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Fandom Attack On Titan: Remake

'Jesse would walk outside with his head slightly lifted up' the word would has no place in sentence, the correct way to write this sentence is: 'Jesse walked outside with his head slightly lifted up' as in using the past participle for walk.


I feel like a terrible person now
 
IG42 said:
'Jesse would walk outside with his head slightly lifted up' the word would has no place in sentence, the correct way to write this sentence is: 'Jesse walked outside with his head slightly lifted up' as in using the past participle for walk.
I feel like a terrible person now
Aaaah, I see. I didn't know how to exactly use the word 'would' and I guess I have been using it wrong.


Forgive me.


 
But 'would' can also be used in the past tense though? (Looked it up.)


However I did not know that it only indicated for the things that are almost impossible.
 
Yaaaay~


We dumb. ^^


 
@TheHarlequinnCat I have some questions with your history.


During the breakthrough of the Titans in Wall Maria her brother was in the Survey Corps and has survived.


Since then, she had been training with him and killing Titans.


However your character has already killed Titans the moment her brother got her in?


If that is so, she could not have sensed any Titans as she first has to go through training for a couple of years before she would even be send out behind the Walls.
 
Hail friends!


I'm going to read the in character thread to get a better feel for what's going on. However, I thought I'd stop by, say hi and ask if there's anything in particular I could do with my character sheet to help benefit the story's progression. I look forward to reading the story so far - hopefully there's a good spot I can fill to round things out. ^^
 
RedTimbre said:
Hail friends!
I'm going to read the in character thread to get a better feel for what's going on. However, I thought I'd stop by, say hi and ask if there's anything in particular I could do with my character sheet to help benefit the story's progression. I look forward to reading the story so far - hopefully there's a good spot I can fill to round things out. ^^
Hi~


*does the wave*


And yeah, it's maybe better to read the IC first, though nothing much has alreay happened... for now.


For the character, that's entirely up to you.


Let your imagination run loose and everything~
 
Groovy.


I don't know if I'd actually want to play one - but, how hard do you think it would be for a member of the Military Police Brigade to be interjected into the story with the other characters? So far the CS's look like everyone is mostly in the Survey Corps.
 
RedTimbre said:
Groovy.
I don't know if I'd actually want to play one - but, how hard do you think it would be for a member of the Military Police Brigade to be interjected into the story with the other characters? So far the CS's look like everyone is mostly in the Survey Corps.
Indeed, I have been thinking about that as well.


Maybe I should delete the Military Police and just keep the Garrison and Survey Corps instead.
 
It would pretty much be along the lines of playing a human villain since they're all a bunch of corrupt drunks. ;)


Which would be interesting, it just seems like it might be hard to place them in the action with everyone else.
 
RedTimbre said:
It would pretty much be along the lines of playing a human villain since they're all a bunch of corrupt drunks. ;)
Which would be interesting, it just seems like it might be hard to place them in the action with everyone else.
Mhm... Yes, that is going to be it, I'll be removing the Military Police from the group.


And for the Garrison, I will switch things up a little so the two groups will actually have to work together,


still figuring out how I am going to do that.
 
Marshmallow said:
I will switch things up a little so the two groups will actually have to work together,
still figuring out how I am going to do that.
That seems like it would come naturally if they break through Wall Maria, or if the Survey Corps engineers a plan to drive back the ones that are already infesting the outer wall. More warm bodies for the cause and all that.
 
RedTimbre said:
That seems like it would come naturally if they break through Wall Maria, or if the Survey Corps engineers a plan to drive back the ones that are already infesting the outer wall. More warm bodies for the cause and all that.
They've already broken through Wall Maria actually, I was going to let the story take place 5 years after that happening. They are now on the verge of breaking through Wall Rose. *chuckles*
 
@Marshmallow oh man I think I messed with my numbers. She was supposed to be reconnected with her brother/father years ago after her mother's death, and then immediately went into the Survey Corps training, and her kill count is high b/c she's been in for a couple years (possibly entered the corps underaged)
 
TheHarlequinnCat said:
@Marshmallow oh man I think I messed with my numbers. She was supposed to be reconnected with her brother/father years ago after her mother's death, and then immediately went into the Survey Corps training, and her kill count is high b/c she's been in for a couple years (possibly entered the corps underaged)
Ah, I see. So yeah, if you make the changes I'm going to look at it. ^^
 

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