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So... I was high on caffeine when I wrote that last post so I went through and did some quick editing. I didn't make any major changes; made Charles less emotional and I decided not to write the lyrics Devyn was singing because... I've never understood doing that in the past unless there's real significance and there wasn't any to her song choice. Just thought I'd give the heads up here. And my apologies; I really shouldn't drink coffee but I just felt like being a rebel yesterday >.< Sad that that's my rebellion. But meh; it was a fun day xD Everything was really great ^.^
 
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Delilah


I guess I can accept that Delilah wouldn't notice the dramatics going on with Victor...


Ellie


Charles came down the stairs, and he was just the person Ellie wanted to see! He could grab medical supplies for Lotus and she wouldn't have to explain what to grab and what it looked like. She watched as he began to slowly make his way through the prisoners until he finally saw her and Lotus. She saw the blood drain from his face and the scared expression in his eyes, and she knew that he cared for the girl just as much as she did. "Ellie. Tell me precisely what happened to Lotus." Ellie took a deep breath in and nodded, taking a moment to think of what she'd say. "It was Mikey. He came down with Marcy here and threatened Lotus and Nikki, then harassed me. After that he cut off one of her fingers as some sick reminder to stay in check." She explained, frowning and patting Lotus. "I sacrificed some clothing to stop her bleeding, but it won't be enough. I need you to get me medical supplies. I can't risk an infection. I know that you care about this girl, and I need you to do this."


Charles came down the stairs, saw Lotus, and turned and left. He came back with medical supplies. They're lying just outside the prison door.


@Kayzo
 
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RubyRose said:
Delilah
I guess I can accept that Delilah wouldn't notice the dramatics going on with Victor...


Ellie


Charles came down the stairs, and he was just the person Ellie wanted to see! He could grab medical supplies for Lotus and she wouldn't have to explain what to grab and what it looked like. She watched as he began to slowly make his way through the prisoners until he finally saw her and Lotus. She saw the blood drain from his face and the scared expression in his eyes, and she knew that he cared for the girl just as much as she did. "Ellie. Tell me precisely what happened to Lotus." Ellie took a deep breath in and nodded, taking a moment to think of what she'd say. "It was Mikey. He came down with Marcy here and threatened Lotus and Nikki, then harassed me. After that he cut off one of her fingers as some sick reminder to stay in check." She explained, frowning and patting Lotus. "I sacrificed some clothing to stop her bleeding, but it won't be enough. I need you to get me medical supplies. I can't risk an infection. I know that you care about this girl, and I need you to do this."


Charles came down the stairs, saw Lotus, and turned and left. He came back with medical supplies. They're lying just outside the prison door.


@Kayzo
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Oh crap, I'm sorry. I wasn't attentive enough to see that stuff. I'll edit it today.
 
RubyRose said:
Delilah
I guess I can accept that Delilah wouldn't notice the dramatics going on with Victor...


Ellie


Charles came down the stairs, and he was just the person Ellie wanted to see! He could grab medical supplies for Lotus and she wouldn't have to explain what to grab and what it looked like. She watched as he began to slowly make his way through the prisoners until he finally saw her and Lotus. She saw the blood drain from his face and the scared expression in his eyes, and she knew that he cared for the girl just as much as she did. "Ellie. Tell me precisely what happened to Lotus." Ellie took a deep breath in and nodded, taking a moment to think of what she'd say. "It was Mikey. He came down with Marcy here and threatened Lotus and Nikki, then harassed me. After that he cut off one of her fingers as some sick reminder to stay in check." She explained, frowning and patting Lotus. "I sacrificed some clothing to stop her bleeding, but it won't be enough. I need you to get me medical supplies. I can't risk an infection. I know that you care about this girl, and I need you to do this."


Charles came down the stairs, saw Lotus, and turned and left. He came back with medical supplies. They're lying just outside the prison door.


@Kayzo
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Fixed everything up! Sorry about the wait
 
Kayzo said:
It felt nice to get all of them out. I felt pretty bad for skipping out so much.
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I get it... I really prefer the posts I can post for everyone I have!! But I also like being able to just post for a few and focus on them as well. Glad Delilah and Eddy joined the fight :) Even if Delilah is causing a gate jam O.o Gooodness.


