Treacherous Waters (Beta Role Play)

[RobinDenstro]

Treacherous Waters

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It is the year 781, in the Age of Prosperity. In such a time as this, small factions don't exist. Only large and powerful nations have any say in this galaxy. The most powerful being the "Galactic Union." A vast and powerful nation, set on laws and morals that put them above the rest. With their control over the galaxy, thousands of patrols and law-officials now scatter throughout space, and collect on various planets; enforcing laws whom many find unfair.


Many other federations, however, have a lot less power and control over the various planets. Desperate for power, they turn to crime, against the will of the sovereign Union. Various leaders and nobles of such nations hire thugs, criminals, smugglers, and thieves to assist their cause.


You, a team of such criminals, are tasked with bringing very important cargo across the galaxy by the "Enox Syndicate". What this cargo is, you don't know. However, you do know that you will be paid a very handsome sum of credits for taking it secretly from point A to B.


But be wary. Every other passenger of this vessel are also criminals, each with their own goals and interests. Each member of this brigade of thugs have a bounty on their heads, and a rather shady history. Do not underestimate them.


Character Creation:


Unlike other Sci-Fi role-plays, the only race you can choose is human. However, there are an assortment of other options and details about your character.





Infamy: Choose one (or more) of the five factions listed below as factions that have a bounty on your head. In the role-play, you will want to stay as far away from members of this faction as possible, or you endanger both yourself and the members of the crew (note, all players are faction-less, and are working for the Enox Syndicate).


- Galactic Union (Most powerful federation of the galaxy; many find their laws and consequences very unfair, and many of their planets face minor riots and overpopulation)


- Iron Brigade (A small nation, fighting the Galactic Union however they can)


- Pirates of the Outer Reach (A distinguished army of pirates who lives in several vast ships and vessels rather than on planets; their tactic is to over-power and board other ships, and steal what they will)


- White Knights (Believe themselves to be truly lawful, but hardly follow the law at all. Justify any crime they make by stating "It's for the greater good")


- The Del'nari (A faction of humans living near the Outer Reach of the galaxy, believing themselves to be of higher intelligence then the rest of the galaxy)


Crime: Simply write down any crime(s) your character has committed. The higher the quantity and quality of crimes, the more respect you have from enemy criminals; but the more hated you are by the other factions (character must at least have one crime).





Sentiment: Everyone has a story to tell. And with that, everyone also has a soft spot. Write down a small bit of your character's history that makes them human; something that keeps them up at night (such as the death of a loved one, their devotion to curing a loved one, their pain or depression from their life/childhood, and so forth).


Rules:





1) No Godmodding! (Please, don't do anything that your character wouldn't realistically be able to do. This is Sci-Fi, surely, but they're still just human)


2) Ask permission before you kill another player. (You're a criminal. I understand if you want to kill another criminal. However, before you shoot him in the brain, you have to ask the permission of both me and the other player)


3) Please, no one-liners. This role-play has a two paragraph minimum.


4) Romance, violence, and language are all allowed. Just, please, keep it tame. Nothing more than PG-13.


5) No running with scissors! (The first person to run with scissors in the role-play gets a cookie)


My Character:


Name: Dorian Valkor


Age: 27


Gender: Male


Infamy: White Knights


Crime: Two accounts of murder, and many notions of being a spy


Sentiment: Born to a poor family, he was the only one able to really support and raise his younger sister. Later, she was taken by the White Knights. Though Dorian has little idea as to where she may be in this vast galaxy, he intends to find her.


Appearance:

Personality: Usually rather laid back, taking a rather careless persona. However, as soon as someone mentions either family (of any kind) or the White Knights, he becomes maliciously serious; down-right cold, even.


History: Born to a small family on a small moon harboring a planet inhabited by the notorious guild of White Knights, he spent most of his days seeking credits to support his hopeless family. Though his father had a job, he spent it almost always primarily on alcohol, and his mother spent most of her days simply moping from self-inflicted depression. Doing everything he could to support his younger sister, he did as many odd jobs as he could; but it never seemed to be enough.


