Fantasy The earthen Throne CS

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[DrBezendrine]

Name: Athenna Norton
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Species/Race: Human, Nordic

Kingdom of Origin: Sárrverǫld

Powers: N/a

Personality: Athenna is a hard worker, some would say that's all she does. She cares more about her people and new kingdom than that of her own desires and needs. Nothing will get in the way of that except death and she doesn't plan on dying any time soon. Athenna also is a very caring woman, a leader persona, but she tends to have a short temper on specific things. Other than these few things, and outside of it all... She puts plans down and figures our how to get them done, then does it. Her life now is her people and she accepts that completely. She will do anything but sacrifice them for the safety and the name of them all.

History: Not much is known about Athenna, Leiþar of Sárrverǫld. After a terrible incident involving the persecution of innocent people of the lands and the death of many, including her family, Athenna lead the rebellion right to the throne. She killed the barbaric leaders and the people crowned her to the throne. Other than that, she rarely speaks about her past. Her family remains a secret for all to wonder.

Job: Ruler
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral-Good

Appearance: Athenna stands at 5'8, weighing around 162 lbs. She is a very fit individual and she seems to give off a cold stare to anyone near her. Her armor is mixed with branded leather and a steel breastplate, as well as a pull-up mask and other wrapping around the hands. She has a shield on her back (Which she can easily sling to her right hand) and a longsword to her left-handed sheath. On her right shoulder is her Kingdom's insignia, marking a Lion in combat.

Her eyes are a gray-blue and her hair is a sandy blonde/platinum. Her form is mesomorph and she has a few scars under her armor in various places. She seems to be a woman of stories, if you can ever get them out of her.

Equipment: Longsword, double sided. Branished wooden shield. Stiletto dagger. Armor.

Other: Alright. So. She's nordic obviously and I had it planned to be a few years after she's taken the kingdom. This is not based off of anything but the actual history of Sweden when the Lion of the North took the country from the barbaric leaders of the time. I kept the bio vauge because I like to write as I go instead of being stuck to a simple path... If you want me to change anything, then I shall and get back to you hastily.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

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Name: Athenna Norton
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Species/Race: Human, Nordic

Kingdom of Origin: Sárrverǫld

Powers: N/a

Personality: Athenna is a hard worker, some would say that's all she does. She cares more about her people and new kingdom than that of her own desires and needs. Nothing will get in the way of that except death and she doesn't plan on dying any time soon. Athenna also is a very caring woman, a leader persona, but she tends to have a short temper on specific things. Other than these few things, and outside of it all... She puts plans down and figures our how to get them done, then does it. Her life now is her people and she accepts that completely. She will do anything but sacrifice them for the safety and the name of them all.

History: Not much is known about Athenna, Leiþar of Sárrverǫld. After a terrible incident involving the persecution of innocent people of the lands and the death of many, including her family, Athenna lead the rebellion right to the throne. She killed the barbaric leaders and the people crowned her to the throne. Other than that, she rarely speaks about her past. Her family remains a secret for all to wonder.

Job: Ruler
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral-Good

Appearance: Athenna stands at 5'8, weighing around 162 lbs. She is a very fit individual and she seems to give off a cold stare to anyone near her. Her armor is mixed with branded leather and a steel breastplate, as well as a pull-up mask and other wrapping around the hands. She has a shield on her back (Which she can easily sling to her right hand) and a longsword to her left-handed sheath. On her right shoulder is her Kingdom's insignia, marking a Lion in combat.

Her eyes are a gray-blue and her hair is a sandy blonde/platinum. Her form is mesomorph and she has a few scars under her armor in various places. She seems to be a woman of stories, if you can ever get them out of her.

Equipment: Longsword, double sided. Branished wooden shield. Stiletto dagger. Armor.

Other: Alright. So. She's nordic obviously and I had it planned to be a few years after she's taken the kingdom. This is not based off of anything but the actual history of Sweden when the Lion of the North took the country from the barbaric leaders of the time. I kept the bio vauge because I like to write as I go instead of being stuck to a simple path... If you want me to change anything, then I shall and get back to you hastily.

