Daicetta‏: The Impure City

[spacepossum]

Plagued, would you like to be the leader/ deputy of a clan? If so please pick up or downtown. Downtown is a huge ally of "The pack of Quarried Stone" or my pack basically

Hmm... I'm not sure for Damien.... I'll have to think about it.


"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

 

[StoneWolf18]

@PlaguedWithInsanity its up

 

[spacepossum]

So what parts do I need to fix?


"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

 

[StoneWolf18]

So what parts do I need to fix?
"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

Read over the lore, its too stereotypical. Let me know when you fix it.

 

[spacepossum]

Read over the lore, its too stereotypical. Let me know when you fix it.

Ehm...I don't really see a problem. Can you give me specifics on what to look over on?


"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

 

[StoneWolf18]

Ehm...I don't really see a problem. Can you give me specifics on what to look over on?
"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

Age. You can only be up to about 5 years as a vampire. Sorry if this wasn't clear


I'll add more once I return to my computer.


 
@PlaguedWithInsanity IGNORE THIS


 
OK so this what needs changing:


Age, only up to 5 years as a vampire, remember that you still age and appear to do so until that process is halted


Rank, look in the lore for this info, can't remember off the top of my head unless you would like leader


Grade may need including, decide that when fixing the age


Appearance, eyes aren't blood red and your skin doesn't pale


Personality, because of the age and such this may need some tweaking


History will need some changing


Sorry if I am "ruining" your character but you probably would have understood me if you read the lore. I'm not saying that you didn't but its always a possibility. Please PM me with any other questions and concerns.


~ @StoneWolf18

 

[spacepossum]

So, he couldn't appear to be in his 20's and be a couple centuries?


"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

 

[StoneWolf18]

So, he couldn't appear to be in his 20's and be a couple centuries?
"Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?" ~ Gerard Way


MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE: 2001— FOREVER

No, that would mean he is in the 30+ years of vampirism and you may only go up to five. This is because the older you become as a vampire, the more authority you have and I don't want someone being as night up as a deputy. He could look 20 and be 25 but the max is 5 years a a vampire. You could have him be and look way older then talk to a mage about reversing his age so he looks younger but keep that out of your CS and PM for details if that is the route you want to take.