At the age of 17, a member of the White Knights arrived at their door step, seeking recruits for their "noble" cause. Dorian was completely uninterested, until he heard the pay that would be involved. Hopeful and excited, he joined the faction right then and there, and was taken from the small moon to the adjacent planet; Jalkrov.


With the other recruits, he trained for three years, becoming one of many soldiers for this guild of self-proclaimed knights. The pay was good, and in time, he became a full-fledged knight himself. However, as the years passed, he himself found that the work they were doing was lawless; stealing, pillaging, slaughtering of innocents; all things that he found were not very knightly.


In time, he decided it would be best to take a break, and head back to his home for a while. They allowed it, and he boarded a military ship with other soldiers. However, upon returning to the small, vastly inhabited moon orbiting Jalkrov, he only found that it was being besieged by the Galactic Union. As soon as the ship landed, he fled to his home. But he was too late. It was destroyed, in a mass of fire, with a sobbing girl kneeling beside it. His sister, Aldora.


Running to her, he was stopped by five White Knights; allies of his, who had accompanied him on the vessel back to the moon. They were taking Aldora away, to an evacuation vessel. They were going to bring her to a "safe zone," which he already knew would be overpopulated and a horrible place to live. He tried to run past those stopping him, but they were too vigorous. Adrenaline pumping, he drew his knife, stabbing and fatally wounding one of the knights grabbing him.


Freeing his other arm, he ran to the others, wishing only to free her. Again, however, he was grabbed; now not as a friend, but as a criminal. Dragged away by one, he did everything he could to free himself. And that, he did; stabbing this knight as well, killing him. But by the time he tried to go back to his sister, it was already to late. Through her cries of fear, she was taken onto the vessel with the mass of others, guarded by several dozen soldiers. He knew it was too much.


Heading away, toward the city, he would become something he wished not to be. A criminal, riding alongside criminals, doing anything he could to free his sister. To bring her out of this world of madness.


Weapon: A knife: the same knife, in fact, that he used to kill the two knights those few years ago. Along with this, he always keeps a recently acquired blaster at his side, in case of any fire-fights that might unfold.


(Note: Dorian will be rather passive in the Role Play, as much of the Role Play has to do with your actions as a character. In most cases, I will also describe most circumstances, keeping the game rolling and what-not. Dorian will, in most cases, take the back-seat in this adventure, if not help to at least push it along from time to time)


Ship Specifications:

Name - Elision


Serial Number - ZK-14


Class - Enox Syndicate Light Army Carrier


Specifications;


Two Mounted Guns


One-Center Mounted Blaster, 360 degree turn radius, fires 12 light-ray streaks per second (6 per barrel)


One-Right Mounted Blaster (in case of strafing), 180 degree turn radius, fires 16 light-ray streaks per second (8 per barrel)


Interior -

Bay Holds 8 Passengers


Flying Requires 1 Pilot, and (though not necessary) 1 Navigator


Pilot of this Vessel - Chuck Kalrayus

Age: 21


Gender: Male


Summary: A young pilot, surely, though the only one suitable for a job such as this. Good enough to navigate while he flies, but this sometimes causes minor... accidents in flight. Though he usually has a very jovial and lighthearted demeanor, this can commonly be seen as disrespectful.

 

[Lunar-dweller]

Name: Alice Dyriian


Age:23


Gender: Female


Infamy: Galactic Union


Crime: Two murders, assault, and a few counts of theft


Sentiment: She is incredibly sensitive about her mental state. She also frequently has nightmares of the past.


Appearance:


Personality: Alice is very cautious and does her best to keep a safe distance. She doesn't want to slip up again.


History: Alice was born into a poor family with far too many children. Her parents were rarely home, both working ill-paying dead end jobs. She and her siblings grew used to being hungry and having to take care of themselves as best they could. Her oldest brother began working at 12, and died in a mining incident four years later. At that point, her twin sisters, Hia and Gwelyn, were both working, as was her older brother.


