Thomas Lin, Central Headquarters
The man sighed as he walked down the hallway. 'Ten letter synonym for Torrent'. It was hard enough not being told to deliver papers to someone- who as far as Thomas was concerned, didn't need them- while not having finished his puzzle yet. He moved onto the...
The po-po can come get me if they think I'm doing shady things on property I don't own. It's not really my country, but I find it funny to make jokes about the cops coming to get you if you wait outside of a store for a friend.
The reason I said that character seemed like the protagonist is simply because they are forced into hardship. Unless you're gonna just pull a Birdman on me, and constantly shift angles, then I don't think as a book, it'll be easy to tell who the protagonist.
Sorry if I came off as harsh or...
Now I'm no expert on books - and admitadly, I don't read enough of them -, but this story confused me in some intriguing ways.
Initially the prologue thrusts you into this dystopian world with casual remarks about a disembodied head, and that all just went right past me. Sometimes this...
So I haven't carefully read every other reply so sorry if this sounds and appears uncannily similar to yours.
So first let's give the characters names.
The Kid = David
The Sister = Elise
The Cousin = Adam
David borrows $50 from Elise and $50 from Adam. From this, I can confidently say...
Now The Kid sees somethin' stranger still; his mind races.
Did anyone else survive?
Sure enough, he finds another. He finds me.
This is the time I'll take the meet you. It will be a pleasure.