.


Realizing the only way to truly complete it, he would need to expand his career opportunities. To that, he became a mercenary, offering his services to the Halfmoon Family. In return, he was paid in both Technology and in funds.


Occupation: Blacksmith in free time, and Merc for his job.


Personality: Complete and utter nerd. Calm and Collected under fire, and a natural strategist. Always seeking to improve himself and others, be it technologically or emotionally. Easy to spot due to his unique armour
 


Skills/Talents: Master Blacksmith/Inventor, Adept Marksman, and Novice Swordsman. Is a prodigy when it comes to the arcane arts, always using it in his works to improve them further. He had even improved his own suit of armour to the point where it was on par with the Bear Suit in terms of strength, it's greatest quality is it's potential for upgrades. Lacking in durability, it does grant him superior mobility mobility. The suit also is in the form of a man, to symbolize the potential it has.
 


Writing Sample:  For several minutes Vesper trekked alone in the forest, his senses on high alert as he kept Thunderous Edge in it's secondary mode. It was quiet for the most part, the only sounds being the wind through the trees, the muffled sounds of his footsteps, and the chirping of birds. It was peaceful in a sense, almost too peaceful if it hadn't been for the Grimm that lurked within the very forest. Data streamed across his HUD as his eyes scanned the area for threats. Note to self, Install motion tracker... he thought getting a grunt of agreement from his split personality.
It would certainly make things easier. Maybe a FOF Tag in the other UMs. The other half replied. Vesper would have responded, if it weren't for the sound of several trees crashing around him. On Instinct, the faunus male leaped out of the way, and in time too, for if h stayed a moment longer he would have been devoured by the massive King Taijitu. "And the fun Begins..." Vesper said eyeing the large twin headed serpent before firing off one of his dust filled shells. A maelstrom of fire and lightning exited the under barrel of Thunderous Edge, Engulfing the white half in an explosion of fire and plasma, burning away the dark creature. "One down, and one to go."
 
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[SIZE= 12px]Why go through the hassle of making him a normal (albeit preposterous) original-earthian, when you can make him an Earth two denizen?Complete with a bear suit and all? [/SIZE]
 
@HighSanguinaryPriest As the GM, I do question it though. Like, he really works full-time as a blacksmith? I could see him having a forge as a hobby, but having that as his actual job just doesn't seem realistic. Also how does he have a badass Exosuit already (stealing that term haha) if he's from Earth I?


It might be easier to make him an Earth II character as Elephantom said. Or change him up to make him more realistic (like a part-time military contractor that designs weapons in his free time) and I'll accept it.
 

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