The Core of Power

Name: Currently Unknown


Code Name (if applicable): The Rook


Age: Currently Unknown


Gender: Currently Unknown


Appearance: Underneath Rook's armor. (If anyone manages to get close enough), a single grey eye can be seen through the visor of its helm, on the right side of its face. Nothing else can be seen.


Costume Appearance:


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Power: Basic Stone manipulation.


Rook is able to manipulate stone, to shape it, move it, control it. At the current moment in time, Rook is only able to control its armor and weapons. However, it is practically a moving mountain, and incredibly difficult to stop. At 8 feet tall, this suit of armor towers over its foes, and is strong enough to smash down walls easily. It is resistant against many things, being entirely immune to electricity, thanks to its armor, and being heavily resistant to traditional weaponry, as bullets have little effect. Due to its weight, it has very little balance, and can be knocked over. Once on its back, it has trouble getting back up. Blades have trouble piercing the armor, however brute, blunt force can knock it onto its back.


Limitations: Anything other than stone is uncontrollable. Additionally, it is unable to control anything other than its armor, and weapons at the moment. It is incredibly slow however, and is rather large, unable to fit in tight spaces. Additionally, water is a MAJOR weakness. The suit of armor does not float, and water inside of the armor can easily drown the mutant inside. Fire is also a weakness, but only in high ammounts. If there is too much, the armor can turn into a furnace, and roast the mutant inside. Additionally, it is quite loud, and is entirely unable to hide.


Class: Vigilante, though mostly neutral.


Bio: Nothing is known about Rook. The suit of armor does no give away even so much as a name. However, several educated guesses could be made. Judging by its simple vocabulary, and lack of knowledge about many things, it came from a rather poor family. It seems to get nervous around people, and is quite suspicious. So, it has probably been betrayed in its past, bullied, or both. It lives alone, in some dark, quiet alleyway, without a family or friends, so it can be guessed that they died, moved away, or were imprisoned.


Rook's history since the landing of the core however, is much more clear. Several days after the core landed, rumors spread of a massive stone figure wandering the city. These rumors became newspaper articles, when this strange stone figure began to go on a vigilante spree. First, a bank robbery. Two armed men had entered one of the city's smaller banks when it was closed. One of them was an employee, who knew how to get inside. A citizen saw them in the act, and phoned the police. However, when the police arrived, a gun battle ensued between the police and the two robbers. One of the robbers seemed to be a crack-shot with the AR-15 he carried, and killed two police officers. However, suddenly, Rook appeared, barreling through the police lines, and simply smashing through the bank's doors, a massive stone club, and a stone shield as tall as a man in its hands. The robber's bullets simply bounced off, as it took the first shooter out, flattening him against the wall with its shield. The second one tried to flee, but a horizontal swing of the club sent him hurling out the window, his spine and many of his ribs broken. The police didn't open fire, out of fear of being the next ones to be flattened, as the suit of armor simply walked out. Over the next few months, Rook would stop several crimes, all of which murders or attempted murders. None of the criminal scum who encountered Rook recieved any mercy, being smashed into pulps.


Other: Can't stop the rock. Also, highfive to anyone who understands where the costume is from. I think he might just be a tad OP. Sorry
 
SirDerpingtonIV said:
Name: Currently Unknown
Code Name (if applicable): The Rook


Age: Currently Unknown


Gender: Currently Unknown


Appearance: Underneath Rook's armor. (If anyone manages to get close enough), a single grey eye can be seen through the visor of its helm, on the right side of its face. Nothing else can be seen.


Costume Appearance:


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Power: Basic Stone manipulation.


Rook is able to manipulate stone, to shape it, move it, control it. At the current moment in time, Rook is only able to control its armor and weapons. However, it is practically a moving mountain, and incredibly difficult to stop. At 8 feet tall, this suit of armor towers over its foes, and is strong enough to smash down walls easily. It is resistant against many things, being entirely immune to electricity, thanks to its armor, and being heavily resistant to traditional weaponry, as bullets have little effect. Due to its weight, it has very little balance, and can be knocked over. Once on its back, it has trouble getting back up. Blades have trouble piercing the armor, however brute, blunt force can knock it onto its back.


