Angkasa Soleil

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Angkasa Soleil

Introduction

"I can make the odds be ever in your favor"

Games the Character has been involved with

www.rpnation.com/threads/socal-upland-war.58448/


www.rpnation.com/threads/socal-upland-war.66080/

Basics

Name:

Angkasa Soleil

Age:

18

Race:

Human

Gender:

Female

Position:

Daughter of the owner of Sol Corporation, secretly Freedom Fighter

Height:

5'3" (160 cm)

Weight:

122 lbs

Body Type:

Ectomorph

• Appearance
• Personality
• History
• Power
• Equipment
• Other

• Appearance
  
  
  
  
  
  Angkasa is a young woman with rather ethereal appearance. Her face has a certain melancholic and delicate look to it, with eyes that are often described as sharp, icy blue. She has waist-length hair the color of pure white that makes her looks as if she just emerged from snow. Her hair color used to be black, but her family gene made it turn gray prematurely, and by the time she reached the age of 18 it had turned completely white.
  
  
  In a modern setting, her daily outfit consists of a long dark blue blouse, jeans, and sling bag. She often wears a hat or beanie to cover her hair, and sometimes she wears a scarf even if the day is warm.
  
  
  In a high fantasy setting she wears a blue dress with elaborate feather ornaments as shown in the picture . The huge clock that hangs on her waist is actually a bag which has been given a spell to make the inside bigger than the outside.
  
  
  
• Personality
  
  
  
  Angkasa is quiet and very observant of her surrounding, often observes things with intense stare that people find unnerving. Her upbringing made her always has a reserved attitude and deadpan expression on the outside. However, on the inside is a different case entirely, and a closer look would show that she has a quite expressive body language despite her flat facial expression. She often speaks in a formal language then abruptly switches to slang she finds interesting, and she could speak about an embarrassing or very weird topic with a completely straight face. Despite her serious manner, she has a mischievous, trollish tendencies of asking people the kind of question which can makes them really uncomfortable, just for the hell of it. Has a weird habit of flops to the nearest comfortable place for nap at any given chance.
  
  
  
• History
  
  
  
  Angkasa was born into Soleil family, the dominant owner of the industrial part of the town and-needless to say-have a powerful position upon the town they reside on. The Soleil are well-known for three things; their wealth, their influence, and hair that prematurely turned white at a very young age. Therefore it's not difficult to recognize Angkasa as one of the Soleil since her hair started turning white at the age of 12. However, the recent trends of teenagers bleaching their hair for 'a cool, silver hair look' makes it easier for her to blend in.
  
  
  Judging from where she come from, on the outside Angkasa may seems like a sheltered young lady, protected by her family's wealth and name. However, inside her ‘shelter’ is a case full of conspiracy and deceit so convoluted it had to be seen to be believed. The Soleil are one big, screwed up family who are always involved in both internal and external power struggle. Right now the family members who hold the most power are Angkasa's parents, and the others will make sure it won't stay that way for long.
  
  
  Due to this family situation she is familiar with all kind of political game and psychological warfare since a very young age. Since her family have made many enemies, things like attack or kidnapping attempt are common to family members, so since childhood she is also trained to protect herself. She learned how to handle guns, but her training is more focused in empty hand defense and escape technique, which lead to her lean and agile physique that helped her to run fast.
  
  
  One day, tired with her surrounding, she wandered to the less lavish part of the town and- to her surprise- she likes it. Maybe it's because of the relaxed atmosphere, or maybe because most people there are straightforward and didn't wear layers and layers of deception (perhaps one or two layers, but it's still good enough for her). Since then she leads some sort of double-life under the name ‘Asa’, made people she met there believe she is just a girl with ordinary background, even going so far as buying a home there (under alias of course). This led to her meeting with people from Freedom Fighter faction, a group of people who mainly just want to live in peace, but got stuck between the war of the Gang and the Police. Since she has seen a large part of Police Force to know how corrupt it is, and since she saw Mythril Gang as nothing more than a bunch of criminals, she saw the Freedom Fighter as the lesser of three evils and decided to join them.
  
  
  
• Power
  
  Tychokinesis a.k.a Probability Manipulation
  
  
  The user of this power is able to manipulates the probability of an event to happen, making unlikely things occur more often or instantly and preventing liable events from happening. They can cause and prevent both good and bad luck, sudden deaths, and sometimes natural disasters. Users can create a finite pocket of reality-disrupting quasi-psionic force, which upon reaching its intended target, causes disturbance in the molecular-level probability field surrounding the target. Thus, unlikely phenomena will occur. Among the many phenomena are: the sudden melting of gun barrels, the spontaneous combustion of any flammable object, the rapid rust or decay of various organic and inorganic materials, and so on. Source
  
  
  Drawback
  
  
  This ability requires high brainpower from the user, and the more unlikely the event they force to happen, the more energy they spend. It makes Angkasa more often than not mentally exhausted, thus her tendency to naps at random times. Depend on how complicated the event, the time required for the power to take effect vary from happen immediately to several minutes. This can be a disadvantage in a fight that require high speed.
  
