Fantasy (ACCEPTING!) Welcome to the Funhouse

[Theflamre]

So any thing i should improve on I always like another point of view @BennyAxC @mewbot5408

 

[Bennie]

View on what? @Theflamre

 

[Theflamre]

Just what I'm doing iv had people give me helpful advice on rp before

 

[Bennie]

Well, actually you're doing great! We are both somewhat new members so I can't really give you any advice except to tell you, Don't be scared if a post is longer then yours but writing one liners is kinda(really) a bad idea In my opinion. Someone might have told you this before or not, but it's what someone else told me when I joined. @Theflamre

 

[Theflamre]

Well that's good to hear I will be on later because I was hiding from work and need to get back to it see ya

 

[Bennie]

See you!

 

[Theflamre]

ok I'm back @BennyAxC @mewbot5408

 

[Nonexisting]

ok I'm back @BennyAxC @mewbot5408

Um I noticed a two issues, 1: you need a weaknesses that can kill and harm your character because it makes him op which is a problem


Also 2: no killing my character, I didn't give you permission to do so...you can hurt him but don't actually freaking kill Felix OK?


Or do I have to make holly show up and command him to stop since that's interfering with his plans.....BTW if you don't know who holly is his bio is on the first page along with Felix's


@BennyAxC, I'm waiting on you before I post

 

[Bennie]

I fell alsleep... D: Im sorry Im writing my post right now.

 

[Theflamre]

Um I noticed a two issues, 1: you need a weaknesses that can kill and harm your character because it makes him op which is a problem
Also 2: no killing my character, I didn't give you permission to do so...you can hurt him but don't actually freaking kill Felix OK?


Or do I have to make holly show up and command him to stop since that's interfering with his plans.....BTW if you don't know who holly is his bio is on the first page along with Felix's


@BennyAxC, I'm waiting on you before I post

first of all no he won't kill you second yea you do have a point I need to add that in though I kind of thought the whole if you beat the trials he can't touch you thing was good mixed with the unless you touch him he can't touch you thing was ok

 

[Nonexisting]

first of all no he won't kill you second yea you do have a point I need to add that in though I kind of thought the whole if you beat the trials he can't touch you thing was good mixed with the unless you touch him he can't touch you thing was ok

Yeah but he needs a weakness humans and other demons can use against him it's impossible to fight a demon with no tangible weaknesses

 

[Theflamre]

ok I edited is that good? I said he can die if he gets a cross to the eye

 

[Theflamre]

like a wooden one not like some guys fingers

 

[Gizaira]

I probably have to read through all 17 pages. Don't I?

 

[Bennie]

If you want! Or I can summerize?

 

[Gizaira]

I summary would be preferred and I thank you. But a little reading never killed anyone.

 

[Bennie]

Alright so Index, Alez, and anastas were the first three to enter when the rp started. They are immediately met with Emily, Jace, and Zane. Stuff happens that separates the three. Indez and Alez are hiding, and Anastas meets Felix. Then Jace comes in and he fights with Felix. Anastas is injured and see's Alez's body, he thinks she's dead now. Anastas and Felix run into a room and patch themselves up. Index finds a way to escape but Jace catches him and they fight. Taylor comes along, and she and Jace end up having this Stockholm relationship. Zanelle and Zaydar team up to use the human's trust. Index and Alez reunite. Chris comes in now he's in a team with Anastas and Felix. Stuff happens and felix is crying in the hallway, anastas gets captured by Holly, and chris patches up Felix. anastas escapes, reunites with chris and felix. Then Adacher comes in.


@Kira Times

 

[Bennie]

Reading 18 pages will probably help you understand the characters better though. The summary is just there if you want to read that instead @Kira Times

 

[Theflamre]

when you see someone fell for the whole "THEN STRIKE ME COWERED" thing seriously when I saw that he punched the ghost this is what ran through my mind


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[Gizaira]

Thank you again. I will probably end up reading through it but I just want a quick summary right now.

 

[Cherrywitch]

I don't know what happened with the people who were with Index and Emily before my break, so I assume they're open...? (No? Yes? Maybe?)


I assume they are, so, anyone open wanna talk to them? ^^

 

[Bennie]

Samuel is with them I believe! @Cherrywitch

 

[Gizaira]

I'm still trying to think about what my characters Luna and Tommy would be doing. I need help.

 

[Cherrywitch]

@BennyAxC yeah, I thought so too, but I'm not reading through seven pages to try and find a post... *laziness mode: activate*


@Kira Times well, demons are basically hunting down the humans who are hiding and humans are... Hiding. You can sort of form their personalities and types around that?

 

[Gizaira]

Makes sense. Well Tommy is going to be hiding and Luna will wander in search of a 'gaming buddy'.