Alice(13) and her younger brother, Barumin, were the only ones left at home; they seldom saw their other family members. Three years passed, and Barumin became gravely ill. With little money and no way to be cared for, he died within a year. During this period, Alice's sanity began to crumble. Watching her brother fade and having no one to support her was too much.


Her unfortunate parents came home soon after and she killed them with one of the few knives they had in the kitchen. She left quickly(after collecting all the pointy objects she could find) and promptly attacked one of the officers from the Galactic Union. Due to her small size and inexperiece, she did little more than a few minor cuts. She then fled, living in isolation for the next two years. Her sanity began to slowly return and she spent the next three years trying to keep her "other self" under wraps. Despite her efforts to change, she has no way of making an honest living with her reputation.


Weapon: A small collection of assorted knives, most stolen.

 

[Karma200]

Name: Kitty Foster


Age: 24


Gender: Female


Infamy: White Knights, The Del'nari


Crime: murder of 4 men, destroying an entire building


Sentiment: Kitty and her parents had never been rich, when she was 17 years old her parents were murdered, she found them in the kitchen when she got home.


Personality: She definitely has a mean streak in her but if you gain her respect then she'll be a loyal friend to the end; she's been betrayed before so she's a bit wary about who she trusts. Kitty tends to take naps a lot but when she has time she works out on endless hours, even when she's about to pass out.


History:


Kitty and her family had to work hard for their money and that meant selling vegetables, handmade clothes, sheep & other livestock. Her father thought it necessary so he worked harder in order to pay for someone who was willing to teach her how to fight and defend herself. One night she was delivering a heard of sheep to someone in the village they lived in but when she got back home she found her parents dead and bloody all over the kitchen floor, the man who was responsible was already to far away for Kitty to catch him but she caught a glimpse of his face. Revenge is what she's looking for (still hasn't caught the killer)


Appearance:

Weapon: She has two twin katanas with her all the times (she's skilled in sniper-rifles as well but she hasn't bought one)


Other: She has a tattoo on her right leg, its a dragon.

 

[RobinDenstro]

@ Amber Nightshade


Great character! I did enjoy the character's history, along with what you chose for her Sentiment. Very creative! However, I do believe you forgot to add weapons to your character sheet, along with the fact that she seemed to so easily be able to kill not only her parents, but three different officers of the Galactic Union without any detail as to how (note, clearly your character was rather young when she did this, and had absolutely no experience with killing. This, I would constitute to be godmodding, I'm afraid. I apologize for that).


@LonaLove20


I did enjoy the take your character has in the world, and that you chose to have two different factions with a bounty on your head rather than one. But I do want you to be a bit more concise with your character's history. It's a bit jumbled up, and relatively short. Since I do want the posts for this Role Play to be at a two paragraph minimum, and also rather literate, I do wish for you to take that into consideration. And, though you don't have to change this, I find it a bit odd that your character has both twin-katanas and a silver sniper-rifle (both of each I assume she has expertise with).

 

[Karma200]

@ Amber Nightshade
Great character! I did enjoy the character's history, along with what you chose for her Sentiment. Very creative! However, I do believe you forgot to add weapons to your character sheet, along with the fact that she seemed to so easily be able to kill not only her parents, but three different officers of the Galactic Union without any detail as to how (note, clearly your character was rather young when she did this, and had absolutely no experience with killing. This, I would constitute to be godmodding, I'm afraid. I apologize for that).


@LonaLove20


I did enjoy the take your character has in the world, and that you chose to have two different factions with a bounty on your head rather than one. But I do want you to be a bit more concise with your character's history. It's a bit jumbled up, and relatively short. Since I do want the posts for this Role Play to be at a two paragraph minimum, and also rather literate, I do wish for you to take that into consideration. And, though you don't have to change this, I find it a bit odd that your character has both twin-katanas and a silver sniper-rifle (both of each I assume she has expertise with).

