The poem that I kept to my self

[Ravenfox5787]

A Broken Heart


By: Miley


My heart is broken


I cry my tears


I scream for help


But no one hears


There is no way out


There is no door


Now my life


Has sunk to the floor

 

[DemonKitten]

I think it is very beautiful short poem. It could be a chorus to a song. That final line would have to be edited for that though since it seems to rush because of the two. Lovely

 

[Grey]

I think this will benefit you: https://www.rpnation.com/threads/between-the-words-a-poetry-tutorial.94456/