Fantasy The Tattoo (Redone) CS

[RoyalPhoenix32]

不明な雄大な勇気

Unknown Majestic Courage

IC || OOC || CS

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name:
Nicknames:
Gender:
Date of Birth:
Age (Cannot be lower than 17 and nor older than 40):
Sexuality:
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters:
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.:
Build:
Eye color:
Hair color/style:
Picture (realistic or drawn):
Personality:
Tattoo's Power:
Origins (History/Bio):
Other:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Medical Issue/Quirk:


Alright! Let's get this rp on the road but first some lay down on how much info I'd like to have. Personality is a good 4-8 sentences. History/Bio can be filled out, If you so choose to do so. Some things can be kept blank, if you want to flush out your character later on in the rp, but fill them in as we move along with the rp. No first come first serve. 1-2 people per power. If we have a small group, 1 person per power. If larger, than 2 per power. Shadow is a bit like in Naruto but not like it. You'll have to use your own shadow or another's shadow but no fancy awesome powers of manipulating the shadows just yet. Shadow can be used to look ahead to a good 200-250 yards away, depends on concentration, or form claws from inside a sleeve/anything that is long sleeved. The claws aren't lethal but they can leave good gouges in wood or soft metals and can leave a trace.

Coded By || StoneWolf18

Deadline: 1-2 weeks

 

[Honeyed Tea]

►βasic ɨnformation
Character's Name: Taliah Hext
Nicknames:
Gender: Female
Age (Cannot be lower than 17): 23
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 163 cm/5'4"
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 56.7 kg/125 lbs
Build: Slightly thin, although not immediately noticeable
Eye color: brown
Hair color/style: dark brown, unkempt style, always kept in a ponytail
Picture (realistic or drawn):

Spoiler: Appearance

Personality: Taliah is rather introverted, relying on her closest friends to actually go places a majority of the time. Even then, she stays latched onto them no matter where they bring her. She's a terrible problem solver, as well as being indifferent to most subjects, be it political or recreational. When she's not being dragged out to some meet-up at a cafe or restaurant, she's almost always at home reading whatever books she can get her hands on, from short novels to epics.
Tattoo's Power: Ice kanji: Taliah is able to form small blades of ice, generally 3-4 inches long, which are currently very brittle, but don't melt unless in direct contact with fire. She's realized they're meant to be thrown, but has no skill in throwing blades.
Origins (History/Bio): Taliah Hext has lived a quite unstable life, being born into a family who is always moving around. At first, it was simply a move or two around the city, but it grew to a move across the country, twice, during her middle and high school years. It was during this time when Taliah became less of an outgoing person and retreated into an antisocial lifestyle. Her parents, of course, tried "fixing" this multiple times, to no avail. Being an only child, she didn't even get much interaction inside of the house, either. She eventually made a few friends in her senior year of high school, who practically became her only connection to the outside world after she graduated, other than her (not very noteworthy) job.
Likes: Books, being alone, trying out new foods, superhero movies
Dislikes: The entire mystery genre, crowded places, loud people, puzzles
Medical Issue/Quirk: Has a very hard time denying people of what they want​

 

[RoyalPhoenix32]

Ori Himegami​

"Wisdom"

►βasic ɨnformation

Age: 27

Nicknames: Hime, Ori of the blind forest (video game) or just plain Ori

Gender: Female

Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

Relationship: Single

"Virtue"

Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 5'5", 1.651 m
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 198 lbs, 89.8 kg

Build: Athletic, but lithe
Eye color: Hetero chromatic eyes; left eye is color of Scottish heather while the other is a silver white.
Hair color/style: Her hair is color of flames and is quite long so she has part of it in a top not with an oriental ribbon while the rest hangs to her back. She also has a gold butterfly ornament on the right side of her hair.