Limitations: Anything other than stone is uncontrollable. Additionally, it is unable to control anything other than its armor, and weapons at the moment. It is incredibly slow however, and is rather large, unable to fit in tight spaces. Additionally, water is a MAJOR weakness. The suit of armor does not float, and water inside of the armor can easily drown the mutant inside. Fire is also a weakness, but only in high ammounts. If there is too much, the armor can turn into a furnace, and roast the mutant inside. Additionally, it is quite loud, and is entirely unable to hide.


Class: Vigilante, though mostly neutral.


Bio: Nothing is known about Rook. The suit of armor does no give away even so much as a name. However, several educated guesses could be made. Judging by its simple vocabulary, and lack of knowledge about many things, it came from a rather poor family. It seems to get nervous around people, and is quite suspicious. So, it has probably been betrayed in its past, bullied, or both. It lives alone, in some dark, quiet alleyway, without a family or friends, so it can be guessed that they died, moved away, or were imprisoned.


Rook's history since the landing of the core however, is much more clear. Several days after the core landed, rumors spread of a massive stone figure wandering the city. These rumors became newspaper articles, when this strange stone figure began to go on a vigilante spree. First, a bank robbery. Two armed men had entered one of the city's smaller banks when it was closed. One of them was an employee, who knew how to get inside. A citizen saw them in the act, and phoned the police. However, when the police arrived, a gun battle ensued between the police and the two robbers. One of the robbers seemed to be a crack-shot with the AR-15 he carried, and killed two police officers. However, suddenly, Rook appeared, barreling through the police lines, and simply smashing through the bank's doors, a massive stone club, and a stone shield as tall as a man in its hands. The robber's bullets simply bounced off, as it took the first shooter out, flattening him against the wall with its shield. The second one tried to flee, but a horizontal swing of the club sent him hurling out the window, his spine and many of his ribs broken. The police didn't open fire, out of fear of being the next ones to be flattened, as the suit of armor simply walked out. Over the next few months, Rook would stop several crimes, all of which murders or attempted murders. None of the criminal scum who encountered Rook recieved any mercy, being smashed into pulps.


Other: Can't stop the rock. Also, highfive to anyone who understands where the costume is from. I think he might just be a tad OP. Sorry
Accepted.
 
SirDerpingtonIV said:
Wait, really?
I have seen you in action before and think your weaknesses balance out your power. I just figured I would need to see him in action before I made a final decision.
 
Shog said:
I have seen you in action before and think your weaknesses balance out your power. I just figured I would need to see him in action before I made a final decision.
Oh. Alrighty.
 
Name: Misaki Katsuya


Code Name: Warped Witch


Age: 22


Gender: Female


Appearence: ((She wears her costume all the time.))
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Costume Appearance: See above^


Power: Misaki's spells are not predictable, they are highly chaotic in nature and are devastating with the right combination. Here is the list of spells she can do.


Twisty-Turny Blizzaga: Fires an orb of ice at the ground that shoots forward and rebounds off walls.


Lickety-Split Thundaga: Fires a string of lightning bolts at opponents.


Waggle-Wobbly Firaga: Throw a fireball that zig-zags towards opponents and hits multiple times, stunning them.


Limitations: She cannot target multiple objects, and gets tired after using a lot of spells in a row.


Class: Villain


Bio: Born in Hiroshima after little boy was dropped, the radiation began to edit her DNA in an odd way, it began to give her telekinetic property over natural elements, fire, ice and lightning, however it came at the cost of her sanity.The US and several other forces have attempt to capture her and use her as a weapon, driving her away. However, she does fight regularly.
 
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GimmickPuppet said:
Name: Misaki Katsuya
Power: Time Compression: Misaki has the ability to manipulate the flow of time itself, she can either slow it down or speed it up, she can also target a single person and increase the speed they go through time or slow them. However, she cannot reverse time. nor stop their movement through time.