I see no issues. Go ahead and create your Kingdom sheet in the lore tab ^^

 

[BLK]

• General
• Personality and History
• Appearance

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  Name: Slobieslaw Rabinov
  Age: 63
  Gender: Male
  Species/Race: Human
  Kingdom of Origin: Vostavjan
  Powers: None
  Equipment: None in use
  Job: King
  Alignment: Chaotic-Neutral
  
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  Personality:
  To describe Slobieslaw Rabinov as the typical Vostovjan would be an understatement. To call him the prototypical Vostovian would be more accurate. In his old age, Slobielaw has grown prone to rambling and speaking to himself, although not as if he is conversing. Rather, he has begun to think aloud, spewing all manner of thoughts from his mouth. From the secrets he utters, one begins to form a more concrete image of Slobieslaw. His worldview revolves around retaining the only thing that matters to him, which is his seat on the throne, while displaying an unusual compassion for his subjects, born from the need to secure his rule. The same can not be said for his only son, Vladislaw. Having neglected his duties as a parent after his wife died, Vladislaw grew up only knowing either his father's disappointment, or the cold inaffectionate lessons of his teachers. What little joy he would find in the military would serve as his father's only point of pride. Slovieslaw was more than delighted to find his son had enlisted in the army. Most nobles would pull some strings to secure their child a high ranking position away from the fighting, but to Slobieslaw, only the strongest came back from war as leaders. As his father had done to him, and his father's father, Slobieslaw would strive to teach his son that one cannot depend on anyone other than themselves. Although warped, and broken from age, none of the Vostovjan boastfulness has left him either, much to the disappointment of those who must stay with him for prolonged periods of time.
  
  History:
  As privileged as the nobles of Vostavja are, their upbringings are rarely centered around their families. Slobieslaw was no exception to this rule. Although the child of the king, he rarely spoke with his father, and at the age of 16 was sent to serve in the army. He would end up spending eight years serving in a cavalry brigade stationed in the southern hills. Difficult, but formative, Slobieslaw would become the man he is today from that. At the time, the principality of Vostavja was a fledgling kingdom, hailing from the steppes. However, that would no be the case for long. His father would spend the rest of his life waging war on the neighboring cities and kingdoms, all in the name of expanding his holdings. Having learned from the Marshall of the Cavalry for two years made Slobieslaw more than prepared for the impending wars. Leading a company of around 200 horsemen from the western villages, he would take part in a series of moderately successful offensives. Of course, after such campaigns, and the king's desire to have a living heir, Slobieslaw was recalled. For eight years he had traveled the steppes, doing as he was told. He had no idea what to do with his life after that. Of course, his father had a plan for him. Slobieslaw was immediately dispatched as a diplomat to live in a small neighboring kingdom, to get a feel for the lands. Although unaware that he was merely a pawn in another of his father's campaigns, he did begin to learn the intricacies of statecraft. He would then spend another five years across various kingdoms and courts, weak and powerful, gaining information and learning ever more.
  
  However, during his travels, at the age of 29, Slobieslaw was informed of the death of his father. It was tradition for the heir to the throne to attend the king's funeral, and enter a period of grieving for a week, which the young man did. He was to be the king now, and he needed to act like it. He did not have his father to guide him, but he had learned a thing or two while he was away. The first year went smoothly, although not without minor disturbances on the borders. With a new king came those who sought to claim his throne and his lands, which Slobieslaw defended against. Losing a small amount of land to the western princedoms, he largely counted his first year as a success. Come winter, when wars generally ended, and the people retreated into their homes, the king was confident in himself, and more importantly, in his army. His decision that winter would define the next 12 years of his reign.
  
  Launching a series of full-scale invasions of the neighboring states, Slobieslaw saw town after town fall to his soldiers. Of course, attacking during the winter meant more supplies and food were needed, and to secure that, villages were ransacked, and cities plundered. He would spend until the age of 51 conquering and expanding, every day of the year. Although the people under his rule grew wealthy, and he became recognized across the lands as a dominant force in the region, Slobieslaw's subjects grew discontent, and greedy. They rarely assisted the people whom they collected taxes from, and often levies for wars were not paid in full. To counteract this, a six year purge of the nobles would begin, in which Slobieslaw systemically removed anyone who opposed his rule, and did not contribute to the kingdom. By the end of the purge, he had become to wither away, and for the past six years he has remained largely in his keep, leaving only to attend a meeting with a diplomat or to make a public announcement.
  
