Clash of the Cliques: A Modern Fantasy High School RP

Hn, y'know this brings up something, which frankly shoulda done earlier. But hey, uh, suppose now is better than never. I guess.


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@Cyber Wolf , @ThatOneCrazyPerson ,@Wild Born , @jole875 , @Zerohex , @MusicFever


- Right, well you fellows still interested? Yay or nay? Either or works.


Also side-note in the case of @NetherLightGod, did you get those changes to the CS marked.


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And uh, Comrade, if you want, I could toss some up some NPC your way.
 
AH, well apologizes for not noting you in with the list Bones. Glad to see you still have interest in this little thing.


Oh, uh, if you didn't notice, there was a little skirmish and stuff on the way to the 'Dealer' that is/was occurring as I imagine Dusty was heading over towards that other lead.


Comrade, I'll work on tossing up a Random NPC your way.


And @NetherLightGod , if still here and glancing over, sad to see ya go, if that is what you are going to do. Though, if you haven't deleted it, by the time this has been done, I'll go check over it. And such.
 
Yeah I'm here, sorry about not posting. I've just been pretty busy of late so when I'm done with stuff I don't even feel like posting. I even wanted to edit my CS somewhat (same general character and backstory, different details n whatnot) and haven't gotten around to that, so IDK, I'll see about doing that. At least I saw it coming and gave my character an out, he's off showering and getting changed.
 
It's fine Zero. Hey, least you wrote yourself a way out. That's always nice. Oh yeah, the Finale/End Game is upon this.


@ZeiruliousMakavar - Oh yeah! Feel free to join. Currently this is gonna be the last hurrah, the Final Act, etc. Gonna be action-packed y'dig? But yeah come along for the ride if you are still interested.
 
Eh, feels like kind of a copout to show up for a finale after doing nothing for the RP, y'know? It was a fun idea tho, bummer you're ending it so fast but at least you're going for an ending rather than it just dying out.
 
yeah, im still in had some trouble at work but ill post soon


 
up notice im going to try and befriend Steven, i like the char...
 
i know i did, i read about a char more than once so i always see new ways to intaract with them, thats why i found steven to be very fitting, even if it wont be a buddy buddy relationship it can turn out to be a useful business friendship, I can be really useful at times. @Boomrocker
 
Eh, not sure it'd be a 'business friendship'. Really, it'd probably be more of, 'School is going to Hell, if you can pull your weight, while we get out of here, just come along'.


@Supercomicbookgirl - Right. Okay, I've noticed a recurring pattern which I feel needs to be addressed. The assumption that you can automatically get away with doing something to the NPCs. This was done earlier, with the presuming the shoving away of two other NPCs would be successful.


And now you went on, and decided that you would be able to successfully be able to pull off a target, the cheerleader, who was so engaged in choking the Snakeman to death. And of course you left without waiting for input to happen, to see whether or not the gesture would actually succeed. That is in bad taste, automatically assuming what you do will work. And it is not a thing you do NOT do.


Alongside that, I've noticed you have been creating NPCs willy nilly. That is my realm of affairs, as is the detailing the more important affairs of the environment. Such as, how you went ahead and assumed there was a large crowd surrounding the Manor. That is a fairly prominent detail, which would be plot worthy. Which falls into my domain, as I help further such thing and flesh out the more important areas and parts of the setting.


And of course, in your latest post, you have drained trees and plants of water. How did you just suddenly get rid of all water from the plants in the area? That seems far too tenuous a connection to 'wielding water' to my tastes to justify that action. And as such, that shouldn't have happened.


As an aside, generally, attacking people who are on friendly territory, is not a good idea. Nor is draining the water from plantlife, that is near a base of operations of the Faction you are supposed to be aligned with, when a fire is rising. As now, with that tenuous action, you have not only annoyed individuals, who most likely were associates of the Preppy Clique, but you have also made it so the fire will spread faster as it has nice kindling.


Not to mention the Groundskeeper is going to be royally upset.
 
I think she meant draining like in the avatar series, and was I okay? I did something similar I would like some criticism too.


 
Oh and how about, "I can get the hell outa here whenever I want, and live free in this country since no one here is prepared to handle me, but if you make it worth my time I might stay and help you out.... Kind of relationship" (B')


 
can some one explain the dice rolls rules here?
 
I'm sorry, really so sorry (シ_ _)シ


please forgive me @MechaGhoul , I had no idea, I mostly just do whatever comes to mind, I'm still kind of new and am not very accustomed with all the rules.


I am truly, asking for you forgiveness. (￣^￣ﾒ)＼(_ _ ;)
 
Well, just take a look at how the others have been posting. Look upon them as examples on what to do. Learn from the experience, and try to grow from it. Etc. etc.


Just try to not let it happen again, and so forth.


And course, list any other comments/questions/concerns/feedback etc. etc.
 
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