Casual outfit(s): (#3 on the first and will wear most of the rp) (more will come in)

"Honor"

Tattoo's Power:
The kanji Ori got was fire. She can only bring a finger tall fireball in her hand but it can only be used to light things. Her offensive skills aren't very impressive as well, too much concentration on trying to make the fireball bigger can cause her to dizzy or even faint.

"Origin"

Personality:
Ori Himegami is one person that you would like as a friend. She isn't afraid to tell those bigger than her to shove off and is quite blunt about it but she isn't one for long periods of talking either. If it cannot be said within a short period of time, then its worthless to persist. She may come off as a super friendly and hyper but she's down to earth person that has spats of temper and being a slight air head.

Origins (History/Bio):
-will fill out during rp-
Medical Issue/Quirk/Other:
Ori tends to wear things many would consider cosplay but she says they're comfy clothes she made herself. She also a clothing designer that got her designs from various games and anime but she mixes them together to get comfy clothes. Has to wear glasses from time to time

Code by @Starfish

 

[Shadow Alpha]

Cyra
►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name: Cyra
Nicknames: Cy
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: March 24
Age: 22
Sexuality: Bisexual
Appearance:

• HEIGHT • : 5'4" feet/1.66 meters
• WEIGHT •: 118 lbs./53.5 kg
Build: Slim yet athletic and toned
Eye color: A light mix of blues and violet
Hair color/style: Naturally blonde, currently dyed pink. Is constant bedhead so it tends to stick up every direction it possibly can. She can't even recall a time when her hair was completely straight and not a hot mess.
Personality:
Cyra has always been a pretty impulsive person that likes to act first and worry about the consequences later. She lives by the motto that you have to enjoy everyday doing whatever makes you happy. She's usually bright and friendly when interacting with anyone even if they happen to be complete strangers. Most found her a little weird and off-putting by how she clearly spoke her mind and kept eye contact when speaking. Cyra is blunt without the intention of causing harm or coming off as mean but she's just being honest
Tattoo's Power:
Can currently send small jolts from her fingertips and low voltage in water,
Origins
History/Bio:
Cyra was and has always been a wildly active child no matter what she was doing. Due to her family being pretty secure financially so she had grown up carefree but she never boasted or bragged about her background. She made friends easily and was never known to be shy. Cyra had a few reckless tendencies and had always been an adrenaline junkie which explains all her piercings that she got as soon as she could. Once she turned 21, she had begun to work as a bartender which worked in her favor since she was easily approachable and a little bit of a flirt at times. Cyra had been eager to get her first tattoo once she felt it was time for it so she went in there with no idea of what she wanted but knew that it had to describe her as a person. As she sat in the parlor and flipped through a strange tattoo book, an electric blue Japanese kanji that meant lightning seemed to call out to her so she went with it. Cyra had it done in the same electric blue ink with little sparks coming off of it and had placed on the right side of her neck which most people would call 'daring' just like her.
Other:
Has her tongue pierced, 2 piercings on her right ear, left ear industrial piercing
Likes:
Tattoos, animals, drinking, stuffed animals, stormy weather, naps, the cold, fruit, adventure, sweets, snakes
Dislikes:
Extremely humid weather, judgmental people, being woken up, bees, praying mantis, the color yellow.
Medical Issue/Quirk:
She has pretty bad vision to the point that she would be considered legally blind without the aid of her glasses or contacts.

 

[The Ascended]

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name:
Sarah Hylia
Nicknames:
Hyli
Gender:
Female
Date of Birth:
January 1
Age:
22
Sexuality:
Bi-curious
Appearance:

• HEIGHT • Feet and meters:
5’9/1.753 meters
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.:
150lbs/68.03kg
Build:
Athletic
Eye color:
Greyish Blue
Hair color/style:
Sarah’s hairstyle has her bangs always covering most of her right eye and has kept it like this sense she was 7. The rest of her hair is kept cut above her shoulders to keep her hair out of the way.
Personality:
Sarah is the type of person to pummel first and ask question she later. She usually has the air of a child wandering around and being sneaky and selfish like one to. But on the off times when she is fighting the smirk that’s plastered to her face 24/7 grows really ominous to the ones that it’s projected to. She also usually charges head into things with barely any plan if it has to do with fighting.
Tattoo's Power:
Shadow Kanji- at the moment Sarah can only scout at most 250meters around her and can form flickering claws around her hand that can gouge wood and soft metal.
Origins (History/Bio):
Sarah grew up in a rather good family, nice and friendly parents, nice clothes, warm meals. But she was a troubled child that fought people easily usually getting into fights with the neighborhood boys and sending them home crying, which her parents scolded her about and always reprimanded her saying she need to be more lady like.

During her high school life Sarah had a bad reputation of fighting and butting heads with anyone and everyone that tried to mess with her or her tiny tiny friend group she had. Out side of school and in a fight club she went to she earned the nickname of “Demon in the ring” since every fight she went into she went into the ring with a plastered smirk and came out with a plastered smirk and money.

After she was done with high school she stocked with the fight club polishing her fighting and hanging with friends. When one day one of her friends took her to a tattoo parlor to get a tattoo with her, so she decided to get a plain looking black one with a little purple mixed in on top of her right breast that said ‘Shadow’ in Kanji, little did she know that this little tatto changes her life.
Other:
Has a blue earring on her right ear, has a loose chocked on, always swears a big winter jacket, and has fake demon horns.
Likes:
Fighting, simplicity, cold, rain, cigarettes, tattoos, sweets, coffee, and tennis shoes
Dislikes:
Fancy things, complicated things, bitter food, any shoes other than tennis shoes, being called a chump, getting shit talked period.
Medical Issue/Quirk:
Sarah has a bit of MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder) there is her personality that like to fight, her personality that hates everything, and her normal personality that shows most of the time.​

 

[eyflfla]

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name: Anthony
Nicknames: Ant
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Sexuality: Hetero
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 6' 0"
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 230
Build: Hefty, Some strength, a lot of pudge
Eye color: brow
Hair color/style: curly
Picture (realistic):
Personality: When you first meet him he can be rather passive, almost guarded. He suffered a lot of jerks in high school and was branded uncool early on. He wasn't able to outrun it until college, and by then it had become a part of his self image. Despite his poor treatment Anthony is a pretty good guy, kind, generous, and a decent conversationalist. As of late the new people he meets are able to realize it. He'd like to reach out more, but has deeply sown introverted tendencies; having people treat him nice is still a novel concept.
Tattoo's Power: Earth: He can bond and phase with minerals to a limited degree. When barefoot sand can yield the same traction as firm ground, rocks feel (a little) softer if he falls on them. With concentration he can pass his hand or foot through rocks. The more primal the mineral, the easier time he has. i.e. metallic ore is difficult, forged metals are right out.
Origins:
History/Bio: Anthony grew up on the lower end of the economic scale. Through out school his few friends were on the lower rungs of the social ladder. He scored well enough on grades but lacked the drive to complete homework on time, and although he wrote well his essays were too iconoclastic to get him recommended for the AP courses. He attends community college, though he's not really sure to what end. But it's what is expected and it makes his family proud that someone is going to college. He feels himself born into the wrong decade and spends his time playing old video games,reading slightly older books, and listening to music that is older still.
Other:
Likes: Jethro Tull, The Beatles, Johnny Cash, 8 and 16 bit games, Robert Heinlein and Isaac Asimov
Dislikes: Pop, country, rap, anything mainstream



So you all made girls, and I thought maybe I'd go along with that, but I was already planning a boy and someone has to buck the trend. We're all supposed to be friends right? My guys kind of a dork, can I be someone's brother or something? Or is it ok if I am just a random unaffiliated nerd? Maybe he just turned 21 and did something stupid.

VV Sounds good to me. Random Unaffiliated Nerd it is.

 

[RoyalPhoenix32]

eyflfla Some characters can be friends and others can be unknowns. For now, I rather go with unknowns.