Limitations: She cannot target multiple objects, and she can only control a target as large as a tank.


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Pretty sure that's not going to pass, it says in the rules that people can't use time powers. :/ New idea perhaps?
 
((My bad, thought it was another RP. This is what happens when I create something at 2 in the morning lol.
 
GimmickPuppet said:
Name: Misaki Katsuya
Code Name: Warped Witch


Age: 22


Gender: Female


Appearence:
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Costume Appearance: Same as in picture above.


Power: Misaki's spells are not predictable, they are highly chaotic in nature and are devastating with the right combination. Here is the list of spells she can do.


Twisty-Turny Blizzaga: Fires an orb of ice at the ground that shoots forward and rebounds off walls.


Lickety-Split Thundaga: Fires a string of lightning bolts at opponents.


Waggle-Wobbly Firaga: Throw a fireball that zig-zags towards opponents and hits multiple times, stunning them.


Havoc Wing: Flip and sprout bone blades to stab opponents.


Trine: Summons three triangles to converge on opponents.


Hyperdrive: Fires a wave of explosions along the ground. Fully charged version pursues the opponent into the air.


Forskaen: Misaki conjures a field of energy that tracks opponents, dropping magical orbs on them from above.


Limitations: She cannot target multiple objects, and gets tired after using a lot of spells in a row.


Class: Villain


Bio: Will reveal in RP.
I have no problem with people having a couple of closely related powers, but this is too much and too unrelated. That is unless your power is simply magic, but if that is the case then this RP might not be best for you. And in your bio I do need something. You can state it in a way that hides whatever it is you're trying to hide and I most certainly don't need everything from birth to present. The last thing is more of a pet peeve of mine than anything, but put the picture under costume appearance and under normal appearance state what she wears when she is not in costume. If she always wears her costume, then do the same thing but state she always wears her costume in the normal appearance section. Like I said, the last one is more of a pet peeve than anything.
 
Name: Barry Graves


Code Name (if applicable): Outbreak


Age: 18


Gender: Male


Appearance: Unruly blonde hair and green eyes. He is handsome but very dirty looking and his nails are very worn evidence of frequent use of them for tasks unknown.


Costume Appearance: Wears a pale dark green hoodie and black jeans. Under the hoodie is a black t-shirt. All his clothes show severe sign of age and abuse.


Power: Control and manipulate disease. A weaponized virus, dubbed "Killer Bee" that is infused in his body and that he can use to attack people's bodies. Open wounds make it much easier for Barry to affect you and enhance the effects of various disease symptoms.


Limitations: Normal medication won't do much but preventing exposure, ie covering your mouth and skin. It is much more difficult for Barry to penetrate the skin and takes a lot of concentration. Doing this should render Barry harmless, unless he has already diseased your body. In that situation simply get as far away as possible from Barry and he would lose control of the pathogens, which basically makes all the diseases he has placed in your harmless.


Class: Good (...sort of....He won't hurt any other character unless he has reason to believe you will turn him in and he will mercilessly kill anyone, mutant or not, that is associated with the government or military)


Bio(2 paragraphs minimum): Barry was always a quiet boy who studied hard in his home city of San Francisco. I never really had a social life because is overly oppressive parents emphasized getting good grades. So day in day out Barry stayed at home studying without the liberty of going out and seeing the city. All his life, Barry longed to go and meet people. All his life, it's slowly driven him mad.


That was when the Core hit. A sudden rumbling soon followed by all the lights in his house powering down. It stayed like that for a few days until they finally came back on, soon finding out that everyone was to be given a DNA test in order to be catalogued as mutant or not. But the nearest station was several blocks away and he knew his parents wouldn't let him go. So he snuck out and began walking to it. Then it hit him. A wave of pain and naseua racked his body. He fell to the floor and slipped unconscience.


