the gems of power

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Hylt had been beaten because of someone else doing nothing. Why? Well he couldn't figure that out either. And for some reason he is the one with detention. This is why he can't wait to get home and move. He always got bullied. It didn't matter if it was Gyga or Stank or what, every day was a bad day. And he was moving across the planet to Egypt. What could be better? Wait why is that bus going so fast? All the bus drivers are off now. Why is it heading over to the school? Wait is that the person who got the power gem? Folter? Why is he heading to school with that bus driver? Just forgetting everything here including that might just be best. I mean why would anyone care about his life in gemsville? Well here's my house. Time to go to Egypt.


*note: Gyga had a perfect life so he went crazy from the smallest thing. His life was literally perfect for him until he he didn't get what he wanted for the first time in his life.

 

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Upon arrival at the school Sonny and Folter discussed where to go next beginning with Sonny suggesting Hollywood. He even showed Folter his nice Ferrari that the would take but Folter wanted to stay in the state in case he became strong enough to take Gyga down. Sonny told him it was all his choice but gemsville would be a bad place to stay. So after 30 minutes they decided to go wherever the road took them. Then after getting everything ready to go Sonny said that he wasn't going with him. He revealed that he had a power gem to and if they both had one it would attract to much attention. Folter tried asking "who would we be attracting? And how did you get a power gem? And how do you know all this? " the only answer he got was "run" which was said in a quite voice. Folter knew he should trust Sonny so he just began driving even though he was under aged. The last he saw of Sonny was him pulling out a dark green gem and turning into a wheel like they have on wheel of fortune but dangerous. 
Gyga knew exactly where folter would go in a school bus, school. He left home so where else? all Gyga had to do was steal a car. No-one would care that he was 15. I mean he had a power gem now so what could they do? They never could do to much before anyway. So how about a mustang? Oh there goes a mustang now good thing Gyga has a whip for a hand at times. Gyga easily stole it because the driver just ran away screaming "the undead are returning! But not zombies! Skeletons! " all Gyga could do was laugh at that weak person. He felt as powerful as Vegeta from dbz who was his favorite character until frieza killed him. Now it was time to hunt Folter and end this so he could hunt someone else.

 

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Only one more block and Gyga should be able to see the school. No escape for Folter if he was there. Wait, why is the flag Thats supposed be in front of it out here? And dented? To bad Gyga wasn't even paying attention, for once the school was in sight he saw what was left burning down. Well atleast that meant no school tomorrow, even though he wasn't going anyway. Well the mustang is almost out of gas so might as well take any money out of here and get a new car. Maybe he should take that motorcycle, oh wait he just did. Time for a road trip because he knew Folter was smart enough to leave gemsville. Where could he have gone? How about we start at las Vegas. 
Okay so that was chapter one. I think I will now make a rp for people to join based off of it. If you would please vote about if I'm doing good. 
Okay so before I start chapter 2 I created a rp called your gem. Join it if you found this interesting. Also that will not affect the story here at all. 
Hey I can't decide which character chapter 2 should start with so message me your choice please.

 

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Chapter 2! Finally here it is. Thanks helix fossil for helping me pick. 
It had been a few days since Folter left town. he was now in Canada and had just saw a poster for a Justin Bieber concert, so he knew where he was going finally. When he finally found where the concert was he snuck in through the roof and stole Bieber. Folter then left him just outside. He decided to go get food and hopefully find a hotel. The police began following him, probably for attacking Bieber. He pulled over and they tried to take him in but he activated his gem and used his tail to throw one of them into a tree while the one shot at him which only angered him. He threw the second into the police car, where he noticed a third cop calling for back up so he left the Ferrari and left. 
After running through the woods for a few hours Folter crossed the border and found a nice little hotel to stay at for the night. when he found it he quickly returned to normal form and went inside as the news of power gems hasn't spread much outside of Gemsville. When he entered he was greeted by the manager. He was quickly informed that they couldn't allow anyone to stay other than employees because they were understaffed. Folter couldn't help but ask "what happened to all the employees? " the manager replied "there is a myth of a monster in the area and each week someone has been going missing almost everyone quit because they believe in that myth. " Folter went back outside and slept just outside the hotel.

