Shining Lotus Sage
Avatar of Vanity
Sweet Rest Hilltop
The sun rises over one of millions of hamlets where its worship is expressly forbidden.
Smoke no longer rises over the same town, but the air for ten miles in any direction still smells of it so strongly it forms a flavor on the tongue. Under the smoke, where you'd expect to find flowers and algae and musk and all the scents of the living jungle surrounding this village, there is nothing. It isn't overpowered, it isn't ruined. It's absent, as though the breath of the land coughed once on its pipe and hasn't inhaled again since. The birds have stopped singing, but they haven't left. The high branches are full of them, silently flitting through their birdish days and nights. Down ground level, things are a little less weird. Rain passed through not long ago, and the road is still sucking mud, but that's half the year, here in the far southwest. As long as you keep walking south, further from real civilization, you'd never notice a thing wrong.
But try turning around.
Try it.
Walk for an hour. A day. Go north and north as the sun goes west and west and marks off the end of another chance to flee. Then look back to where your footsteps turned around, not fifty yards back. Now do you understand? There's something down here that won't let you leave. The birds don't seem to be troubled by it, as they pass every which way overhead. And maybe it's just the road. Maybe the jungle isn't a greedy throat swallowing travelers inevitably toward its far end, because the jungle is endless. But when you squint into the shadows, and the waving canopy creates them in abundance, the shadows plainly squint back, eyes or no. That is no safe place, says the monkey bit of any sound brain. That is where the Predator lives, ready to pounce on you. Or wrap you in its coils. Or sting you, tiny and inconsequential and perfectly deadly. The road is a throat, but the jungle is all mouth, and the teeth drip with—
But this is lurid, and unnecessary. The sun is rising. For now, it's easy to ignore the shadows. It's easy to walk on, heedless and proud, toward Sunlight Rain. It's easy to never notice how hard it is to choose anything else.
It's not easy to get into town, though. The palisade, however rough-hewn and inexpert, surrounds the scorched hill completely. At the end of the road, where the buildings used to be—there are still holes where the timbers of house-stilts were uprooted—only one small, stone structure remains, wisps of smoke rising from its chimney, but not from over the town. Sunlight Rain has moved to higher ground, and the guards are not keen on newcomers.
The sun rises over one of millions of hamlets where its worship is expressly forbidden.
Smoke no longer rises over the same town, but the air for ten miles in any direction still smells of it so strongly it forms a flavor on the tongue. Under the smoke, where you'd expect to find flowers and algae and musk and all the scents of the living jungle surrounding this village, there is nothing. It isn't overpowered, it isn't ruined. It's absent, as though the breath of the land coughed once on its pipe and hasn't inhaled again since. The birds have stopped singing, but they haven't left. The high branches are full of them, silently flitting through their birdish days and nights. Down ground level, things are a little less weird. Rain passed through not long ago, and the road is still sucking mud, but that's half the year, here in the far southwest. As long as you keep walking south, further from real civilization, you'd never notice a thing wrong.
But try turning around.
Try it.
Walk for an hour. A day. Go north and north as the sun goes west and west and marks off the end of another chance to flee. Then look back to where your footsteps turned around, not fifty yards back. Now do you understand? There's something down here that won't let you leave. The birds don't seem to be troubled by it, as they pass every which way overhead. And maybe it's just the road. Maybe the jungle isn't a greedy throat swallowing travelers inevitably toward its far end, because the jungle is endless. But when you squint into the shadows, and the waving canopy creates them in abundance, the shadows plainly squint back, eyes or no. That is no safe place, says the monkey bit of any sound brain. That is where the Predator lives, ready to pounce on you. Or wrap you in its coils. Or sting you, tiny and inconsequential and perfectly deadly. The road is a throat, but the jungle is all mouth, and the teeth drip with—
But this is lurid, and unnecessary. The sun is rising. For now, it's easy to ignore the shadows. It's easy to walk on, heedless and proud, toward Sunlight Rain. It's easy to never notice how hard it is to choose anything else.
It's not easy to get into town, though. The palisade, however rough-hewn and inexpert, surrounds the scorched hill completely. At the end of the road, where the buildings used to be—there are still holes where the timbers of house-stilts were uprooted—only one small, stone structure remains, wisps of smoke rising from its chimney, but not from over the town. Sunlight Rain has moved to higher ground, and the guards are not keen on newcomers.
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