About a week later, Barry woke up in a lab. Or to better fit the description, brightly lit room where he was isolated and was being observed through a window by scientists. The only exit was located just right of the window and it contained the bio chemical symbol that represented danger. Then one of the scientists picks up a mic and and says, "You are to remain where you are. Your mutant body has obtained the ability to infuse itself with a highly dangerous, weaponized virus. You will be kept here and away from the public for disease safety."


Barry stayed there for the 7 months, and the utter isolation drove him overboard. His madness consumed him and he began to plot his escape. One day, a fully suited scientist came to give him his breakfast meal. Instead of grabbing the bowl, however, he grabbed the scientist and unzipped just a tiny bit of his suit. Enough that Barry infected him with diseases of all sorts until the scientist lay motionless on the floor. He then took the scientists key and escaped his room. None of the other scientists were prepared for this and he infected them all with crippling viruses and bacteria rendering them unable to stop him. Then he got out of the lab itself. Walking into the city, New York, Barry found out, and keeping a low profile to keep himself from getting caught by the government or military but not afraid to kill anyone if they ever got in his way.
 
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rapjack123 said:
Name: Barry Graves
Code Name (if applicable): Outbreak


Age: 18


Gender: Male


Appearance: Unruly blonde hair and green eyes. He is handsome but very dirty looking and his nails are very worn evidence of frequent use of them for tasks unknown.


Costume Appearance: Wears a pale dark green hoodie and black jeans. Under the hoodie is a black t-shirt. All his clothes show severe sign of age and abuse.


Power: Control and manipulate disease. A weaponized virus, dubbed "Killer Bee" that is infused in his body and that he can use to attack people's bodies. Open wounds make it much easier for Barry to affect you and enhance the effects of various disease symptoms.


Limitations: Normal medication won't do much but preventing exposure, ie covering your mouth and skin. It is much more difficult for Barry to penetrate the skin and takes a lot of concentration. Doing this should render Barry harmless, unless he has already diseased your body. In that situation simply get as far away as possible from Barry and he would lose control of the pathogens, which basically makes all the diseases he has placed in your harmless.


Class: Good (...sort of....He won't hurt any other character unless he has reason to believe you will turn him in and he will mercilessly kill anyone, mutant or not, that is associated with the government or military)


Bio(2 paragraphs minimum): Barry was always a quiet boy who studied hard in his home city of San Francisco. I never really had a social life because is overly oppressive parents emphasized getting good grades. So day in day out Barry stayed at home studying without the liberty of going out and seeing the city. All his life, Barry longed to go and meet people. All his life, it's slowly driven him mad.


That was when the Core hit. A sudden rumbling soon followed by all the lights in his house powering down. It stayed like that for a few days until they finally came back on, soon finding out that everyone was to be given a DNA test in order to be catalogued as mutant or not. But the nearest station was several blocks away and he knew his parents wouldn't let him go. So he snuck out and began walking to it. Then it hit him. A wave of pain and naseua racked his body. He fell to the floor and slipped unconscience.


About a week later, Barry woke up in a lab. Or to better fit the description, brightly lit room where he was isolated and was being observed through a window by scientists. The only exit was located just right of the window and it contained the bio chemical symbol that represented danger. Then one of the scientists picks up a mic and and says, "You are to remain where you are. Your mutant body has obtained the ability to infuse itself with a range of diseases and is seemingly unnaffected, as well as being able to manipulate and control the pathogens. You will be kept here and away from the public for disease safety."


Barry stayed there for the 7 months, and the utter isolation drove him overboard. His madness consumed him and he began to plot his escape. One day, a fully suited scientist came to give him his breakfast meal. Instead of grabbing the bowl, however, he grabbed the scientist and unzipped just a tiny bit of his suit. Enough that Barry infected him with diseases of all sorts until the scientist lay motionless on the floor. He then took the scientists key and escaped his room. None of the other scientists were prepared for this and he infected them all with crippling viruses and bacteria rendering them unable to stop him. Then he got out of the lab itself. Walking into the city, New York, Barry found out, and keeping a low profile to keep himself from getting caught by the government or military but not afraid to kill anyone if they ever got in his way.
Accepted.
 