Also... Ellie <3 Poor Ellie. Charles is on her side... without picking sides, of course, because loyalty to Mikey but... he thinks it's wrong for her to be held prisoner. Even if he doesn't like her all that much (thinks she's too soft and emotional), she is a member of the gang.


Millie is awesome <3 I actually felt mildly bad about sending Lanna after her... she definitely isn't old ;D xD I feel bad that she doesn't have a good partner to be with... -wants to make a character just for Millie but I have quite enough characters as is >.<-


And Silas... I'm still getting a feel for him but he's an interesting character. Roscoe and him make a fun to read duo.


Good posts, Kayzo :)
 
RubyRose said:
I get it... I really prefer the posts I can post for everyone I have!! But I also like being able to just post for a few and focus on them as well. Glad Delilah and Eddy joined the fight :) Even if Delilah is causing a gate jam O.o Gooodness.
Also... Ellie <3 Poor Ellie. Charles is on her side... without picking sides, of course, because loyalty to Mikey but... he thinks it's wrong for her to be held prisoner. Even if he doesn't like her all that much (thinks she's too soft and emotional), she is a member of the gang.


Millie is awesome <3 I actually felt mildly bad about sending Lanna after her... she definitely isn't old ;D xD I feel bad that she doesn't have a good partner to be with... -wants to make a character just for Millie but I have quite enough characters as is >.<-


And Silas... I'm still getting a feel for him but he's an interesting character. Roscoe and him make a fun to read duo.


Good posts, Kayzo :)
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Thank you for the motivation!


Delilah is finally deciding to not be lazy for once in her life. And don't worry about Millie! I have a little plan for her to swoo Xera (which won't work at all and will most likely backfire terribly).


Though I do feel bad for Ellie, my little cinnamon roll. Too pure for the world. She doesn't deserve anything bad. And I agree with you on Silas. Right now he's the character I connect with the least, but I'm slowly figuring him out and how I want to play him.
 
SirBlazeALot said:
Sup guys. I'm gonna wait for @Lotusy for Glacier and @mikko for oran and mikey.
Lotusy you can go ahead and bring errbody on back to the theater
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Gotcha Blaze. I'll post once I get home.


Glad I waited, though, since Spooky did the Tyler thing. I'm going to enjoy that.
 
Lotusy said:
Gotcha Blaze. I'll post once I get home.
Glad I waited, though, since Spooky did the Tyler thing. I'm going to enjoy that.
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I especially enjoyed writing that part > :)
 
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@Lotusy


Nice post man! :D Wish I could have pulled a Tyler when anxiety attack hit from being around too many people for too long... Then again I think that would have made my friends laugh harder.


Sam was also interesting; nice leadup with the Bloater ^.^


@SpookySableye


I NEVER GAVE YOU KUDOS FOR THE RANDOM BUZZER BUT KUDOS! Fun idea ^.^
 
mikko said:
@RubyRose
OKAY SO I'M TIRED SO I'M GOING TO SLEEP BUT IF THAT WASN'T CHILL THROW ROCKS AT MY WINDOW OKAY ILY
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My only question is... are they still in the SWAT vehicle? Because if they are, cool, and if not I think I missed something... but I ask to try and better picture the assault so that I can write a proper response.
 
So... if there's anything wrong with the post I hope you guys'll let me know. I didn't get a chance to proofread it for reasons because I wanted to post while I had good internet. I'll fix anything I messed up, though... I mean I wrote a lot so there's plenty of places to mess up. Also... I don't know how often I'll be on tomorrow. It's an important day to me... so.... just a heads up. That or I might be crying to all of you xD Let's hope it's the former ^.^
 
Hello! Suzu here, lol. Some of you might know me =_= some of you might not, idk. It doesn't matter. *Barfs*


Anyways, I'm reserving a few characters if no one minds.


Bronzong, Lugia, Dusclops, Rattata, Squirtle, Mega Lucario, and I think Greninja!


If there's any that someone else had planned on reserving, just let me know and I'll see if I feel like giving'em up. The first five though... probably not... I like the FCs I have for them.


Ily guys (=~=) and hope you'll allow me to join once my characters are up.
 
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