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[The Fluffiest Floof]

• General
• Personality and History
• Appearance

• 
  Name: Slobieslaw Rabinov
  Age: 63
  Gender: Male
  Species/Race: Human
  Kingdom of Origin: Vostavjan
  Powers: None
  Equipment: None in use
  Job: King
  Alignment: Chaotic-Neutral
  
• 
  Personality:
  To describe Slobieslaw Rabinov as the typical Vostovjan would be an understatement. To call him the prototypical Vostovian would be more accurate. In his old age, Slobielaw has grown prone to rambling and speaking to himself, although not as if he is conversing. Rather, he has begun to think aloud, spewing all manner of thoughts from his mouth. From the secrets he utters, one begins to form a more concrete image of Slobieslaw. His worldview revolves around retaining the only thing that matters to him, which is his seat on the throne, while displaying an unusual compassion for his subjects, born from the need to secure his rule. The same can not be said for his only son, Vladislaw. Having neglected his duties as a parent after his wife died, Vladislaw grew up only knowing either his father's disappointment, or the cold inaffectionate lessons of his teachers. What little joy he would find in the military would serve as his father's only point of pride. Slovieslaw was more than delighted to find his son had enlisted in the army. Most nobles would pull some strings to secure their child a high ranking position away from the fighting, but to Slobieslaw, only the strongest came back from war as leaders. As his father had done to him, and his father's father, Slobieslaw would strive to teach his son that one cannot depend on anyone other than themselves. Although warped, and broken from age, none of the Vostovjan boastfulness has left him either, much to the disappointment of those who must stay with him for prolonged periods of time.
  
  History:
  As privileged as the nobles of Vostavja are, their upbringings are rarely centered around their families. Slobieslaw was no exception to this rule. Although the child of the king, he rarely spoke with his father, and at the age of 16 was sent to serve in the army. He would end up spending eight years serving in a cavalry brigade stationed in the southern hills. Difficult, but formative, Slobieslaw would become the man he is today from that. At the time, the principality of Vostavja was a fledgling kingdom, hailing from the steppes. However, that would no be the case for long. His father would spend the rest of his life waging war on the neighboring cities and kingdoms, all in the name of expanding his holdings. Having learned from the Marshall of the Cavalry for two years made Slobieslaw more than prepared for the impending wars. Leading a company of around 200 horsemen from the western villages, he would take part in a series of moderately successful offensives. Of course, after such campaigns, and the king's desire to have a living heir, Slobieslaw was recalled. For eight years he had traveled the steppes, doing as he was told. He had no idea what to do with his life after that. Of course, his father had a plan for him. Slobieslaw was immediately dispatched as a diplomat to live in a small neighboring kingdom, to get a feel for the lands. Although unaware that he was merely a pawn in another of his father's campaigns, he did begin to learn the intricacies of statecraft. He would then spend another five years across various kingdoms and courts, weak and powerful, gaining information and learning ever more.
  
  However, during his travels, at the age of 29, Slobieslaw was informed of the death of his father. It was tradition for the heir to the throne to attend the king's funeral, and enter a period of grieving for a week, which the young man did. He was to be the king now, and he needed to act like it. He did not have his father to guide him, but he had learned a thing or two while he was away. The first year went smoothly, although not without minor disturbances on the borders. With a new king came those who sought to claim his throne and his lands, which Slobieslaw defended against. Losing a small amount of land to the western princedoms, he largely counted his first year as a success. Come winter, when wars generally ended, and the people retreated into their homes, the king was confident in himself, and more importantly, in his army. His decision that winter would define the next 12 years of his reign.
  
  Launching a series of full-scale invasions of the neighboring states, Slobieslaw saw town after town fall to his soldiers. Of course, attacking during the winter meant more supplies and food were needed, and to secure that, villages were ransacked, and cities plundered. He would spend until the age of 51 conquering and expanding, every day of the year. Although the people under his rule grew wealthy, and he became recognized across the lands as a dominant force in the region, Slobieslaw's subjects grew discontent, and greedy. They rarely assisted the people whom they collected taxes from, and often levies for wars were not paid in full. To counteract this, a six year purge of the nobles would begin, in which Slobieslaw systemically removed anyone who opposed his rule, and did not contribute to the kingdom. By the end of the purge, he had become to wither away, and for the past six years he has remained largely in his keep, leaving only to attend a meeting with a diplomat or to make a public announcement.
  