 

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Folter awoke from his sleep seeing a creature that reminded him of a werewolf. He instantly pulled out his gem and transformed. "So the myth is true." Folter said. Folter faked a jump at the werewolf and instead attacked it with his tail knocking it back slightly. The werewolf quickly recovered and charged him. He used his tail to help boost himself up above the werewolf. When he landed he used his wolf claws to finish the fight. The werewolf transformed into a human who grabbed a gem and ran knowing that if they didn't run they would be caught. "So it was a fake werewolf all along. " Folter said while reverting to normal. "To bad they ran, I could've taken their gem from them. I don't know what I would use it for but oh well."

 

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Folter went to bed for the night and had a dream reminding him of before. "Remember, you must not leave gemsville. Your gem will attract mon-" said one of the three old men before getting interrupted by another "you shouldn't tell him. If you do he will fear the gem!" All this happened when he got his gem. "Why shouldn't I leave? What would scare me?" Folter tried asking but to no avail. He awoke from a scream. He had assumed the man with the gem had returned but he was wrong. When he entered the hotel he found a large werewolf eating the manager. He grabbed his gem and charged the real werewolf only to be kicked out of the building. He attempted to get back up but was picked up by the werewolf who tried eating him, which gave him a small opening. He slammed it's head with his tail barely causing the werewolf to drop him. He got back up and the werewolf recovered.


Note-I'm going to give another extra long one later. Special shout out to my friend Trevor for no reason at all.

 

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He waited for the werewolf to make the first move, but the moment it did it slammed him. He recovered quickly and cut the werewolf's face, only to see it instantly heal. Folter turned around and ran towards the door with the werewolf in close pursuit until they were outside where Folter began climbing to the top of the building. the werewolf repeatedly jumped, trying to grab his tail or foot or something, but to no avail. When Folter reached the top he got ready to jump off, but before he could the werewolf ran inside. Folter began running down the stairs of the hotel until suddenly the werewolf grabbed him. The werewolf began lowering him into it's mouth when suddenly a gunshot is heard, and the wolf drops dead.

 

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Folter got up and looked to see who shot the werewolf. he saw a man wearing a necklace of garlic and holding a AK47 with dual stakes and squirt guns strapped two his belt. "Who are you? And why do you have squirt guns? "Folter said while reverting to normal.


"I'm a monster Hunter. Why else would I have a AK47 loaded with silver bullets? " was the reply.


Folter stood up while asking "why do you have squirt guns? "


"Every good monster Hunter carries holy water. You appear to be a monster. Mind telling me what before I kill you?" Said the monster Hunter as he aimed his AK47 at Folter.


Folter grabbed his gem. "I'm not a monster. I'm fully human. This gem allows me to transform. "


"Good excuse, but not good enough. " he aimed at Folter who activated his gem and jumped over the monster Hunter. When Folter found a window he jumped out of it and ran away.

 

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(I'm going to take a short break from chapter two so I can ask a question. This is mainly for those who don't like it so far, any suggestions to help me become better? )

 

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He didn't stop until he found a park. "So, now I'm wanted by a monster Hunter, Gyga, and those cops for giving Justin Bieber a panic attack. " he said to himself. "Perfect, what's next? That werewolf comes back as a zombie? " he deactivated his gem. He was beyond ready to get some sleep. He rolled up on the ground and went to bed, having the same vision as the last time he was asleep. he woke up a few hours earlier. The sun was almost done rising, so he grabbed his gem and began walking. He heard a loud screech from behind him, so he activated his gem and turned around, seeing a large snake like creature with ten arms, a womans face, and red scales over everything. He began the fight by running to see how fast she was. She waited ten seconds before almost instantly catching up to him. The fight was on.

 

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This is not cancelled, just being slightly delayed.

