BioGenesis: Surviving the Post Apocalypse

Whew, guys, sorry, I overslept. Yesterday was one helluva day!


@TheMadIceCreamMan although your post is really nice(loved it!), can you please make the next ones in third person? It's what everybody uses, more like an unspoken "norm". You don't need to fix the first one, just make the next ones third person, 'Kay?


@Princess Ktyria Sorry I didn't answer you earlier, I crashed out. As Mad said, it's whatever you want, no need to specify!


@Plushie Oh, thanks for the hints sensei! Really appreciate it!
 
Raizel said:
Whew, guys, sorry, I overslept. Yesterday was one helluva day!
@TheMadIceCreamMan although your post is really nice(loved it!), can you please make the next ones in third person? It's what everybody uses, more like an unspoken "norm". You don't need to fix the first one, just make the next ones third person, 'Kay?


@Princess Ktyria Sorry I didn't answer you earlier, I crashed out. As Mad said, it's whatever you want, no need to specify!


@Plushie Oh, thanks for the hints sensei! Really appreciate it!
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Okay! Thank you!


 
Also, I want to appologize before hand. My ideas and writing are quite scattered and don't flow very smoothly as most posts would.
 
[QUOTE="Princess Ktyria]Also, I want to appologize before hand. My ideas and writing are quite scattered and don't flow very smoothly as most posts would.

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If you want, you can send me a PM with your ideas, I would be more than happy to help you compile it!
 
Raizel said:
Whew, guys, sorry, I overslept. Yesterday was one helluva day!
@TheMadIceCreamMan although your post is really nice(loved it!), can you please make the next ones in third person? It's what everybody uses, more like an unspoken "norm". You don't need to fix the first one, just make the next ones third person, 'Kay?


@Princess Ktyria Sorry I didn't answer you earlier, I crashed out. As Mad said, it's whatever you want, no need to specify!


@Plushie Oh, thanks for the hints sensei! Really appreciate it!
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Sorry about that... this was my first time posting something like that on the site. I'll be sure to use 3rd person next time!
 
Hello everyone! Sorry, I overslept as well. Your posts all look great, and I agree about third person. I'm also willing to assist if anyone needs help brainstorming ideas.


I've been getting PMs about how long the posts need to be. I made a really long intro post to set the tone...so don't feel like all posts have to be that long. Even though this is a detailed RP, a standard post can be as small as a well-written paragraph.


Thanks all ^~^


 
Also, please try to put your character's dialogue and thoughts in a different color than the rest of your text. Make sure that color is separate from other character's dialogue colors to avoid confusion.
 
I appologize that it took me so long to type. I was out grocery shooping.


 
@Raizel Your people are inside, correct? I'm a bit lost, do you mind explaining possibly. I know @TheMadIceCreamMan 's character had alerted the infected, but where are they coming from and are they inside the place or outside? (I probably didn't thoroughly read which may be why it doesn't make sense.)
 
Princess Ktyria]I appologize that it took me so long to type. I was out grocery shooping. [DOUBLEPOST=1430009031 said:
@Raizel[/URL] Your people are inside, correct? I'm a bit lost, do you mind explaining possibly. I know @TheMadIceCreamMan 's character had alerted the infected, but where are they coming from and are they inside the place or outside? (I probably didn't thoroughly read which may be why it doesn't make sense.)
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The infected are inside and are moving to the front (in other words towards the group inside). Only four of us are outside at the moment including me.
 
I don't know what part said I was outside, Ten o'clock is the position of the infected relating to the point of view of Chris. He entered with Lena.
 
Raizel said:
I don't know what part said I was outside, Ten o'clock is the position of the infected relating to the point of view of Chris. He entered with Lena.
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Okay, I misread. I'll post up soon!
 
From reading everyone is inside bar four us who stayed outside. I was inside temporarily and attracted the infected. I went outside with the otthers three outside due to my character being a bit of coward.
 
Allow me to confirm something:


The floor plan is a follows; We have an outer gate. Inside of this area is a fairly large building. The building's internal floor plan has not become entirely too relevant. Mitch is outside of the gate. Sinikka, Carter, and Frank are in the enclosed area of the gate, but outside of the building, while Lena and Chris are inside of the building with two others. Lena, Chris and the two others went in to clear the place out. Sinikka was left outside of the building, but within the confines of the gate, to stand guard, Carter climbed the fence looking for the one who shot the flare. Sinikka and her talked briefly. Frank showed up and greeted Sinikka and Carter. Mitch had made his way inside and used a dog whistle to rile up the infected. Mitch then left the fray. Those who are inside are having a hell of a time trying to fend off infected persons. Carter ran inside to assist. Frank is bracing the gate.


Is this all correct?


Sorry, for some reason, somewhere, I got lost.
 
That map is quite good, but alas, it lacks the things I need to confirm: The questionable existence of a gate/fence as well as the positions of everyone.
 
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