Name: Carly Nagisa


Code Name: None.


Age: 18


Gender: Female


Appearance:
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Costume Appearance: Carly wears a white and blue striped T-Shirt, an Orange jacket and black trousers with an orange belt and orange trainers to match.


Power: Perfect Fortune Telling, Carly uses a Deck of cards to predict her Future. Every morning when she wakes up, she draws 3 cards, the first drawn card predicts the fortune of her morning, the second her afternoon, the third her night. The cards are as following:


Fortune-Telling Witch Hikari-Chan ((Element Alignment: Light))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Super Happy"!


Your lucky number is 1.



Your lucky color is yellow.



Your lucky item is a shiny charm.



All of your wishes will come true!



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Fortune-Telling Witch En-Chan ((Element Alignment: Fire))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Very Happy"!


Your lucky number is 2.



Your lucky color is red.



Your lucky item is a goldfish.



I bet something really fun will happen!



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Fortune-Telling Witch Hu-Chan ((Element Alignment: Wind))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is not too bad.


Your lucky number is 3.



Your lucky color is green.



Your lucky item is a plant.



You might find something you lost.



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Fortune-Telling Witch Swee-Chan ((Element Alignment: Water))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "A Little Bad".


Your lucky number is 4.



Your lucky color is blue.



Your lucky item is an umbrella.



Your luck may change if you head to the east.



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Fortune-Telling Witch Ann-Chan ((Element Alignment: Dark))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Unhappy".


Your lucky number is 5.



Your lucky color is purple.



Your lucky item is a pair of sunglasses.



Make sure to keep hold of your belongings!



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Fortune-Telling Witch Chee-Chan ((Element Alignment: Earth))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Absolutely Awful"!


Your lucky number is 6.



Your lucky color is black.



Your lucky item is a pair of leather shoes.



You're giving your rivals a big head start! Come on!



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She has 3 of each card in her Deck.


The best prediction she can get is 3 Hikaris, meaning her day will go perfectly and she will succeed at everything. The worst prediction she can get is 3 Chees, where everything she tries to do will go wrong.


She can also materialize the Witches if they need to fight for her by reciting the text on the card aloud, their attacks are based around the Element they are Aligned to. They are all 1 foot tall, and have only been able to be created in the real world since Carly received her power.


Limitations: Although she can predict her day in general, they only show her the direction of luck she will get. She has no idea what exactly is in store for her, and she can only do predictions when she is calm and happy, bad moods will affect the outcome of her predictions. She can also only summon one Witch at a time to fight for her.


Class: Hero


Bio: Carly was born in Osaka, Japan. Her Father was the manager of a very busy bank, her Mother was a stay-at home mother who looked after Carly. She was 7 when she first received her Fortune-Telling Deck. She isn't a social person, preferring to be alone most of the time, and when she was younger instead of playing with the other children, she went off to a corner and had pretend conversations with the Witches, which worried her parents as she continued to do this until she was 13. She eventually stopped after receiving some harsh home truths, but although it stopped her childish behavior, she became even more withdrawn, only talking when people talked to her, and even then her responses were very short. When she was 16, she moved with her parents to New York, and was entered in High School, ((I'm British, I know nothing of your Education system. PM Me if I put her in the wrong thing and tell me what she should have been in instead at that age.)) where she was bullied as she was quiet and couldn't speak very good English. this continued for a year until the Core struck, giving Carly her perfect predictions and ability to materializes and talk to her Witches, which returned her to her former happy-go-lucky, bubbly self. Now able to speak decent English, she uses her abilities to help others in need of cheering up, often stacking the deck for them, but she doesn't do it for herself.
 
GimmickPuppet said:
Name: Carly Nagisa
Code Name: None.


Age: 18


Gender: Female


Appearance:
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Costume Appearance: Carly wears a white and blue striped T-Shirt, an Orange jacket and black trousers with an orange belt and orange trainers to match.


