Coldcomfort
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I hope this is permitted, but thought I'd seek feedback for various facets of my characters on the rpg called World of Warcraft. I'm not averse to constructive criticism. Even if all you have are insults, I'm generally thick-skinned. Thank you in advance
In some cases, the names might be redacted, to protect the illusion of anonymity. In some cases, the name may be part of what needs critiquing. Here goes.
Name: Gnomentus Planarspan
Species: Gnome
Class: Warlock (Lawyer to the Damned)
Full Titles: <Advocate of the Damned; Specializing in Wrongful Damnation, Faustian Bargain Disputes, and Demonic Contracts. Also a notary public.>
Short Biography: He was an ordinary Engineering Malpractice lawyer before taking on the wrong client. One signature landed himself in service to a demon lord, while a great deal of power was conferred on his 'client' in exchange for the soul.
Through a bit of brilliant liturgy (Being sorta vague here until I get a clue), he was able to finagle his way out of that situation, and soon found himself becoming an advocate for the damned. He was able to acrue a good amount of power this way, binding demons to one-sided contracts that allowed him control over the spheres of affliction and destruction.
However, one of the terms of his escape from the demon lord's sway was to pledge a soul to him at least once per year, so in his practice, he has a 95.25% success rate of getting out of Faustian Bargains or reclaiming lost souls.
In some cases, the names might be redacted, to protect the illusion of anonymity. In some cases, the name may be part of what needs critiquing. Here goes.
Name: Gnomentus Planarspan
Species: Gnome
Class: Warlock (Lawyer to the Damned)
Full Titles: <Advocate of the Damned; Specializing in Wrongful Damnation, Faustian Bargain Disputes, and Demonic Contracts. Also a notary public.>
Short Biography: He was an ordinary Engineering Malpractice lawyer before taking on the wrong client. One signature landed himself in service to a demon lord, while a great deal of power was conferred on his 'client' in exchange for the soul.
Through a bit of brilliant liturgy (Being sorta vague here until I get a clue), he was able to finagle his way out of that situation, and soon found himself becoming an advocate for the damned. He was able to acrue a good amount of power this way, binding demons to one-sided contracts that allowed him control over the spheres of affliction and destruction.
However, one of the terms of his escape from the demon lord's sway was to pledge a soul to him at least once per year, so in his practice, he has a 95.25% success rate of getting out of Faustian Bargains or reclaiming lost souls.
