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SirBlazeALot said:
That one in bold. I mentioned them like way earlier, I'll do some digging in the ooc. They're not in the Organizations page yet but they will be. That's the only semi-extant group I think she'd fit into. It would just have to be later down the line, cause I don't want too many primary groups in the story right now, I rather have them be Drifters, Nightmares, or randoms, but I don't want randoms to be random for long. Would you be okay with waiting until then? :3
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It's around page 30
 
@Kayzo @Kayzo Would you like Ellie to flee with the theater, or would you prefer that she remains kidnapped by BSG? Also, question for @SpookySableye when would you like Shane to switch teams? I think this final battle would be the best time, perhaps after Marth is killed? ALSO, question for @PlaguedWithInsanity @explosiveKitten would you guys like to incorporate Spain and Cherry into this arc somehow? I noticed their sheets are up there. Also, @explosiveKitten would you still like to make the Meleoetta?[/b][/color][/size]


All of the fighting attracts a huge herd of zombies with at least one of each special zombie. Realizing they'll all die if they stay and fight any longer, the two groups go their separate ways. BSG returns to Driftveil and NCMT/Drifters go east, hunting for a new home. Thus ending the first arc.


SO WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK!? DO YOU HAVE ANY IMPROVEMENTS TO MAKE? DEATH REJECTIONS OR RECOMMENDATIONS!? COMMENTS OR CONCERNS!? HAVE YOU FOUND A PLOT HOLE!? LET ME KNOW PLZ. ON TO THE SECOND ARC.





Arc Two: Religious Nutjobs, Feminists, and a Divided Group


After the utter chaos that was the last arc, The NCMT/Drifters have formed one group, known now only as The Drifters, since the NCMT lost the theater. I'm not quite sure what BSG should be doing during this arc, so I'll be focused on the good guys for this part. I would love to hear your ideas about BSG though, DISCUSS, DISCUSS, DISCUSS.


Anyway, the New Drifters are somewhat broken, low on supplies, and divided on the fact that Lotus, though mature beyond her years, is a child and Lilly is pregnant. I'd assume the group would now be co-led by Blastoise-Kun, @theglassangel and Sylvanus @minismurf


Eventually, the group runs into the Feminists, who have built a completely safe haven in Lacunosa town. However, after taking them in, the feminists reveal that the men of the group are not welcome to stay. They don't trust them because their leader perceives most raider groups to be primarily composed of men, and that men are quick to try and take shit over and hi-jack communities and run them into the ground. Immovable in their resolution, they kick out all men and any women who don't want to stay.


It turns out that the feminists have mysteriously been losing scavengers. This is due to the cult living in the temple (Pokemon League) past Victory Road. The cult leader is strangely immune to the zombie plague, and so he has convinced his large group of followers to help him build a harem so that he can go all Ghengis Khan, and eventually, save the race by repopulating with a generation of children who are immune to the plague. In the cult, women who are deemed "infertile" are sacrificed to Arceus. The main group has a run-in with them, and returns to the Feminist camp to warn them about the cult. It turns out, the Feminists have a religious figure of their own, an Oracle @PlaguedWithInsanity who predicted that their safe zone would soon be breached. This causes the leader of the Feminists to become even more paranoid of men, and orders her people to kill any male survivors they meet while scavenging that don't belong to the Main group. The men of the main group are allowed to stay, but only to help the feminists dispatch of the cult.


Meanwhile, the cult finds out that there's a big juicy safe haven filled with nothing but women, and start mobilizing to attack.


Both the cult leader, and feminist leader are up for grabs. You don't have to pick the gijinkas I picked, I just think they'd fit the characters really well.


Some suggestions for Cult Leader. Something with a mask and a cloak would be so cool.

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Some suggestions for Feminazi leader.


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Alright, the second arc isn't as well developed, but that's okay. Hopefully you guys can help with that. EVERYBODY, RESPOND WITH WHAT YOU THINK. PLS AND THANK.
 
SirBlazeALot said:
I have a death opinions. I think Samuel should be killed in action. @RiddleWrappedEnigma Your thoughts? Also, I think that during the raid, Luke and Nikki should try to sneak into BSG home base (which will be moved to a court house) and rescue Lotus. But BSG returns too quickly and as punishment, Luke is executed, and Nikki is captured to be sold off with Lotus as a peace offering to Nightmare. Your thoughts? @explosiveKitten
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.... ooooooo (I was hoping for some sort of noble sacrifice thing but that's cool too)... and Nikki is totally to going to kick ass, riiiight?
 
explosiveKitten said:
.... ooooooo (I was hoping for some sort of noble sacrifice thing but that's cool too)... and Nikki is totally to going to kick ass, riiiight?
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Yus, both Nikki and Luke can kick some non-lethal ass before getting subdued.


And then, ideas for Luke death.


When presented with the choice of who should lose their life, Luke volunteers and Mikey obliges!


Or! Nikki volunteers but Luke insists that he gets killed instead!


Those are pretty noble, right?

DragonStorm said:
Whoa I just go home and saw that
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REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAD
 
That yandere double execution would be pretty cool, and I don't know what I want Ellie to do yet.
 
SirBlazeALot said:
Yus, both Nikki and Luke can kick some non-lethal ass before getting subdued.
And then, ideas for Luke death.


When presented with the choice of who should lose their life, Luke volunteers and Mikey obliges!


Or! Nikki volunteers but Luke insists that he gets killed instead!


Those are pretty noble, right?
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yeeee
 
Alright, here's a post with more detail. I REALLY like your post, all of the details and ideas. They're all great. I think that every death would be a good one, but I think Gabe should die, for affect. Maybe the BSG makes Ellie kill him. The yandere idea is very good, and I'd love that double execution. So much emotions would be going on.
 
SpookySableye said:
I really like your plans for the first part. Seriously, you seemed to put a lot of effort in to it ( :) ). I'm cool with Eddy dying too. Yeah, I don't really want to see my characters die too much, but at the same time, I do sometimes like bloodshed since it is powerful in stories. As for Shane, I think that seems to be a good time for him to side-switch. I actually have an idea for you and @Kayzo if she plans on Ellie fleeing. What if when Shane decides to switch sides, he tries to sneak Ellie out of the BSG to get her back to NCMT? It could give them a good reason to let Shane in there too. This is just an idea, so feel free to criticize where needed xD .
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It would be during the battle, cause that's when Marth's death would take place :D


If @Kayzo wants Ellie to escape with the group then Shane can help her, that'd be cool
 
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