Sorry about my history thing, I had edited my thing and moved what i had put on the sentiment down to history because I realized that it belonged in the history part, I haven't reviewed the history but I'll change it. I don't mind writing at least 2 paragraphs; I'll change the weapons

 

[RobinDenstro]

@LonaLove20


Ah, thank you! That's all that I needed changed. I can't wait to get this Role Play started!

 

[Karma200]

Are we starting right now or waiting for more people?

 

[RobinDenstro]

We're going to be waiting for more people, surely. I imagine we will start the Role Play before the week is out. 
@LonaLove20


Um, I don't see what you did to your history. It's still rather hard to read, and doesn't make too much sense altogether. And for the weapons, it appears that you've added a new one, rather than eliminating one. I apologize for being a stickler, but I do wish to accept people that are willing to really write out concise and well-described posts. If you can prove to me that you can, I'll surely accept you on the spot.

 

[Karma200]

Aw, so I can't join? I just changed my thing again

 

[Verrici]

Name: Vi Korick


Age: 17


Gender: Female


Infamy:The Del'nari


Crime: Murdering one of the high councilmen of the Del'nari for a pricey reward. Her present was the final piece of blue diamond, which generates power for her mecha fist.


Sentiment: By killing a member of the high council, she was easily target as the most wanted by the Del'nari. This made her life miserable, running from everyone, even the one she somehow fell in love with. Another member of the Foundation. Who died, saving her life.


Appearance:

Personality:


Her age radiates her spunk, allowing her to punch her way through situations, literally. She loves to sneak into bars, just to get into fights.


She is a woman who loves to punch first, then ask questions. Vi doesn't take no for an answer, and will make you tell any information that she wants.


History:


Living on the streets, she grew up as a fighter. Nothing would mess with her, and no one would make eye contact, she was the baddest of the bad. She was a part of the Foundation. A small group of bandits that used machines to do what they want. Each member had a signature item, of course. They would need to make it first. So that's why Vi would deal with people, steal, and deceive. She would grow up to the age of six-teen, till she needed only one item left. The Mecha gauntlet. Her signature item.


The blue diamond is a powerful gem. It is a legendary item, bending fire by will, hardening metal, allowing gears to move with such force, yet not allowing them to break. The gem radiates with such a power, that it is a accessory, used by only high figures. No one like Vi's class could get it. Until she heard of an offer which would allow her to get it. But she would have to kill a high member of the Del'nari, one who opposed shipment between the planets, this made clientele angry. because the best way to get illegal items, was hiding them in cargo, among the scraps. But there was a catch, she had to make it look like an accident.


With a secure, fail proof plan, she dove in to the acres of lush gardens, which were also heavily guarded. She was able to get to the roof of the building, after a few short hours. She was on time, not a moment to spare. She grabbed her torch. She melted the small iron bar, which held up a great amount of the ceiling. Within moments the glass walls fell and only hit the councilman of choice. With luck, she was able to get out of there.


Weeks passed and she perfected the use of her weapon. But there was rumors on how she got the gem, and a spy inside the Foundation, that Vi trusted, leaked information. She was wanted. And she had to run. Leaving the streets she loved to terrorize, the people she loved to scare. Even the one, she loved. A boy who went by Jayce. They grew up together, and would share many memories. Many nights they would stare at the other worlds, wondering what they were like. And because of her. The Foundation fell apart, and everyone was captured. Except her, she was able to escape, due to Jayce buying her time to flee. He distracted the Galactic Union when they raided the old building. With a struggle, Jayce convinced Vi to flee. But Vi does not know if Jayce is dead. . . or something worse than that.


Weapon: Giant mecha gauntlet. She only has one, which lies on her right hand. It is mostly powered by the blue diamond, which allows the joints to move with ease, and the imperial iron, to break bones with ease.

