Fantasy Conatus - The Great War (OOC)

[Edric Yuma]

The character development is strong within you Fred Colon

 

[KingofAesir]

I've posted! Aveline is just chilling on the ship.

 

[Fred Colon]

The character development is strong within you Fred Colon

Haha, thank you! I had fun writing it. Wanted to have a Rena - Terrik scene. Give her another reason to slow down and work together with others.

 

[Edric Yuma]

By the way, how is everyone feeling on pacing from my part? I went realllyyy far ahead in terms of story for my recent post because I felt like dialogue would feel less mechanical and forced if you all knew when it started and stopped and made those decisions yourselves. Does everyone agree with that sentiment for future dialogue scenes? I know there is also some drawbacks to doing it this way, so I just wanted to give a brief vibe check!

 

[Fred Colon]

I'm down, personally. We know what's happening and we can take it at our own pace. We know where we've got to be, so we can direct our characters in that direction. I just worry it might leave you with less to do sometimes haha! Like now, you'll have nothing to do till we talk with the scientists and Dagonport!

 

[KingofAesir]

Dialogue is my favorite thing ever. Fred Colon I enjoyed the use of Aveline's nickname.

 

[Fred Colon]

Haha, I figured she might have heard it, so she would use it! Its gonna be fun RPing these two together. I liked you fleshing out what happened with those backstory bits, by the by. It really fleshed things out more for who Aveline is and why she does what she does.

 

[Edric Yuma]

I'm down, personally. We know what's happening and we can take it at our own pace. We know where we've got to be, so we can direct our characters in that direction. I just worry it might leave you with less to do sometimes haha! Like now, you'll have nothing to do till we talk with the scientists and Dagonport!

Don’t worry about me! As much as I like worldbuilding, the coolest part of GMing a roleplay is seeing other people interact within the world you created. I love reading everyone’s posts!

Side note: if anyone still wants to interact with my NPCs, feel free to reach out!

 

[Edric Yuma]

Also side note #2: KingofAesir and Fred Colon , I don’t think you all have gone really far at all yet, but try to keep in mind pacing to allow Time for Enolx and Elysium to insert themselves somewhere! The enthusiasm is incredible though

 

[enterelysium]

lovely

 

[Fred Colon]

Yea, figured we'd shoot the shit in the airship till the others showed up. We won't go further.

 

[Edric Yuma]

Yea, figured we'd shoot the shit in the airship till the others showed up. We won't go further.

“Shoot the shit” is a figure of speech I will definitely be adding to my vocabulary. And don’t worry, the dialogue happening right now makes sense

 

[KingofAesir]

Fred Colon Thanks! I like writing backstory flashbacks they're quite enjoyable.

 

[KingofAesir]

Fred Colon eating dinner real quick will be back

 

[Enolx]

Oh I was waiting on Enter. Ill get something up soon.

 

[KingofAesir]

Fred Colon I'm headed to bed. I shall reply in the morning.

 

[Fred Colon]

Gotcha. Only four in the afternoon here haha.

 

[KingofAesir]

Fred Colon Apologies, man. I got super distracted today wow.

 

[waifu]

This seems interesting! Mind if I join?

 

[KingofAesir]

Edric Yuma Could we say that tea is a rarer commodity? Something expensive that Rena or Aveline might not have had? I just thought it would be cool for this scene with Rosaria so nonchalantly offering them this expensive thing.

 

[Edric Yuma]

Oops! Sorry, notifications weren’t working.

 

[Edric Yuma]

This seems interesting! Mind if I join?

Sorry we’re already full! Thanks for your interest though.

 

[Edric Yuma]

Edric Yuma Could we say that tea is a rarer commodity? Something expensive that Rena or Aveline might not have had? I just thought it would be cool for this scene with Rosaria so nonchalantly offering them this expensive thing.

Okay, forgive cause I might be blind- where In the posts does Rosaria offer them tea? I wanna read the context real quick, but at the moment I would say it honestly doesn’t make sense to have tea be an expensive commodity in this world - there is a lot more fertile land for crops than our Earth. However, I can say there are much rarer blends of tea that perhaps took a special kind of process to make that could be extra expensive that Rosaria serves them.

 

[Enolx]

at the end of the post

 

[waifu]

Sorry we’re already full! Thanks for your interest though.

No worries!

You might want to take out the (open) from your thread title.