Holo
The local outcast.
But i'm posting in the third person so my characters don't have to know her. If I were posting in first person I would give a description.
Camp Half-Blood Redefined
- Thread starter RyanJXavier
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Dirtbear
Four Thousand Club
Meh, still lame sauce.
Holo
The local outcast.
Whatever. >.>
I'm not playing your reindeer games.
I'm not playing your reindeer games.
Dirtbear
Four Thousand Club
REINDEER!? WHERE! *searches for reindeer playing games* I hope I find Rudolph!
Holo
The local outcast.
xD
explosiveKitten
Fanfic Kitty
No man! All the other reindeer never let him play their reindeer games!
XxJuliaxX
The Seniorest Member
Writing in third person doesn't mean you can't describe further than your characters' actions and words 
It just means that you speak from a different perspective so that it's more consistent with the rest of the RP and people know whom you're talking about.
It just means that you speak from a different perspective so that it's more consistent with the rest of the RP and people know whom you're talking about.
Holo
The local outcast.
Julia thank you for politeness but I have enough trouble mentally trying to stretch posts as much as I do already and i've been tring to improve but frankly I still suck at it.
Which is probably why all my roleplays get views and not much else.
Which is probably why all my roleplays get views and not much else.
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XxJuliaxX
The Seniorest Member
You're definitely better than you were before! Just take the time to go over your post when you're done and add detail where you can. Find every opportunity to describe something or your character's thoughts. People are constantly thinking. Make your character who they are.
RyanJXavier
The Chosen One
ATTENTION Rainbowwave is not part of the rp
"I have to leave Camp Half-Blood Redefined. I will be busy for the next 2 weeks and i will not have much time to catch up and post and such."
-RainbowWave
"I have to leave Camp Half-Blood Redefined. I will be busy for the next 2 weeks and i will not have much time to catch up and post and such."
-RainbowWave
XxJuliaxX
The Seniorest Member
Aww. Ivan sounded helpful.
Holo
The local outcast.
I'm grabbing my very first post ever.
There it is ugly as ever. That was two years ago on christmas.holothewisewolf said:
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Brilliant. Post of the year.
10/10-IGN
10/10-IGN
Holo
The local outcast.
Still to this day I wonder why they didn't just kick me out?
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Because IGN gave you a good rating.
Holo
The local outcast.
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Nah, it was probably because they knew that everyone starts out sucking, and that people get better over time.
Holo
The local outcast.
That post was from 2 years ago.
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And your point is?...
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