The Dimension Keepers

Dandelion Princess

Dandelion Princess

Leader and Protector of the Dandel People

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I can see that you took the time to list out the available powers for dimension keepers. For the first power, time progression, how exactly would that work? Or is the specification up to us?


 
The reason I ask is because altering the rate of the flow of time, precisely as described with no other effect, would appear to have no effect, and I was unsure of as to what degree we could expand on the power as mentioned in the overview.
 
@Dandelion Princess - May I reserve the 6th power for a character I plan to make? I'm on my way to work so you should expect a sheet following this in the next 3-5 hours, if work is slow enough. You said go all out, so I will.
 
CalamariHero said:
I can see that you took the time to list out the available powers for dimension keepers. For the first power, time progression, how exactly would that work? Or is the specification up to us?
 
The reason I ask is because altering the rate of the flow of time, precisely as described with no other effect, would appear to have no effect, and I was unsure of as to what degree we could expand on the power as mentioned in the overview.
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I say you totally have at it with expanding upon the power. The Dimension Keepers were meant to protect all of time and space so I'm expecting some powerful descriptions.


 
@CalamariHero, @cremora, your spots have been reserved. I added some details about reserving spots; it's in green in the overview tab.
 
May I post my WIP in the character sign up and let you know when it's done, or is that taboo?
 
cremora said:
May I post my WIP in the character sign up and let you know when it's done, or is that taboo?
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Go ahead and post it. :)


 
@Aqua, For your character sheet, I don't think you completely understand that the Dimension Keepers are one of a kind. I suppose that I should have specified this to save confusion but the Dimension Keepers used to happily live in Dimension Zero but after a series of unfortunate events, they were forced into hiding. It's very very very unlikely that Dimension Keeper would have hidden in a dimension that reflects their own powers. (Also before you get confused again, your character is the descendant of the Dimension Keeper that was forced into hiding). So in other words, your character is the only being in existence with your abilities (or at least to such a high caliber) and they should be living a normal life, possibly unaware of their powers.


Additionally, I'm looking for more "meat" in your paragraphs and I think it would be a good idea for you to reread the lore before continuing your character sheet. The Dimension Class is incorrect on your character sheet.
 
[QUOTE="Dandelion Princess]Go ahead and post it. :)
 
@Aqua, For your character sheet, I don't think you completely understand that the Dimension Keepers are one of a kind. I suppose that I should have specified this to save confusion but the Dimension Keepers used to happily live in Dimension Zero but after a series of unfortunate events, they were forced into hiding. It's very very very unlikely that Dimension Keeper would have hidden in a dimension that reflects their own powers. (Also before you get confused again, your character is the descendant of the Dimension Keeper that was forced into hiding). So in other words, your character is the only being in existence with your abilities (or at least to such a high caliber) and they should be living a normal life, possibly unaware of their powers.


Additionally, I'm looking for more "meat" in your paragraphs and I think it would be a good idea for you to reread the lore before continuing your character sheet. The Dimension Class is incorrect on your character sheet.

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Hmm I get it thanks for saying.
 
cremora said:
@Dandelion Princess - for power 6, "other living things", does this mean the keeper themselves cannot be changed by their powers?
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They can change themselves as well as others.


 


[QUOTE="Alad V]Any word on Rear Admiral O'Finriel's acceptance?

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From what I've read, it's beautiful and I'm going to print it out and frame it for all to see.
 
@Dandelion Princess - Still working on my sheet, I'm sorry. Almost done. Only have a few pieces left!


 
I will need an extension for my character sheet if that's okay. My only access to a PC at the moment is my work PC. My work schedule is Sunday-Wednesday. I can finish it Sunday morning, if that's okay? (only reason I got work done yesterday and today is due to overtime which is rare...)
 
cremora said:
@Dandelion Princess - Still working on my sheet, I'm sorry. Almost done. Only have a few pieces left!
 
I will need an extension for my character sheet if that's okay. My only access to a PC at the moment is my work PC. My work schedule is Sunday-Wednesday. I can finish it Sunday morning, if that's okay? (only reason I got work done yesterday and today is due to overtime which is rare...)
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That will be just fine.
 
@Aqua, your character sheet still falls far below par... I'm disheartened by what you've given me. I seems as if you haven't read the other tabs yet, which is important for pretty much any roleplay. Your character sheet is missing criteria and the sections that you do have are either incorrect or not completed to what I asked for. You're going for a Dimension Keeper position which is a very important position so I need a character sheet that meets my requirements. From my understanding, you just haven't grasped the concept of the roleplay yet, so I highly suggest that you look at Cremora's or General ostruppen's character sheets for examples and then use them as a guideline to make the best character possible. If you have ANY questions at all, come to me. I really need for you to do that, even if it's the smallest question. I'm trying to be hard on everyone because I've spent two week writing a roleplay from concept that I've been developing for over 3 years. I'm just asking for you to return a percentage of that effort back.


Additionally, if what I'm asking for is too much for you to handle roleplay-wise (and that's totally okay! I was in your position before), then feel free to drop the roleplay. If you think you need to drop it but you still like the concept, then we can arrange a less demanding 1x1 roleplay based around the subject, alright? On the other hand, if you still want to tackle this group roleplay, I need you to step it up. Blow me out the water!
 
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