Thank you for your critique and I'll keep it in mind when revising my sheet. it also gives me some insight on things I could generally improve, like details or reasoning in certain things. overall, thank you!
Name: Script
Occupation: Retired(Or Fired) Local Detective
Gender: Male
Species:Undefined, but doesn't really matter to him, as he has really nothing other than his appearance selerating him from a human,leading to a minor self-loathing to stir in him
Clothing: Formal :Rather Wrinkled but...
I will be continuing my other rps, so if you are currently in an one on one rp with me that is separate don't worry.)
Sorry if my desc. is a bit short, but, as the title suggests, the setting and plot will be created later.
I'll be using Marmalade from my bookmark.
Rping in separate websites...
I'll be using my oc, Script(desc will be in my profile status).
Rules:
No Godmodding
Make an effort to be grammatically correct
NSFW isnt allowed
No Trolls
I'm a bit new to this site, so if my rules seem out of place that is why.