Venom Adhamm
No one is ever going to want me
Post your characters here and I'll accept or decline them. If you're accepted, check the main thread for your starting post.
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@Kairikudo
Declined. Firstly, you need to use the CS provided to you in the main thread. You may add some categories if you feel necessary, but you must use all of what's in the original CS.
Second, there aren't any knights in Restora, because this is a modern fantasy.
Third, although "sword magic" technically exists, it's never referred to as such. It's just recognized as sword skills with vaguely magic or superhuman attributes.
Fourth, you can't start with actual armor. I allowed it for the previous applicant because he described it as being poor quality.
Fifth, you can't start with potions and elixirs.
Sixth, and perhaps most importantly, your character is very cliche. Tell me if you've heard this before: Girl's parents die, she gets sent to an abusive place, she makes a friend with a symbolic name, they leave abusive place, friend dies, girl is upset.
This formula is in a lot fiction, and it's bland these days. Furthermore, your character seems like a bit of a Mary Sue since she's "quiet wise" while only being in her twenties, and her only weakness is her being stubborn.