Crap Dago Wrote

[AllHailDago]

Here's a few old poems I found around the web. Most of my writings never get a name, sorry. So those lacking a name will be given a number. Criticism is welcome, but for these first few keep in mind theyre quite old so I'm unsure whether criticism helps for them.


1.)


I'm tired of all the hypocrisy


And it's quite an atrocity


When all of the mediocrity


Becomes disguised as philosophy


2.)


Loneliness plagues me like a disease


A subtle poison that no one sees


When i cry out no one believes


Then i question what do they perceive


Feeling as if i couldnt breathe


The next thoughts i cant conceive


All my attempts destiny unweaves


So what will trying again achieve

 

[astriskia]

There poems are wonderful, absolutely wonderful!


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[AllHailDago]

3)


Miles away but still right here


A simple thought, nothing more


Praying for her not to disappear


The thought of loss he abhors


Water held behind the gates


A trigger held from but an inch


With every word trying to relate


Yet every noise made him flinch


Gone but held in red sorrow


There is nothing for him to hold


He's left with empty tomorrow


Yet the sun paints the sky with gold


 
@Dusky


You asked, I deliver. Poorly, but nonetheless.


4)


A summers blade falling against the sun


Naught but azure sky's blood survives the end


Simple songs are said and hearts are broken


Bells ring while the birds travel to the mend


Faded crystals bore not a fruit to hold


Split well apart, the pain is left unseen


Yet sons fly low with motions all too bold


Unraveled and beaten with fire between


Frost consuming the hearth and heart alike


A pattern unmatched among the stars


With cold thorns piercing among latent strike


Wastelands show as heavens' battle scars


Gardens now bloom while the memories burn


With eyes set ahead their backs will not turn

 

[AllHailDago]

Found a bunch of old poems I wrote that I posted on here =3


5.) The Shoutbox Poem


Rhyme and reason are out of season


And sanity is out of stock


Chaos and destruction, are in conjunction


And now it's raining socks


God's and demons, and faeries and he-men


In this world they walk


Jokes and jests and no one rests


Fun turns the clock


6.)


Though shattered hopes try to reach


A concealed soul attempts to breach


Never known but often seen


A single gem attempts to gleam


Eyes clued in to all the world


Thoughts and feelings confused and twirled


Clarity is sought but left unfound


True anarchy and unrest abound


Peace and love created in blood


A bright concept seen through mud


Questioned paths are forced to burn


The worlds ashes in a broken urn


One more chance in twisted thought


Hope is gained and good is wrought


Happy endings that most believe


Or is it just the true storms eve


7.)


The darkness in my soul


Tells me I have no goal


As I run through the night


But my love inside runs deep


Through the shadowy keep


And the new hope seems right


It was in the pits of despair


That i developed this new flair


And with it the will to fight


Down deep inside my core


As these new hopes soar


I walk from darkness into light


8.)


Cross the land and past the stars


Beyond the reach of any cars


There lies the soul always needed


For which one soul has always pleaded


One call to be given to the any


But the answer is lost in the many


For one is unseen in the billions


A woman hidden in the civilians


Darkness falls onto the heart


The world he planned to depart


A few new cries rise above the din


His heart saved by those akin


He looks on in new wonder


To crawl through the rolling thunder


Finding her is surely to pass


On the wings of shattered glass


@Dusky

 

[Killigrew]

A concealed soul attempts to breach
Never known but often seen


A single gem attempts to gleam

That's beautiful.

 

[AllHailDago]

I think that's accidentally c/p in the wrong place Cx but thank you


 
There, all fixed

 

[AllHailDago]

9.)


A whispered dream


A shadows breath


A strangled seam


A barren death


The silent scene


The only seed


The absent gene


The only breed


With hope lacking


With heart faded


With pain tracking


With it unabated


You see strife


You abandon youth


You find life


You know truth


For all known


For all lies


For the down


There are ties


@Dusky

 

[AllHailDago]

10)


Fear to seek beyond as friend


Treading lightly, wishing not an end


Only new horizons, beyond the shore


What is gold, could be much more


A single stroke does separate


Miles cast doubt, I hesitate


Your wounds, fresh with blood


Emptied heart, dragged through the mud


Howling insanity sung to sleep


Tears held back are free to weep


Winds caress an ancient thought


Strength held fast, for both have brought


Hands to lift, to love, and grow


They'll divert the rivers flow


Building up what was torn down


Return to you your rightful crown


First to cast away self-doubt


A drop of water, an omniscient drought


Stones held fast, of pain and fear


A path to take, protect who's dear


@Dusky


@Broken\-Angel