A Mistake at a Glance

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic teleported away and ahead of him again. She trotted on singing softly to herself smiling and finished her snack. (Haha feel the pain dream!)

 

[GreenBirdie]

Dream shrugged, and went back on his way to see Maelstrom. He kncoked on the door, and heard Maelstrom whimper. Oh, great...


(Denied!)

 

[twilight sparkle]

(Damn you!)


Angelic trotted into her room and laid down after locking her door. She closed her eyes and smiled falling asleep. Angelic was able to close off her heart for the first time! And it felt.. Good.

 

[GreenBirdie]

(For the first time in forever!)


Maelstrom slowly opened the door, revealing his room.


Nearly everything was destroyed.


"Colt, I tell you to practice your control over dark magic, and the first thing you do? Destroy everything. Wow." He said, and Maelstrom lowered his head. Then Dream started laughing. Luna did that to him. "Oh stallion, you are a funny colt. Let's find somepony to fix this room, huh? For now, ask the Princess if you can study in her room, and have her help you. I don't want you alone in my room, that's for sure!"


Maelstrom on his way to her room with the tray of cookies and two glasses of milk, Sayer began asking the guards if they had any talent in repairing. Maelstrom knocked on Angelic's room.


(Haha, I just noticed, my previous comment has somepony 'coked on the door'!)

 

[twilight sparkle]

(Lol)


Angelic slept on a magical shield over her room sound proofing it and keeping everyone out. She curled up hugging komo close to her and yami slept along side her.

 

[GreenBirdie]

"Oh, come on! BURN IN TARTURUS!" He shouted, shooting several beams at the shield. "WHY CAN'T ANYTHING GO RIGHT ANYMORE!" He shouted, tears welling in his eyes.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic slept on and snuggled under her cover more. She mumbled some song lyrics in her sleep curling up to get closer to her pets.

 

[GreenBirdie]

As Maelstrom felt his stress leave him in the form of tears, he screamed with rage, a magic surge exploding. A magic surge was when the pony was connected fully to Equis' magic, causing any rune in existence to pop into the pony's head, the horn becoming numb so it could take in an extreme amount of magic, and forcing them to activate it. A dark magic rune entered his head, and he felt enraged. He felt something pop into him. He was much stronger, he felt it, and much more energetic.


His hooves smashed and slammed into the shield, causing small spiderweb cracks to appear. They quickly became bigger, and bigger, and bigger...

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic's ears twitched and perked up. She sat up and rubbed her eyes getting up. Angelic out on her glasses and opened the door with a sigh."I told you guys I wanted to be left alo...maelstrom what's wrong?"

 

[GreenBirdie]

An ancient rune of dark magic was the rune in his head, called augment. It was very well-named: His chocolate colored fur showed new muscles that weren't there, his height was increased, and his general size was increased. His dark red mane became much longer, previously barely a shortly-cut hair style, now his mane reached the bottom of his neck, and in the front, barely covered a small portion of his eyes. He looked attractive while in this savage form.


He was panting, his muscles shaking, and his eyes narrowed. His jaw was clenched shut, and as he saw Angelic, his height suddenly at her level, his naturally blue eyes flared red. "AND YOU!" He shouted, leaning forward and forcing her to lean back.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic squeaked and scrambled back. She fell and looked up at him a scared."w-what's wrong?!" (She's not a pedo!)

 

[GreenBirdie]

(The point was to make it seem like he only looked like Maelstrom because of the similar colors, not to reveal any pedo feelings!)


"YOU WHINED AND COMPLAINED JUST BECAUSE: WHAT. A DREAM?! SOME RANDOM THING!? I BUCKING TELL YOU HIS FEELINGS, AND YOU SHRUG IT OFF IN FAVOR TO FEEL BAD ABOUT YOURSELF AND MAKE OTHERS FEEL HORRIBLE! I BUCKING SPENT THIRTY MINUTES WHICH COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER SPENT LEARNING, CRYING AND WRECKING MY OWN ROOM! DREAM IS SERIOUSLY GOING AROUND, TRYING HIS HARDEST TO FIND SOMEPONY TO FIX IT, AND HAS TO PAY OUT OF HIS OWN POCKET!" He shouted, pushing her back and forcing her back.


"ALL YOU'RE DOING IS JUST CAUSING PROBLEMS!"

 

[twilight sparkle]

(Kay!)


Angelic teared up and tears went down her cheeks."I-I'm not causing problems..." She said her back against the wall. Her wings wrapped around her and her ears flattened as she got terrified. Angelic looked at her hooves trembling and covered her ears.

