Advent Online (Reboot)

@SilverAngel303


No disrespect bro, but when you post all clustered up like that, it makes your text look all condensed and disorganized.
 
No, length isn't the problem. You should make your one big paragraph into multiple ones so it's easier to read. 
For instance, I use multiple paragraphs when I post. Makes it prettier.
 
Braxnond said:
No, length isn't the problem. You should make your one big paragraph into multiple ones so it's easier to read.
Ah ok, I'll try that. Thanks for the advice.

Kinesthetics said:
Try splitting it up by idea or sequences.
KK, thanks for the help, I'm still not used to RP sites like this so I've still got alot to learn! xp 
Ok, I just edited it, is that better, or should I change it a bit more?
 
Braxnond said:
Looks much better dude. Thank you
No problem, thanks for the advice x3 
@Turtlyturt I am not trying to sound rude, but I am not sure if guns(besides the gun-blade unique skill) are in this reboot of SAO. If I am wrong then it be so, however I believe that when the creators of the reboot put in the description that Advent Online was a reboot game of the Sword Art Online VRMMO, it was talking about the game that the SAO anime's first arc was about. Again, I might be wrong but you should ask CelticHero37 or Braxnond, because they seem to be the main creators of the role-play (I know I'm forgetting other people, but they seem to be the heads of the body that created the role-play from my perspective, if you feel offended by this in anyway then I will edit this and apologize. )
 
@Turtlyturt


Well that is fine and all, but I was just stating that the role-play was about a game called Advent Online, a copy of SAO with some exceptions. The only mention of guns being in the game was the Unique Skill Gun-Blade, which your character doesn't have according to the sign-up post you made, which confused me because according to your first post in the role-play section in the inventory tab, you had 1x Assault Rifle, that being an item that was not in the game from what I knew, which is why I said if I was wrong, to correct me.
 
Geez I hate it when i'm not on for even one day... *sighs* might as well say i'm back again... hopefully i can reinsert myself... *looks dejected* sorry i disappeared...
 
Oh yeah i forgot to ask how are the vendors, shops, and markets set up price wise? And can my starting gear be rusty chain since i'm level one?
 
lol I'm online majority of the time, so I usually just listen to some music, continue working on a 2D RPG that is still in-progress, or watch anime while I am waiting for different people to come online and/or post :3
 
i'm just waiting on ether celtic accpeting my join request and reply or someone to organize the event and i'm hyped up on caffine and ready to rp :smiled:
 
Ah, well I am planning for my character to join in on the event, but I need it to flow with his current priorities and goals right now. He might even get matched up against your character, who knows ;)
 

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