 

[BlueWolfGirl22]

Name: Kyra Clouse Age: 27 Gender: Female


Infamy: Pirates of the Outer Reach


Crime: Accused of adultery and a traitor to her people


Sentiment: Kyra has a soft spot for young girls who are bullyed


Appearance:

Personality: Cold, as the steel she carries by her side at any point of the day.


History: Kyra's family was poor. for generations they had known this life. Luckily the past 3 generations had been a slave family to a wealthy and fair family who treated them like family. There youngest daughter look just like kyra in every way except a scar kyra had on the inside of her wrist. One day her twin of the rich family wanted to sneak of to see a boy she had been dating for a short time now. She had asked kyra to stay in her room tonight and take her place. Kyra worriedly accepted knowing this was not the boy that her friend had been dating but figured it was over since he was an abusive man.


Late that night a knock came to the window of this cage, as it felt to kyra, so she just sank lower into bed hoping who ever it was would leave. In walked a lean man, he stood at the foot of the bed, with a evil smile he grabed his manly pride with a moan, thinking how much he would enjoy this. He ripped off the blanket and quickly climbed on top of Kyra covering her mouth. As she tried to remove his hand he noticed her wrist mark and his smile got even bigger.


"Oh this is to good. Normally i had to worry your little friend would tell on me for my nightly visits. i hoped i just scared her enough not to tell, But you, you cant say a word. If people found out you took the place of a noble" he gave a low chuckle "they would have your head."


As soon as he left again kyra began to cry, she curled up into a helpless ball and cried Thinking back she hates her self for crying and not doing something... but she wasn't as cold then.


When her friend finally returned home before dawn kyra slapped her and ran out of the room crying silently. Kyra sharply woke up to being dragged out of her bed and into the town center. The man had told on her and said she had seduced him, him, a married man of all people. She was sentenced to death.


Sitting alone and cold in the jail awaiting her hanging her twin friend walked into the room. she said nothing for the longest time, so full of guilt she holds kyra close when uses the guard keys to take kyras locks for herself. Her friend smiled as she showed her wrist, she had burned a mark in just like kyra's. "please go... i owe you this much." her friend instructed the guard to take kyra far away from here...


Weapon: Medium length broad sword with a curve at the end. and a small dagger


((will this work or do i need to Change anything? >.>))

 

[Amber Nightshade]

Name: Rowan Briar


Age: 23


Infamy: Galactic Union, Pirates of the Outer Reach, White Knights, Del'nari


Crime: Charged for killing many of the Union enforcements, fooling around with pirates, stealing from the councilmen of the Del'nari, taking off with a hover craft, and supposed murder of 9 exes... which was actually true..


Sentiment: Supposedly known as a rebel, her family were never given enough pay, her life was given by crumbs and bargains that were never payed. Her mother was killed by the Galactic Union and her father, well is clearly a bum living off of whiskey.


Appearance:


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Personality: There is no time for chit chat with Rowan, it's either your in or your out and then your most likely dead. Her age gives her more of a personality since all she does is walk up to a man, pretend to be interested, and then watch him die slowly, just for fun. Agony is her favorite word.


History:


Rowan was a trouble maker to begin with. The only person she would talk to was her friend Tania. Tania was the girl next door, fooling around with everyone, making gossip, stirring up fights, getting into trouble, and that's what made Rowan click into what she is now.


Her parents weren't rich, actually they were e complete opposite and then ten times worse, they paid for everything with crumbs, pants buttons, liquor and even bargained with others even if they didn't have the money. When she was 17 her mother was taken by the Galactic Union and was put to death for unknown reasons, her father became a bum at the bar and she went along with Tania everywhere.


After 4 years of fooling around, getting arrested, getting into fights and other sorts of things, Tania died from an accident between her, Rowan, two swords and one giant block of gold. So you get the picture. Rowan didn't regret what had happened, if anything she still enjoyed watching her friend die. For reasons unknown, Rowan used the block of gold for something, but she never told a soul.