Power: Perfect Fortune Telling, Carly uses a Deck of cards to predict her Future. Every morning when she wakes up, she draws 3 cards, the first drawn card predicts the fortune of her morning, the second her afternoon, the third her night. The cards are as following:


Fortune-Telling Witch Hikari-Chan ((Element Alignment: Light))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Super Happy"!


Your lucky number is 1.



Your lucky color is yellow.



Your lucky item is a shiny charm.



All of your wishes will come true!



FortuneFairyHikari-TF04-JP-VG.png



Fortune-Telling Witch En-Chan ((Element Alignment: Fire))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Very Happy"!


Your lucky number is 2.



Your lucky color is red.



Your lucky item is a goldfish.



I bet something really fun will happen!



FortuneFairyEn-TF04-JP-VG.png



Fortune-Telling Witch Hu-Chan ((Element Alignment: Wind))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is not too bad.


Your lucky number is 3.



Your lucky color is green.



Your lucky item is a plant.



You might find something you lost.



FortuneFairyHu-TF04-JP-VG.png



Fortune-Telling Witch Swee-Chan ((Element Alignment: Water))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "A Little Bad".


Your lucky number is 4.



Your lucky color is blue.



Your lucky item is an umbrella.



Your luck may change if you head to the east.



FortuneFairySwee-TF04-JP-VG.png



Fortune-Telling Witch Ann-Chan ((Element Alignment: Dark))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Unhappy".


Your lucky number is 5.



Your lucky color is purple.



Your lucky item is a pair of sunglasses.



Make sure to keep hold of your belongings!



FortuneFairyAnn-TF04-JP-VG.png



Fortune-Telling Witch Chee-Chan ((Element Alignment: Earth))


Drawing this card means your fortune today is "Absolutely Awful"!


Your lucky number is 6.



Your lucky color is black.



Your lucky item is a pair of leather shoes.



You're giving your rivals a big head start! Come on!



FortuneFairyChee-TF04-JP-VG.png






She has 3 of each card in her Deck.


The best prediction she can get is 3 Hikaris, meaning her day will go perfectly and she will succeed at everything. The worst prediction she can get is 3 Chees, where everything she tries to do will go wrong.


She can also materialize the Witches if they need to fight for her by reciting the text on the card aloud, their attacks are based around the Element they are Aligned to. They are all 1 foot tall, and have only been able to be created in the real world since Carly received her power.


Limitations: Although she can predict her day in general, they only show her the direction of luck she will get. She has no idea what exactly is in store for her, and she can only do predictions when she is calm and happy, bad moods will affect the outcome of her predictions. She can also only summon one Witch at a time to fight for her.


Class: Hero


Bio: Carly was born in Osaka, Japan. Her Father was the manager of a very busy bank, her Mother was a stay-at home mother who looked after Carly. She was 7 when she first received her Fortune-Telling Deck. She isn't a social person, preferring to be alone most of the time, and when she was younger instead of playing with the other children, she went off to a corner and had pretend conversations with the Witches, which worried her parents as she continued to do this until she was 13. She eventually stopped after receiving some harsh home truths, but although it stopped her childish behavior, she became even more withdrawn, only talking when people talked to her, and even then her responses were very short. When she was 16, she moved with her parents to New York, and was entered in High School, ((I'm British, I know nothing of your Education system. PM Me if I put her in the wrong thing and tell me what she should have been in instead at that age.)) where she was bullied as she was quiet and couldn't speak very good English. this continued for a year until the Core struck, giving Carly her perfect predictions and ability to materializes and talk to her Witches, which returned her to her former happy-go-lucky, bubbly self. Now able to speak decent English, she uses her abilities to help others in need of cheering up, often stacking the deck for them, but she doesn't do it for herself.
Look, your last two characters have been magic based in a non-magic world. I can not accept anything magical.
 
@Shog


I edited my character , just how we both agreed. Is he better now?