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No issues, go ahead and create your kingdom in the lore tab ^^

I should really get my character done.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Name: Lionuil Thirien


Age: 1240 years


Gender: Male


Species/Race: Elf


Kingdom of Origin: Siriel


Powers: Just like all elves, Lionuil cannot die of age. Further, he does not phyiscally age.
Lionuil further has a very strong regenerative ability. Wounds that would take years to heal for a normal human or elf are healed in weeks. Only strong magic can leave scars.


Personality:
The elven king of Siriel is a very thoughtful person. Through the years of his reign, he has learned just as much as people have learned from him. He has witnessed the ages of the world, their changes, their mistakes. He was seen races rise and fall, their kingdoms be build and crumble. Most of the time, however, Siriel has not taken action. Lionuil is not a man that interferes, unless he see´s a direct threat to either Siriel, or Umar itself. Lionuil has seen the races betray each other and he always was a careful man. He is not easily fooled and oftenly, his decisions might appear cold. Though they are not, they are just logical. Lionuil always does what he deems the wisest for his kingdom and the world he lives in.


History:
The elven king of Siriel is around this world for such a long time. Little is know about the past before this generation, many mysteries and rumors are around. It is known that until now, he never was the King of Kings. Some say he never wanted to and just participated in the King´s War because of tradition. Others say he participates because he wants to defeat those unworthy of the Earthen Throne. Whatever is true, the only known fact is, that he does participate. It is known that he has a daughter, it is known his wife is dead. Those are the only things, that were ever carried out of Siriel about the kings past.


Job: King of Siriel


Alignment: Lawful Neutral


Appearance:

The elven king is known to be a very beautiful man, even among elves. Other races, sometimes, however find him look "feminine and girlish", calling that a negative thing.

Equipment:

Other:

 

[That Poppy]

J O L E N E

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Name: Jolene of Mun
Age: 1879 years of age
Gender: Female
Species/Race: Demon
Kingdom of Origin:Scheherazade


Powers:
Absolute beauty

Spoiler: defined

The user possesses the rarest type of beauty there is (pure infinite beauty), which is even higher up than supernatural beauty. No one, no matter how different their beauty standards may seem, cannot deny this person's beauty is truly unfathomable as this person possesses infinite beauty. Because of this, the user can use people to get what he/she so desires. Some people with this ability may even be able to have magical abilities as a result of their beauty.

Spoiler: defined

Since this is the absolute form of any kind of beauty, the user possesses some if not all abilities/powers based on beauty, allowing them to gain a higher advantage.
Limitations:
Being unnoticed is not an option.
Users of Omniscience are immune.

Telekinesis

Spoiler: defined

The user can influence/manipulate/move objects/matter with their mind. Telekinesis is one of the bases of many superpowers that are based on "controlling/manipulating", and may evolve to the point that a Telekinetic can control anything at a subatomic, particle and universal level.
limitations: User may not have control over the speed at which the target moves.
Limited to only objects.
The bigger the object the more strain/focus put into it

Lie Detection

Spoiler: defined

The user can sense when they are lied to by various means.

Senses

Spoiler: defined

The user has extremely accurate senses, allowing them to see, hear, smell, taste, and feel better than an average member of their species.
This isn't a power more like a demon thing. INHERITED.

Personality: "I've been sold like a broodmare. I've been chained and betrayed, raped and defiled. Do you know what kept me standing all those years? Faith. Not in any gods, not in myths and legends, in my self, in Jolene Mun."
Jolene wasn't meant to look like an angel and neither was she accepted to act like one. Jolene's charm lay not so much in her physical appearance as in her vivacious personality, her gracefulness, her quick wit and other accomplishments. She was petite in stature and had an appealing fragility about her. In her youth, she is "sweet and cheerful" and enjoyed gambling, drinking wine, and gossiping. She is also fearless, determined, charming, ambitious, politically astute, highly intelligent and intellectually driven. However, under stressful circumstances, Jolene could be sharp-tempered, verbally aggressive and sharp-tongued. Speaking of which, It terrorizes various how calm and collected she is. She has unquestionably won the title of a 'clever rascal'. Jolene's most powerful weapon is her head, all will bow down to her quick-wit and intelligence to come up with solutions and of course, produce havoc. She is manipulative, at times you think you got her right where you want her when in reality this is all apart of her game. Her silver-tongue can get her out of impossible situations, she can comfortably word things to change your whole outlook on a person and you won't know it's happening. She has never and will never be intimidated or panicked by the thought of death and isn't afraid of dying.