 

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The snake creature tried punching him, but he was able to dodge even though there were ten fist. Folter retaliated by punching her face with his tail causing her to fall backwards on her tail, but she quickly recovered and tried knocking him down with the end of her tail, but Folter jumped over it and then cut the tail off with his wolf claws. She screamed with anger and punched him, sending him flying into a car not to far away. Folter got back up and charged at her, swinging his claws at the snake in a attempt to kill it, but she swung her tail at Folter again, knocking him to the ground. He used his tail as a spring back up, landing a blow that knocked her to the ground. the snake creature began speak "you will pay for that! Not only will I take the gem, but I shall ensure you die next time we meet!" She began to try and escape, but was caught by Folter who asked "why do you want my gem?" To which she responded "To give to my master, Garc, of course! The guardians must not have told you much, like how your gem awakens monsters who will try to steal it for master Garc. Now I must be off, I can feel another gem in Vegas!" And she finally broke free. Folter had no other way of finding out about why this Garc guy wants gems then to go to Vegas, so he began his trek to Vegas.


Finally! I finished chapter two! Now I have to new goals before chapter three. I have a gift to give anyone who reads this, but you must wait until tomorrow.

 

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Meanwhile, far far away from Canada or Las Vegas, in the land of Egypt, new gems were about to be found, and the fight would become much more difficult. Hylt, who had been excited about moving to Egypt, would learn of the dangers of Egypt, and a assassin will become a powerful enemy. Every post will swap the character I post from. If Hylt and the assassin meet, I will make the posts in third person. I hope you all enjoy the gems of power chapter three, Egyptian chaos. Coming in June!


This is the trailer for chapter three, which was the surprise. Sorry that it's late.

 

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I'm going to edit the poll when I start chapter three so you can vote again. If possible, I'll make it 1-10.

 

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Well, that failed. Is there a way to reset the poll?

 

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Hello, how are you? I'm about to start this, but first, not every post will be Hylt and the bounty hunter. Three more already important characters will also be checked on occasionally. Here is a example:


Hunter, the monster hunter. He continued down the path. Now that he knew where his target was going, he knew his path. He pulled out his modified desert eagle and prepared for battle.


: so, I figured I should make it short for the example. But that will hopefully be how I write the rest of this, not just chapter three. And this is a real character, the monster hunter who attacked Folter now has a official name.

 

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Gyga.


"May I finish what I started, master?" Gyga asked a being cloaked in the shadows. "You may finish, but not until he reaches Vegas. If he makes it that far, force the prisoner to fight him. Kill the loser and free the victor, but take both gems." The man orders. "As you wish." Gyga responds as a snake with ten arms and a woman's face enters the room. "You may have done it accidentally, but the Likonny will be rewarded greatly for what you did, Betus." The cloaked man says, congratulating her. "Thank you, master."

 

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I didn't forget this. I've just been busy.

 

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If anyone wanted me to finish this, I apologize but I'm completely restarting it. It doesn't even happen on earth now. I'm about to start posting chapter one here.

 

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Gems of power, chapter one part one


Mount Tempest, meeting of the guardians (not of the galaxy)


"We need to find those who will fight for us and train them before it begins." One of the guardians says to the others. "We have three extra gems of power, we should make use of them." "They are too powerful for humans. And they will never find any of the others." Another guardian says. once the meeting ends almost all the guardians leave, but one remains and takes the gems. "We just need to train them." He says as he leaves the mountain. 
Gems of power, chapter one, part 2


Cristile city, the following night


The guardian walks up to a small green house. "I think I found one." He rings the doorbell and waits until a teenaged boy opens the door. "Come with me." The guardian says before walking away. He stops just outside of the city and holds out a lime green gemstone. "This is a ancient gem of power. It will allow you to transform and it will protect you. I need humans to help me protect these from monsters who have remained asleep for hundreds of years. Will you be one of those humans?" The human nods and takes the gem. "Lift it to your forehead to activate it." He does as he is told a becomes a large snake like creature with two snakes as arms.

 

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You need to read more. Scenes aren't framed, characters have neither voices nor characterization, syntax and grammar are incoherent, little to no structure, inadequate description, and what little plot can be seen appears bland and generic. By all means, keep going, but you really have to try and read more novels, learn the techniques, and refine the whole thing.

 

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I know I'm not good.

 

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It's okay, keep going! Don't stop

 

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Thanks for the compliment.