Now Rowan is more mischievous as ever, at the peak of her personality, she thrives towards the ship of criminals, waiting for the climax of her entire life ahead of her.


Weapon: Anything and everything she can grab or see. She's also a great thinker, she will make powerful weapons with anything and everything. Don't forget her seducing skills.

 

[Verrici]

I have made one, but I am wondering if you are still accepting.

 

[RobinDenstro]

@ Amber Nightshade and @Karma200


You both have very interesting characters, and are, at this point, Accepted. However, I do hope that you are both aware about the "no godmodding" rule set into place. Please, if you're going to harm anyone, be sure to explain how you do it, rather than simply writing "I stabbed them, and they died."


I'm not saying you will, but please consider it. I want detail. Detail is key, okay?


@BlueWolfGirl22


Awesome character. Accepted all the way.


@Amber Nightshade

Once she made a weapon out of a toothpick, a nail, a finger, some gum, and some random powdery substance and killed multiple people. Don't forget her seducing skills.

Realistically speaking, one individual is your equal. Any single enemy you encounter, given that they have some sort of fighting skill, should be able to match your capabilities. Please, no godmodding.


@Verrici


Blargh. Just Blargh.





Your concept is interesting! But ridiculously overpowered. Your writing is very good! But your character is so cliche. I really, really want you in my role-play! But your character is just too... blargh.





I'm sorry. I do really want to accept you into the role-play, but the fact that your character is just so over-powered (A literal "Giant mecha fist" that's powered by a blue diamond, which can easily break bones, melt iron bars, and more, is a bit overpowered, I'm afraid). I can accept you having a weapon that's a bit unorthodox, but I can't give you something this powerful. I'm sorry.


And yes, I'm still accepting. I'll probably stop accepting when we get around 4 players or so, at this point (possibly more, based on how many people want in).

 

[Karma200]

@ Amber Nightshade and @Karma200
You both have very interesting characters, and are, at this point, Accepted. However, I do hope that you are both aware about the "no godmodding" rule set into place. Please, if you're going to harm anyone, be sure to explain how you do it, rather than simply writing "I stabbed them, and they died."


I'm not saying you will, but please consider it. I want detail. Detail is key, okay?


@BlueWolfGirl22


Awesome character. Accepted all the way.


@Amber Nightshade


Realistically speaking, one individual is your equal. Any single enemy you encounter, given that they have some sort of fighting skill, should be able to match your capabilities. Please, no godmodding.


@Verrici


Blargh. Just Blargh.





Your concept is interesting! But ridiculously overpowered. Your writing is very good! But your character is so cliche. I really, really want you in my role-play! But your character is just too... blargh.





I'm sorry. I do really want to accept you into the role-play, but the fact that your character is just so over-powered (A literal "Giant mecha fist" that's powered by a blue diamond, which can easily break bones, melt iron bars, and more, is a bit overpowered, I'm afraid). I can accept you having a weapon that's a bit unorthodox, but I can't give you something this powerful. I'm sorry.


And yes, I'm still accepting. I'll probably stop accepting when we get around 4 players or so, at this point (possibly more, based on how many people want in).

I write my own stories so if I'm not detailed then... well something must be wrong with me. I'm not an over detailed type of person but if you want me to, I'll try

 

[Verrici]

Sorry, I didn't explain the mecha gauntlet that well. I was going to send you something to where you could take the diamond away form me, and I would have to learn to use it without limitless power. I didn't want to carry it around. Sorry, I forgot to clarify many things. I just wanted Vi to be a bad ass girl who gets shown up by everyone on the crew. She would think she is so amazing but compared to everyone else, she is nothing. I would want her to either lose the diamond, or have a captain take it away from her. Sorry it seems like it is over powered, but I forgot to say how those were all rumors about the diamond. And that Vi got a fake gem. I am so sorry xD  
And I kinda wanted her to be this cliché character, she would fall flat, and she wouldn't be interesting. And I would have her change through out the story to become someone new.