Her ability to look into one's eyes and know exactly what their motive is will terrify those the brutes. Jolene can read people as if they were telling her exactly what their intentions are. Just by looking at there body moments, the sound of their voice can tell if the person was lying. Her speeches will make change the way people think she tricks and schemes, even her military and training everything concerns the brain. Winning by using your head instead of your weapons. She learned the hard way that no matter how hard you tried no one will accept you.

History: "The king stole the future from me he killed my father, he killed my uncles, he killed my brother's survival isn't what I'm after."
Jolene was born in an exotic household at least to many who watched it from the surface. Her household surname was prized for being strange, terrifying that the reality that none knew a thing regarding the Mun line, they stayed cryptic yet were gossiped about constantly. They were feared but respected, respected but loved. The house had nothing but their honor, no wealth or land hence their poverty and their desire-their hunger for knowledge in order to increase their standing. Throughout the years, that aim-that goal has been in the family line for ages, all members have obtained the riches they yearn for. The royal family being their source of success.

Jolene grew up possessing no benefit, no need for control, authority or wealth but rancor and hostility towards the royal family. Towards everyone who beamed joyfully, all those people who held no trouble or responsibility in their life while her smile was suddenly taken away from her. She never truly enjoyed her childhood but she was fine as long as she had her family but even that God had to take away from her. Many in Jolene's household was in some way connected to the royal family as advisors, soldiers etc. Jolene wasn't an option she grew up to be a Scholar from the moment she could talk. She shined in this sort of profession and learned things determinedly, in fact, that's all she did besides lying there in an unfurnished home with simply a table and some blankets among her family, her uncles, and aunts.

By the age of 19, she was already inside the palace walls. Not many were surprised, many of her 'kind' have done it at an even better rate then she has. It was also at that time when her father was killed for treason disloyalty to the king, to the royal family. The king wasn't a kind and generous man people wanted another man to sit on the throne Jolene's father was the first option the people had in mind. The demon king was scared terrified in fact so he got rid of him. The Mun family had tried so hard to keep their heads but one by one they started to lose it attacking the King causing rebellions and revolts. The first to attack was Jolene's bother who raged war against the king but lost his head to him. Jolene was still in the palace even after her family's deaths and their lose of insanity.

At first, Jolene had no intention of killing the king for what he did but when he overstepped his boundaries that night she pledged to destroy his very existence. It took her years to become as strong as he was and even though she wished badly to kill him...he still lives to this day being tortured and imprisoned just like she was and more.



Job: Queen of Scheherazade
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Appearance: Picture above
Equipment: Weapons none; Armor picture above

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

J O L E N E

★

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View attachment 433948Name: Jolene of Mun
Age: 1879 years of age
Gender: Female
Species/Race: Demon
Kingdom of Origin:Scheherazade


Powers:
Absolute beauty

Spoiler: defined

The user possesses the rarest type of beauty there is (pure infinite beauty), which is even higher up than supernatural beauty. No one, no matter how different their beauty standards may seem, cannot deny this person's beauty is truly unfathomable as this person possesses infinite beauty. Because of this, the user can use people to get what he/she so desires. Some people with this ability may even be able to have magical abilities as a result of their beauty.

Since this is the absolute form of any kind of beauty, the user possesses some if not all abilities/powers based on beauty, allowing them to gain a higher advantage.
Limitations:
Being unnoticed is not an option.
Users of Omniscience are immune.

Telekinesis

Spoiler: defined

The user can influence/manipulate/move objects/matter with their mind. Telekinesis is one of the bases of many superpowers that are based on "controlling/manipulating", and may evolve to the point that a Telekinetic can control anything at a subatomic, particle and universal level.
limitations: User may not have control over the speed at which the target moves.

