Would it be ok if I make this post long enough to have a reaction to anything that happened up to now, and use the last paragraph for my action at the moment? I don't want to overlook anything or anyone.
A lot was going on all at the same time, and Anahi felt her mind retracting to the deepest parts of her subconscious as everyone talked, and played, and looked at each other with a mix of interest and waryness.
She hadn't gotten the urge to speak at all from the moment she arrived to the Scrap...
Anahi wasn't one to rush over to meet absolute strangers out in the open for such a sketchy job offer. She figured that if anyone else was crazy enough to also show up here, they would hide and bide their time until the right moment came, just like she had been doing. Of course, she didn't count...
Name: Anahi
Age: 23
Sex: Female
Former Faction: Symrustar
Appearance/Extra Details: A tall, slim and athletic young woman with tanned skin and long, straight, black hair, usually kept in a braid. She wears comfortable clothes, usually black or green, or a combination of both. A hood is...
I agree with @ithinkcat
It's clear you have a vision for this, and that's what makes me want to join. I'd like to follow your story with enough autonomy of our own to make our characters ours.