thanks for the response: Yeah, more people commented on that...sad news is that she didnt win in a contest with it and she kinda felt sad because of it :/
But anyway, I appreciate your response :)
Thanks Mana, I think we will solve that my dA's anatomy tutorials and perspective...hopefully that will help :)
And a thanks for that, you can see some other work of hers in the dA gallery over here
ah nothing much...I just wanted to ask how it's with feedback on arts and stuff around here, and already found out :P I might be coming more often... :D
SO my gf has been drawing some LoL oriented drawings lately, but she is not getting much feedback as deviantArt is swarmed with those...Any luck here? :D
My real life has to be rushed...I got in dangerous situations by rethinking things instead of doing them right away :P ....OR I think too slowly.
That being said, you are right, when I finish another chapter I am going from start again rewriting things again and again :P
Also thanks :)
Thanks for the input.
About the tense problem: I kinda decided to not having present tense in scenes which aren't supposed to be all clear for the characters, therefore the past tense (notice how mostly only Larraine's parts are in past tense) .
And yes, I rush things....and now that you...