 

[Amber Nightshade]

((I've changed it for you, really it's not entirely godmodding, but that's ok she Rowan still sounds pretty cool. :wink)

 

[RobinDenstro]

@Karma200


Awesome! In that case, I look forward to having you in the role-play! Thank you for being very professional about things. You don't know how many people will simply sit and argue with me about the smallest details.


@Verrici


Based on everything you just explained, you're definitely Accepted. Welcome to the Role Play!


@Amber Nightshade


I felt it a bit overpowered that she could simply kill multiple people with simple, everyday type items. You are Accepted, but please, don't kill a bunch of enemies in a single post. Maybe one per post, two maybe, and please, keep it detailed enough to really explain how you did. I want this to be at least somewhat realistic.


And with that, the Sign-Up is now Closed! Feel free to post in the Role Play now! I'm very excited for how this is going to roll!


(Note, you should be boarding the ship, or at least somewhere around it. I imagine it will be leaving somewhat shortly. The entire crew is simply made up of you, the players. The ship itself is only armed with two guns, which must be manually operated in a fire-fight. A full description of the vessel will be added to the front page


Oh, and there's Chuck. Chuck is the pilot. You will probably be meeting him shortly. )

 

[Amber Nightshade]

(( ok I'm basically a newbie so do I jut explain what Rowan does?))

 

[BlueWolfGirl22]

Im SO happy you like it lol. i used to SUCK at making characters so its nice to know I've improved. my question is i found this awesome real life weapon ((and i secretly want it irl >.> shhhh secret...)) and wanted to know if i could use it. its basically a arm blade but the handle has a pistol on it. the pistol would be more of a pirate gun for this RP of course but would this be ok?

 
My next question ((sorry for double post)) where are we all meeting? like do we start with us all on one ship? or getting onto one ship? ANNNNNNNNNND can my character have fox ears and tail? or just ears. or do you want this a realistic rp?

 

[RobinDenstro]

@Amber Nightshade


Yes, you right down (a minimum of two paragraphs) per post about what your character does. Specifically, at this point, whether or not she's entering the vessel, and what she sees. Oh, and if you can, please write in past-tense, third/second person.


Good: "Josh walked down to the store. He liked it there. It was nice."


Bad: "I walk down to the store. I like it there. It's nice."


@BlueWolfGirl22


Blah, sure. You can have the pistol-sword. But don't overuse it, okay?


And the Role Play starts with everyone boarding the vessel, which I just gave better detail to in the description of the first post. Please look into that if you haven't.


And... *cringe* No, you may not have fox ears and a tail. I'm trying to make this as realistic as possible.

 

[BlueWolfGirl22]

the gun will be hard to reload to make it more balanced and lol ok no animal-ness xD again thank you very much for letting me join! ^^

 

[Amber Nightshade]

((I'll help start this thing going.))

Rowan watched the ship as it docked, all she thought of was her past coming back into the present. "Oh well.." she huffed under her breath. She started walking up to the entrance gate and saw a guard standing stiff and tall, all she did was smirk and was shoved in there by the other guard that was behind her. The bay was big, but she's seen bigger, she walked up to the middle and started turning slowly to get a full panorama of the ship. She looked down to the floor and still saw her hands cuffed for "precautions", precaution her butt, maybe if she could try hard enough, she could get out of this joint, but that wouldn't happen, the ship might be packed with secret weapons and other crap she wanted no part of. She would just have to endure.

 

[RobinDenstro]

@Amber Nightshade


Good post! I really liked the detail you put into it. However, this being the Sign-Up area, it's the wrong place to put it.


If you could, copy/paste your post, and put it here; http://rpnation.com/index.php?threads/treacherous-waters.14296/


I'm sorry for the confusion! I know it's your first time.

 

[BlueWolfGirl22]

im afraid i might mess up so i will post in the IC but if i need to fix it please let me know what is wrong