 

[BlueJay1403]

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name: Doctor Alexander Jason Carter Hizzey PhD
Nicknames: Jay, Carter, Brainbox,
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: 14/03/1997
Age: 20
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 5'0" 150cm
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 48kg 105.8lbs
Build: Short and Thin
Eye color: Green
Hair color/style: Blond, Short
Personality: Happy, Smart, Reserved.
Tattoo's Power: Sound Kanji: He can introduce feedback and/or white noise into somebody's head to the point where they are distracted enough to create an attack opening.
Origins ( History/Bio): He has lived his life tormented for autism and general disability, but somehow managed to pick up a few friends and even a girlfriend. His life has been at a relative high since he finished school and got an position at a medicinal laboratory alongside a college MD course in biochemistry.
Other: He has a PhD in Biochemistry and Medicine.
Likes: Computers, Books, Dragons and Chemistry.
Dislikes: Peanuts, Leather Clothing, Assholes who think mocking mental disability is funny.
Medical Issue/Quirk: Mid to High-Functioning Autism. He struggles to understand rules and sees the world as very black and white, but processes information better than a normal person.

 

[eyflfla]

PhD
He has lived his life tormented for autism and general disability, but somehow managed to pick up a few friends and even a girlfriend. His life has been at a relative high since he finished school and got an position at a medicinal laboratory alongside a college MD course in biochemistry.

Other: He has a PhD in Biochemistry and Medicine.
Medical Issue/Quirk: Mid to High-Functioning Autism.

Age: 20

 

[Honeyed Tea]

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name: Doctor Alexander Jason Carter Hizzey PhD
Nicknames: Jay, Carter, Brainbox,
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: 14/03/1997
Age: 20
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 5'0" 150cm
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 48kg 105.8lbs
Build: Short and Thin
Eye color: Green
Hair color/style: Blond, Short
Personality: Happy, Smart, Reserved.
Tattoo's Power: Sound: He can introduce feedback and/or white noise into somebody's head to the point where they have dropped everything and have gone pretty much insane. He can also use this as a kind of mind control. His tattoo is of a sword crossing with a shield.
Origins ( History/Bio): He has lived his life tormented for autism and general disability, but somehow managed to pick up a few friends and even a girlfriend. His life has been at a relative high since he finished school and got an position at a medicinal laboratory alongside a college MD course in biochemistry.
Other: He has a PhD in Biochemistry and Medicine.
Likes: Computers, Books, Dragons and Chemistry.
Dislikes: Peanuts, Leather Clothing, Assholes who think mocking mental disability is funny.
Medical Issue/Quirk: Mid to High-Functioning Autism. He struggles to understand rules and sees the world as very black and white, but processes information better than a normal person.

Uh.. I'm seeing more than one problem with this, even ignoring the fact that the tattoo isn't even one of the specified kanji.

 

[BlueJay1403]

Uh.. I'm seeing more than one problem with this, even ignoring the fact that the tattoo isn't even one of the specified kanji.

There, ya happy? I nerfed my character. Good.

 

[BlueJay1403]

What, problem with a 20 year old autistic achieving all that? Plus, I don't think that will matter too much.

 

[BlueJay1403]

►βasic ɨnformation:
Character's Name: Doctor Alexander Jason Carter Hizzey PhD
Nicknames: Jay, Carter, Brainbox,
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: 14/03/1997
Age: 20
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance:
• HEIGHT • Feet and meters: 5'0" 150cm
• WEIGHT • kg and lbs.: 48kg 105.8lbs
Build: Short and Thin
Eye color: Green
Hair color/style: Blond, Short
Personality: Happy, Smart, Reserved. He is usually avoidant of crowds because it overloads his mind, and when he doesn't understand something, he gets extremely nervous trying to figure it out. He also sometimes has breakdowns, when his brain shuts down and he is basically useless for a couple of minutes. He is comfortable around his friends though and sometimes he will just not stop talking. He is generally quite nerdy, preferring Tolkien to Lucas and the such. He is also quite sensitive about his disability.