 

[GreenBirdie]

"OH, YOU'RE NOT?! SO, THIS TO YOU ISN'T A PROBLEM?! I'VE BEEN USING DARK MAGIC, MY OWN BODY IS IN SO MUCH PAIN YET I DON'T WANT TO STOP! DREAM HIMSELF HAD TO GO INTO HIS ROOM TO THINK, YOU CRIED ALMOST THE WHOLE DAY, AND YOU ONLY WANTED TO DO ONE THING: BE WITH DREAM! AFTER YOUR COMPLETE WEAKNESS TO TALK TO HIM, YOU CRIED AND CRIED, PROBABLY WANTING OTHERS TO FEEL BAD FOR YOU!"


In front of her eyes, his muscles were still expanding, his neck growing longer, his fur becoming slightly darker, and his height grow a few inches taller than her.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic coward and she trembled. She started to hyperventilate her eyes widening. Angelic covered her ears and closed her eyes shaking violently starting to reach the point of flight or fight. She bit her lip and said"shut up! Just shut up! You be nothing of what I've felt and you probably won't! But I am done with dream! Done! He is nothing but an old memory in the back of my mind now! Hic why won't you two just leave me be?.."

 

[GreenBirdie]

"LEAVE YOU BE?! DON'T YOU REMEMBER WHO DECIDED TO TEACH ME WITH DREAM'S HELP?! AND ALL YOU'VE DONE IS CRY AND COMPLAIN! HE HELPED YOU, HE'S COMPLETELY OBLIVIOUS, AND YOU SEEM TO BELIEVE HE HATES YOU! IF HE'S NOTHING BUT AN OLD MEMORY, THAN WHY DO YOU STILL FEEL BAD! I CAN SEE THROUGH YOUR LIES: YOU'RE IN DENIAL!"

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic closed her eyes tight and blasted him with her magic."SHUT UP! RIGHT NOW! HIC! SHUT UP!" She shouted at him taking shaky breaths her wings open and she looked up shaking. "JUST SHUT UP!"

 

[GreenBirdie]

The blast of magic was much more powerful than she believed, as her emotions weren't in check, so her power ranged. He was blasted into the wall right outside the door, and it left a mark in the wall, his imprint there. His head hung for a moment... before his body shook uncontrollably. He fell off the wall, and within a second dashed in the room, slamming her into the ground. He shouted at her, his body still shaking, and his hoof slowly went to her chest.


She then realized what it looked like: something in control, and he was trying to stop it. But it was a losing battle. He slowly began pushing her chest with a hoof, and she began to feel her ribs bend ever so slightly.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic whimpered and her horn glowed. She coughed and gasped her eyes wide. Yami barked and tackled maelstrom biting into his side. Angelic was in so much pain she couldn't move. She struggled to breath and coughed.

 

[GreenBirdie]

Maelstrom's heartbeat was going extremely fast. Adrenaline was rushing through his body, much more than he could possibly create by himself. So, when he was bit, the blood literally shot out of his body. He was, however, unwavering. The blood shot into the dog's mouth, surprising it, causing it to let go. The blood squirted out every few seconds. His hoof was pressed harder and harder everytime it squirted. "Your lies... They're horrible! WE'RE HORRIBLE PONIES!" He said.


Maelstrom coughed, a splat of blood dribbling down his chin. "ADMIT IT! ADMIT THAT YOU ACTUALLY DO HAVE FEELINGS!"

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic coughed gasping. She closed her eyes and a tear slid down her cheek. Angelic's eyes snapped open and she blasted him off her once more. She struggled to stand and wobbled some. Yami whined and coughed up the blood shaking his head.

 

[GreenBirdie]

Maelstrom coughed out more blood, it being a bit more than small. Regardless, he still staggered to his hooves and rushed back into the room. He jumped back on Angelic, forcing her down, anger still on his face. Dream slid outside of the room, then galloped in and pounced on Maelstrom, forcing him off Angelic. "Maelstrom! Stop!" Maelstrom punched Sayer on his muzzle, his head turning, and the pain shot through him. He winced, then punched Maelstrom several times, hard, in the chest.


Maelstrom didn't flinch. He lifted his hoof, cocked it back and-


He gasped. Maelstrom's head thudded on the ground, his eyes glazed over, anger gone from his face. There was only fear, and pain.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic coughed limping over to maelstrom healing him. She was in a lot of pain but didn't show it as she healed dream next. Then she trotted out staggering some as she went to her study writing a letter to Luna, celestia and twilight before collapsing.

 

[GreenBirdie]

You can't properly heal the dead. Under him, Sayer could feel that Maelstrom's heart had stopped. The effects were simply too much on his heart, and it stopped. "Oh, buck!" Sayer quickly got off him. "Clear!" He casted a lightning spell on Maelstrom, and then began chest compressions.

 

[twilight sparkle]

Angelic gasped coughing and the princesses were on their way to the castle. The three landed and galloped in worried. They followed the smell of blood and gasped shocked at the scene before them."dream what happened?!" Twilight said.