  
  
• Equipment
  
  Due to the nature of Angkasa's ability, any mundane items can be used to her advantage as long as she can find a way to weaponized them. But for the real weapon, she has been given enough lesson by her father on how to handle revolver and other kind of handgun. She has good aim although not exceptional. While using gun, she seldom aims directly at her opponents. Instead, she will shoot in seemingly random direction that ends up triggering a series of unfortunate events, leading to her opponents' doom.
  
  
  Her other 'weapon' is her scarf. Unusually long and strong for a scarf, it has been used many times as a substitute for rope. The notable use is to throw it at her opponent and bind them in rodeo style. It's also able to hold her weigh as she jump from heights and bind it on a tree branch to slow down her fall. Other than that, it function as a normal scarf.
  
  
  
• Other
  
  Family
  
  
  • Father: Adalard Soleil
    
  • Mother: Semesta Soleil (formerly Semesta Kamila)
    
  • Older Brother: Surya Soleil
    
  
  
  Then of course, since Soleil is a big family, Angkasa is bound to have many aunts, uncles, cousins, and other distant relatives.
  
  
  Trivia
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  • Angkasa is of French-Malay descendant.
    
  • Despite being well-known, there are surprisingly little photos of Soleil family published in public media. Apparently you could also buy privacy if you're rich enough.
    
  • Since childhood Angkasa is often involved in mortal dangers that might or might not be man-made. And she survives them all. Fell from big cruiser to the deep ocean, car crashed into gasoline tanker truck, old building collapsed above her, she always get out unscathed from those accidents, thanks to her innate ability. People might said she is lucky, but is it really could be called lucky if those kind of accidents often happen to her?
    
  
  
  Other Information
  
  
  
  

  

  
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  Four years ago, her older brother fell into coma. The cause of it is unknown, but some rumors said it was caused by a failed suicide attempt. The others said it was a failed murder attempt. The official story told to the public is that it was an accident. Which one is true? Well, her brother is her father's successor and the heir to the company. Since his position put a lot of pressure on him and made him gained many rivals, any of the rumors above could potentially be true.
  
  
  

Theme Song

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[DamagedGlasses]

Appearance


Your description for the character is spot on. Very well done and closely following the frame that the picture provided, I do not have any doubts that you really saw this character wearing these things, and the amount of voice and detail in which you provided gives me, and any other person who reads, an adequate amount of knowledge to understand how they, themselves, should base their own In Character descriptions on. However, even though what you have is a great amount to go into a Roleplay with, and is formatted very well, I think it is missing a few things that could give it some more spice, and maybe make it easier for readers to gain interest. My suggestion? You use words such as "black" and "grey", and while there is certainly nothing wrong with these colors alone, it can make for a more interesting description if you build your vocabulary on words that describe and maybe use them, examples being "Slate" or maybe "Opaque".


Personality


I think you made a very enjoyable personality, one that I don't mind reading, however, I will say that there are more noticeable places that could be improved upon than the Appearance. While I see how she treats people, it kinds of lack how she feels about people. Don't get me wrong, they are very similar, but just because she is reserved and purposefully blunt, does not describe how she cares about people. Does she think of people in a lesser way due to how she was raised? Is she shy due to her lack of social interaction? In her history she has a rather secretive and conniving family, so what does that make her? The one that breaks the family mold, or fits it perfectly? Just a few questions to kick off how you think she sees people. Another thing is how she thinks of her loved ones. While she has a dangerous family, they are still family, and how she feels about them is still up in the air? How does she think of her parents? Her relatives? Nevertheless, for what you had in history, I think the personality fit, and I saw no misconstrued quirks that really gave the feel of "Unexplained".


History


The biggest thing I saw when reading the history, was that while it was rather well made and it had a good flow, it really didn't explain anything about what Angkasa went through, and seemingly focused on the family as a whole. Thats good for setting the scene of her childhood, but it barely went into how she felt, the things done explicitly to her, and otherwise, just what she went through as a member, and heir of a family this seemingly prone to backstabbing. You've done well with setting the scene for a great backstory, plowing the fields for your character to grow, and now all you need is to farm it and gather what you have grown. How was she affected by her surroundings? Was she an only child? Now, another thing was that most of the questions of her history that I have asked, is answered in the Other tab, the last one. That kind of important information could be placed in History, for it isn't just something that could be mentioned later, but crucial plot stuff that defines her childhood and growth.


Power & Equipment


I think the power was a good choice, and the way you put was formatted in a very understable way. You also gave reason in the drawbacks for the reason she takes naps, giving the rather odd and random quirk a reason to exist, which I do enjoy. I personally love the power, the way you have described it being utilized being very enjoyable and I love how you are able to seemingly use this usually abused power in a balanced way that makes it seem usable, and not purposefully nerfed. The equipment you have given your character is also very understandable, and the uses you have placed for her make the reason she has it very clear, so I did enjoy that section!


Overall


I did enjoy this Character sheet, and one of the biggest things on my mind is that I could ore suitably enjoy this character if I knew more about the character's world and how things going on outside of her family affect the way she feels about things. I, again, say that the Others tab is being slightly misused when being filled with such important information, but it is a minor thing that I am sure you will consider. Ultimately, you are the one who can decide to use my suggestions and ideas, maybe think over some of the food for thought that I have served up, and either way, I had a good time reading this CS. I wish you luck with future Characters, and I hope you are able to have a fun time with them!