@Wavebird


Sorry ,Shog asked me to modify my character a little so both of us agreed to tone down his peak human condition to olympic level and eliminate the magnetic weakness of his chains , thus making his chains not being made of steel anymore ...so probably no more fun for your character xD .
 
Shog said:
Look, your last two characters have been magic based in a non-magic world. I can not accept anything magical.
To put it scientifically, It's not magical, it's wibbly wobbly timey-wimey... stuff.
 
GimmickPuppet said:
To put it scientifically, It's not magical, it's wibbly wobbly timey-wimey... stuff.
I assume you are referencing your first character which I was not. I never even saw your first CS except for in a quote. My point remains.
 
GimmickPuppet said:
To put it scientifically, It's not magical, it's wibbly wobbly timey-wimey... stuff.
Maybe you could try to have a power where you creat illusion by messing with other people's minds. Kinda make them see what's not really there. That might work.
 
Shog said:
I assume you are referencing your first character which I was not. I never even saw your first CS except for in a quote. My point remains.
I was referencing Doctor Who.
 
[QUOTE="Azure Sky]
Name: Byron Evans
Code Name: Chain Snake


Age: 21


Gender: male


Appearance:


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Costume:


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Powers:


#Enhanced condition (+sixth sense)- Byron's physical condition was enhanced in such a way that he can be compared to Olyimpic gold-medalists and he needs absolutely no maintaining to keep it this way. He can bench press up to 300 kg with no equipment, lift up to 200 kg above his head for roughly a minute, run at a maximum speed of almost 10 m/s and perform long jumps of about 8 meters, high jumps of 2.20 meters and standing high jumps of 1.70 meters, while also possesing very high levels of agility, dexterity, durability, stamina and a punching speed of ten punches per second (with both hands). He also has a sixth sense (danger intuition).


#Unusual chain manipulation- Byron can generate and manipulate chains made from an unknown metal which is non-magnetic and is slightly more durable than steel. He can use these chains as whips, surround his body with them to use the chains as armor, use them to climb walls in a way or another or simply restrain others with them. The maxium speed at which he can move the chains is equal to the peak speed of arrows ( 100 m/s).


Limitations: people who have good enough reflexes and high enough levels of agility to dodge peak speed arrows can also dodge his chains. The chains can also be melted with a high enough temperature, turn britle and shatter under extreme cold and they can only reach a maximum radius of 50 meters. Regarding his sixth sense/danger intuition: he can only feel the danger a few seconds before happening and only regarding himself.


Class: antihero (unlike a traditional hero, he lacks conventional qualities such as idealism and morality)


Bio: Byron was always interested in training both his body and mind, so that he could become an outstanding police officer one day and he always gave his all to be the best in his class, in the city of Washington.He would study alot and train his body while also practicing kenpo and aikido. Beliving he was strong, Byron never feared anybody. One day when he got home , he heared the scream of his mother and went to see what happened. Two muscular masked criminals entered his house, murdered his father and attempted to rape his mother. He was 17 back then and he belived himself to be was quite an outstanding fighter because of his martial arts training. But he was controled by rage and simply charged against the two criminals. While he did put up a fight against the two, they eventually stabbed him with a knife and then knocked him off,. Fortunately, his mother managed to escape and her calls for help caught the attention of the neighbours and the criminals decided to scram. His father was dead and his mother was in state of shock . A year later, the criminals where caught by the police. Even if Byron awaited justice, for some reason the criminals let free because of lack of evidence. The justice Byron belived in failed him . He became angry and even more depressed and sad.


