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Fantasy ;☆

TheHappyPikachu said:
xD Don't worry I got a good idea!~ (My characters are always based on a song and I found one. :3 I couldn't find one that quite fit her before~ (I chose 'Imagination Forest' if ya' interested~ xD )
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Oh, I love that song!
 
So, I'm sure a lot of you are wondering if you're accepted. As a lot of character sheets are still WIPS, I'm going to wait a while to start accepting until majority are finished. :)
 
Vague said:
So, I'm sure a lot of you are wondering if you're accepted. As a lot of character sheets are still WIPS, I'm going to wait a while to start accepting until majority are finished. :)
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I'll have mine finished in about an hour. xD Also, my characters backstory is going to a big part of her character development, I'll do the paragraph, but can I make it a tad 'vague?'
 
TheHappyPikachu said:
I'll have mine finished in about an hour. xD Also, my characters backstory is going to a big part of her character development, I'll do the paragraph, but can I make it a tad 'vague?'
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Ignoring the pun >->...I don't mind at all. It's always great finding out more about a character as the roleplay goes on.
 
Vague said:
Ignoring the pun >->...I don't mind at all. It's always great finding out more about a character as the roleplay goes on.
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xD Thanks!~ yeah, it also has a lot to do with her particular 'wish' so I'm gonna avoid site a bit from that time~ xD "^w^
 
I have edited the first post, however, keep in mind this is NOT the starter and we are not starting yet. It's more of a prologue.
 
@Vague just curious, but do you have a time in mind when you'd like things to begin? I'm still in the extremely early stages of my CS, so I'm wondering so I know how much urgency I should put into finishing it since I can be kinda slow with finishing these things at times.
 
cojemo said:
@Vague just curious, but do you have a time in mind when you'd like things to begin? I'm still in the extremely early stages of my CS, so I'm wondering so I know how much urgency I should put into finishing it since I can be kinda slow with finishing these things at times.
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I'm aiming for sometime next week.
 
Idea said:
I am not found of the backstory and advise you to change it, though either way, character approved! Excellent work with the wish there!
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If you're that bothered by it, I'm willing to change it, but what exactly do you dislike about it? I realize that it's cliché, but is that the only problem or is it things like the urgency of the wish? O.o
 
Nano said:
If you're that bothered by it, I'm willing to change it, but what exactly do you dislike about it? I realize that it's cliché, but is that the only problem or is it things like the urgency of the wish? O.o
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the cliché part is true, but on the brother side you handled it pretty well, I believe. My problem is the dead parents: It wasn´t just cliché but completely and utterly pointless. Except for the parts directly pertaining to it, nothing on your character would need any changing by removing that. Being unnecessary, being cliché and making the character less likely, it is something I would remove.
 
Nano said:
I hate to argue, but I'd like to make a point that I never saw the death of my character's parents as something that was completely and utterly pointless. Chitose's parents dying was something that I used to achieve several things in her backstory. First was the especially close relationship between her and her brother. In a sense, she has a bit of a dependency on Seha. Should Seha have died while she still had proper parenting, she would have been distraught, but I didn't feel like there would be that same desperation of "if he doesn't survive, then I, myself, shall die as well." The issue with an especially close relationship comes up again for homeschooling. Should she have had parents, going to as a child school would have been absolutely no problem. Going to school would have exposed her to a lot more people around her age. Chitose isn't exactly a loner, so she definitely would have had friends. These friends and her parents (should they have been alive) would have provided a sense of comfort and security. It isn't that Chitose would not have cared any less about her brother if she had living parents, but, as I stated previously, the same amount of desperation would not have been there.
Think of it this way: If you fall from a certain height onto concrete, you break your tailbone. However, if you fall from that same height but onto a pillow/cushioned landing, you don't break your tailbone.


Edit: Basically, changing that particular aspect of the backstory will force me to change the backstory as a whole as well as the wish and several other details.
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Hmm...I do see your point in the school part. The close relationship could be done with or without parents, and there are other ways of getting the school part, but the death of the parents does make some sense with it, so I guess you changed my mind.
 
So here is an interesting wish to make a twist for. How do you twist the wish to become a magical girl? The exact words are "I wish for the power to protect my friend." but in essence she wished for a power that she was already guaranteed to get.
 
[QUOTE="Ian Temero]So here is an interesting wish to make a twist for. How do you twist the wish to become a magical girl? The exact words are "I wish for the power to protect my friend." but in essence she wished for a power that she was already guaranteed to get.

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the twist is that she is no longer able to hold back. whereas others would try to run, prioritize other things, anything, she will automatically go to the scene even if she doesn´t want to and will fight until she can´t move. This gets worse the more battles she looses.
 
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Idea said:
the twist is that she is no longer able to hold back. whereas others would try to run, prioritize other things, anything, she will automatically go to the scene even if she doesn´t want to and will fight until she can´t move. This gets worse the more battles she looses.
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Compulsory fighting? That seems a little extreme compared to the other girls twists. And it doesn't exactly mesh well with what I have envisioned for her combat wise.


Any other ideas? Maybe boosted power under very specific conditions?
 
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[QUOTE="Ian Temero]Compulsory fighting? That seems a little extreme compared to the other girls twists. And it doesn't exactly mesh well with what I have envisioned for her combat wise.
Any other ideas? Maybe boosted power under very specific conditions?

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that would actually go against the point. The twist is supposed to be something negative, the catch that prevents the wish from being fully fulfilled.


Hmmm....maybe she will experience any engatove emotion her friends feel, pain included?
 
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Idea said:
that would actually go against the point. The twist is supposed to be something negative, the catch that prevents the wish from being fully fulfilled.
Hmmm....maybe she will experience any engatove emotion her friends feel, pain included?
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Oooh! I like that one!
 
Wait....what would have happened if a girl's wish was something like "world domination?" xD
 
I'm editing mine to finish now!~ please tell me how I did once finished Idea-Senpai!!!!~ :3
 
Nano said:
Wait....what would have happened if a girl's wish was something like "world domination?" xD
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She gets a miniature earth ty and a certificate of domination. 0-0 xD Jk I dunno bout' what would happen in that situation~ "^w^
 
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