Tattoo's Power: Sound Kanji: He can introduce feedback and/or white noise into somebody's head to the point where they are distracted enough to focus on him.

Origins ( History/Bio): He was bullyed slightly for autism and general disability, but somehow managed to pick up a few friends. His life has been at a relative high since he finished school and got an intern position at a medicinal laboratory alongside a college PhD course in biochemistry.

Likes: Computers, Books, Dragons and Chemistry.
Dislikes: Peanuts, Leather Clothing, Assholes who think mocking mental disability is funny.

Medical Issue/Quirk: Mid to High-Functioning Autism. He struggles to understand rules and sees the world as very black and white, but processes information better than a normal person.

 

[BlueJay1403]

Fully optimised.

 

[eyflfla]

years of study required to get a phd - Google Search

You've got two of them.

You wield the autistic label like it gives you super rainman powers. You said your character was tormented in school from having autism, yet somehow he functions well enough to do 20-30 years of course work in record time and have an ok social life, complete with girlfriend. You want to talk about assholes mocking people with mental disabilities? You took all the (false) stereotype benefits and completely glossed over and ignored any detriments.

 

[BlueJay1403]

years of study required to get a phd - Google Search

You've got two of them.

You wield the autistic label like it gives you super rainman powers. You said your character was tormented in school from having autism, yet somehow he functions well enough to do 20-30 years of course work in record time and have an ok social life, complete with girlfriend. You want to talk about assholes mocking people with mental disabilities? You took all the (false) stereotype benefits and completely glossed over and ignored any detriments.

1: There, I hope you are satisfied with my final edit of my FICTIONAL CHARACTER, 2: I explained the detriments fully and toned down the achievements specifically for you, 3: Stereotype benefits?, 4: I assme you have real-life experience with autism then. I am not trying to start anything, I'm just trying to let you know that I am not trying to glorify autism or make it seem like a good thing to have.

 

[BlueJay1403]

Sorry if I offended you, seriously sorry.

 

[eyflfla]

No offense taken. Sorry if I came off a bit exasperated. Your rework is reasonable.

The stereotype of autism is Rainman. They're all bad at communication and social interaction but great at math and counting things. I'm no expert, but the reality has to be much different. For every savant that gets famous I reckon there's got to be 20 or 100 who grow up as wards of the system, going through school with a constant aid and getting lumped in with the other short bus kids. Sure, stories are told about unique people but you could just make your character really smart, sans autism. If you're going to put the autism point on your special snowflake* it ought to mean something. It's one of those life defining things. (*No insult intended. I readily admit that these are all fictional characters. I, too, am a special snowflake -- In fact that's usually my sig...)

And hey, maybe you just didn't time check your character sheet.

Our other objections were that the character was not consistent with what others had created. At the outset it appears to be some random ordinary young folks get more than they bargained for. Surreally smart double PHD geniuses would be out of place. Also, the powers thus far were really low key, and along came you with instant insanity on tap. They're going to develop further and I'll bet that can be the ultimate level.

The internet lacks tone and the nature of forums posting limits dialogue in some ways. People get interpreted as blowhards and then we return in kind. I shouldn't have been so quick to blow so hard.

 

[BlueJay1403]

I completely get your rationing, but a defining characteristic of high-funcioning autism is the ability to process raw data well. Not especially well, but well. I kind of modelled the more realistic final edit after me as I knew I would not go overboard. There has to be a reason for people to get interpreted as blowhards in the first place. My fault.

P.S. The doctorate thing was really just a challenge to make his name as long as possible with two middle names and no knighthood.

 

[BlueJay1403]

If those last two rules were not put on, this is what you would have seen.
Sir Dr Alexander Jason Carter Gibbons Carr Knowles Albert Matthew Hizzey PhD MD CBE MBE OBE Esquire
I'm sure that would have been more obnoxious. Lol.