Lie Detection

Spoiler: defined

The user can sense when they are lied to by various means.

Senses

Spoiler: defined

The user has extremely accurate senses, allowing them to see, hear, smell, taste, and feel better than an average member of their species.
This isn't a power more like a demon thing. INHERITED.

Environmental Manipulation

Spoiler: defined (main power)

The user can create, shape and manipulate the environment, whether natural or artificial and everything in it, including all the aspects of the environment, from the purely physical ones and also mythical/conceptual ones.
Limitations: User may be unable to create an environment, being limited to manipulating already existing one.
Distance, mass, precision, etc. depend upon of the knowledge, skill, and strength of the user, and their power's natural limits.

Personality: "I've been sold like a broodmare. I've been chained and betrayed, raped and defiled. Do you know what kept me standing all those years? Faith. Not in any gods, not in myths and legends, in my self, in Jolene Mun."
Jolene wasn't meant to look like an angel and neither was she accepted to act like one. Jolene's charm lay not so much in her physical appearance as in her vivacious personality, her gracefulness, her quick wit and other accomplishments. She was petite in stature and had an appealing fragility about her. In her youth, she is "sweet and cheerful" and enjoyed gambling, drinking wine, and gossiping. She is also fearless, determined, charming, ambitious, politically astute, highly intelligent and intellectually driven. However, under stressful circumstances, Jolene could be sharp-tempered, verbally aggressive and sharp-tongued. Speaking of which, It terrorizes various how calm and collected she is. She has unquestionably won the title of a 'clever rascal'. Jolene's most powerful weapon is her head, all will bow down to her quick-wit and intelligence to come up with solutions and of course, produce havoc. She is manipulative, at times you think you got her right where you want her when in reality this is all apart of her game. Her silver-tongue can get her out of impossible situations, she can comfortably word things to change your whole outlook on a person and you won't know it's happening. She has never and will never be intimidated or panicked by the thought of death and isn't afraid of dying.

Her ability to look into one's eyes and know exactly what their motive is will terrify those the brutes. Jolene can read people as if they were telling her exactly what their intentions are. Just by looking at there body moments, the sound of their voice can tell if the person was lying. Her speeches will make change the way people think she tricks and schemes, even her military and training everything concerns the brain. Winning by using your head instead of your weapons. She learned the hard way that no matter how hard you tried no one will accept you.

History: "The king stole the future from me he killed my father, he killed my uncles, he killed my brother's survival isn't what I'm after."
Jolene was born in an exotic household at least to many who watched it from the surface. Her household surname was prized for being strange, terrifying that the reality that none knew a thing regarding the Mun line, they stayed cryptic yet were gossiped about constantly. They were feared but respected, respected but loved. The house had nothing but their honor, no wealth or land hence their poverty and their desire-their hunger for knowledge in order to increase their standing. Throughout the years, that aim-that goal has been in the family line for ages, all members have obtained the riches they yearn for. The royal family being their source of success.

Jolene grew up possessing no benefit, no need for control, authority or wealth but rancor and hostility towards the royal family. Towards everyone who beamed joyfully, all those people who held no trouble or responsibility in their life while her smile was suddenly taken away from her. She never truly enjoyed her childhood but she was fine as long as she had her family but even that God had to take away from her. Many in Jolene's household was in some way connected to the royal family as advisors, soldiers etc. Jolene wasn't an option she grew up to be a Scholar from the moment she could talk. She shined in this sort of profession and learned things determinedly, in fact, that's all she did besides lying there in an unfurnished home with simply a table and some blankets among her family, her uncles, and aunts.

By the age of 19, she was already inside the palace walls. Not many were surprised, many of her 'kind' have done it at an even better rate then she has. It was also at that time when her father was killed for treason disloyalty to the king, to the royal family. The king wasn't a kind and generous man people wanted another man to sit on the throne Jolene's father was the first option the people had in mind. The demon king was scared terrified in fact so he got rid of him. The Mun family had tried so hard to keep their heads but one by one they started to lose it attacking the King causing rebellions and revolts. The first to attack was Jolene's bother who raged war against the king but lost his head to him. Jolene was still in the palace even after her family's deaths and their lose of insanity.

At first, Jolene had no intention of killing the king for what he did but when he overstepped his boundaries that night she pledged to destroy his very existence. It took her years to become as strong as he was and even though she wished badly to kill him...he still lives to this day being tortured and imprisoned just like she was and more.



Job: Queen of Scheherazade
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Appearance: Picture above
Equipment: Weapons none; Armor picture above

Alright, first things first, you double posted.

Now, seeing her in comparison to the other, existing characters, she is way too powerful, when it comes to her magical abilities. I doubt any character currently accepted would even come close to being a match to her. The absolute beauty is somewhat fine, though i will have to ask you not to abuse the ability when it comes to player characters. While manipulation is fine, nobody likes to have their character mind controlled, so be careful there. If i feel like you go to far, i will call you out. When it comes to NPCs, there shouldnt be issues, however if they seem important to another player, ask them first.

The lie detection, as well as the advanced senses are completely fine and can be kept the way they are.

The telekinesis and the enviornmental manipulation are what makes the character a bit overtuned for this rp. I would ask you to get rid of the latter, keeping the telekinesis, though also limiting that to inanimate objects, hence making her unable to throw around people or animals. Further i´d ask you to put a limit to yourself, to what she can move. I wouldnt want her to move around whole castles.

 

[That Poppy]

Alright, first things first, you double posted.

Now, seeing her in comparison to the other, existing characters, she is way too powerful, when it comes to her magical abilities. I doubt any character currently accepted would even come close to being a match to her. The absolute beauty is somewhat fine, though i will have to ask you not to abuse the ability when it comes to player characters. While manipulation is fine, nobody likes to have their character mind controlled, so be careful there. If i feel like you go to far, i will call you out. When it comes to NPCs, there shouldnt be issues, however if they seem important to another player, ask them first.

The lie detection, as well as the advanced senses are completely fine and can be kept the way they are.

The telekinesis and the enviornmental manipulation are what makes the character a bit overtuned for this rp. I would ask you to get rid of the latter, keeping the telekinesis, though also limiting that to inanimate objects, hence making her unable to throw around people or animals. Further i´d ask you to put a limit to yourself, to what she can move. I wouldnt want her to move around whole castles.

Yeah, the first post came out weird so I had to fix it with posting again (I think I made sure to delete it though) it won't happen again.
Ok, you want me to get rid of the environmental Manipulation I'll be sure to do that.
Also, telekinesis is a very complicated power there are many limitations to that one so don't worry about that.
Sorry didn't mean to make my character OP, I don't usually use combat in RP so this is always the hard part for me.
Also, I wasn't planning to manipulate anyone Environmental Manipulation doesn't manipulate people but I do see where you're coming from so I'll get rid of it. ^^

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Yeah, the first post came out weird so I had to fix it with posting again (I think I made sure to delete it though) it won't happen again.
Ok, you want me to get rid of the environmental Manipulation I'll be sure to do that.
Also, telekinesis is a very complicated power there are many limitations to that one so don't worry about that.
Sorry didn't mean to make my character OP, I don't usually use combat in RP so this is always the hard part for me.
Also, I wasn't planning to manipulate anyone Environmental Manipulation doesn't manipulate people but I do see where you're coming from so I'll get rid of it. ^^

With manipulate, i meant more in the sense of a character being somewhat hypnotized by the beauty. While that is fine for NPCs, it takes the fun from a player (unless they want it to happen, then you guys clear that with each other)

Thanks for understanding my points. be sure to tell me once you applied the changes, so i can have a second look ^^

 

[That Poppy]

With manipulate, i meant more in the sense of a character being somewhat hypnotized by the beauty. While that is fine for NPCs, it takes the fun from a player (unless they want it to happen, then you guys clear that with each other)

Thanks for understanding my points. be sure to tell me once you applied the changes, so i can have a second look ^^

OkayI'm done

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

OkayI'm done

You´re character seems fine, go ahead and create the Kingdom in the Lore tab. After that, i´d love for some discussions about character relations, as both our characters are significantly older and would surely have a special kind of relationship through all those years.

 

[That Poppy]

You´re character seems fine, go ahead and create the Kingdom in the Lore tab. After that, i´d love for some discussions about character relations, as both our characters are significantly older and would surely have a special kind of relationship through all those years.

Ok, I'll get working on the lore and once I finish I'll be sure to PM you.