Another two years later when he was 20, Byron was hit by a mysterious shockwave which greatly enhanced his physical condition, changed his eye color from light brown to red, made his pupils become slit-shaped and gave him the ability to control chains made from an unknown metal, while also making him develop a sixth sense. He found out it was because of a mysterious object which simingly fell in the Pacific Ocean. Byron took the event as a sign: if the so-called justice of America was rotten, then he should belive in his own justice. After a year of training and understanding how to use his powers, Byron belived he was ready. His mother was never the same after his father's death, always gloomy , always silent, always sad, until one day when she remarried with a kind man. Byron convinced his mother that he needs to change his life and went to New York, where the two criminals resided. Even if he was tested and catalogued as a mutant, Byron made it so that people only knew he was able to control and generate chains, without letting others find out about his enhanced condition , therefore people weren't interestested enough to take him away for experiments. As he arrived to New York he found the two criminals, and to his utmost joy they didn't become mutants. He beat them up to a pulp, broke their hands and legs and gauged out an eye from each of them but let them live. They never knew who he was because he was wearing his costume. He took the secret identity of Chain Snake and decided to become a vigilante and help people when the rotten system of America didn't give them what they deserved. In the day he is an university student, learining languages so he could operate in more countries in the future, but when it's needed he puts on his costume and goes on a... hunt.

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All the changes are good, but (and I fully admit this is my fault for not catching this sooner) could you please take the maximum chain speed down a bit, or at least say it takes a bit of time to get it that fast or something? Like I said, my fault and I'm not stopping you from RPing.


 


GimmickPuppet said:
I was referencing Doctor Who.
Yah, I got that. I'm just trying to find the relevance in it.
 
Shog said:
All the changes are good, but (and I fully admit this is my fault for not catching this sooner) could you please take the maximum chain speed down a bit, or at least say it takes a bit of time to get it that fast or something? Like I said, my fault and I'm not stopping you from RPing.
 



Yah, I got that. I'm just trying to find the relevance in it.
Ok , I nerfed the speed of his chains to half the speed they had before. All good now? :D
 
Name: Damian Portney


Code Name: "That One Guy"


Age: 16


Gender: Male


Appearance:


- Normal (Not white haired)


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-Day of Cataloging (Full Body Image)


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Costume Appearance:


- Full Costume, nearly completely paper except for pants and scarf (Ignore black face mask and red eyes), Hair covered in several minuscule paper scraps to give white appearance as a disguise.


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- Face Shot (Ignore red eyes)


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- Mask (Paper folded intensely into a ceramic-like form and material; hardened into density of ceramic items)


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Power: PAPER - Damian's power over paper is surprisingly versatile; he can control every form of paper, as well as create pulp and stock out of trace elements. Through special folding abilities and techniques, which would normally require hundreds of pounds of mechanical force, he can form deceptively durable paper armor, as well as remarkably sharp and precise projectile weapons. He is extremely effective in crowd control combat; despite that his direct physical power is lacking, he is extremely versatile in one on one combat and fast regardless.


He is also able to use paper to lift his body up, making him able to fly to an extent, and move at rapid speeds through the city without attracting much attention. He is also capable of a type of sliding through space, which consists of suddenly surrounding his body with numerous scraps and pieces of paper that near instantly move him away to another location in the vicinity, making him difficult to catch or find. He is easily tracked using this particular method of transportation as it can only be used over short distances effectively. Tracking is almost impossible if he his moving at an average speed, but is more easily detected.


Limitations: Anything that damages or destroys paper naturally (e. g. Fire, Water, etc.,), Sharp objects not included (Intensified density as described above) Powers essentially useless on paper that is soaked with water, as they are far too weighted to move, but is still usable if damp, but cannot fold together easily. Power usable in fire, but will most likely, and ultimately burn completely if attempted. Easily detected if lazily flying through the city.


Class: Vigilante, but Neutral and is relatively calm and passive; however, becomes insanely aggressive, to a borderline blood lust-type sadism, against attackers from any faction. He will not stand to see anyone subject to even a sliver of the cruelty he faced, and will protect or help anyone in need of it, human or mutant regardless.


Bio: Damion lived with his younger and older sisters, Katie and Rachael, ever since he was a child. They had become closer to him than anyone else in his small world. On the brink of entering college, his older sister, Rachael, was rushed to the hospital and diagnosed with a terminal case of AIDS, inherited from their mother, who was a carrier. Rachael was left in a comatose state after her first ordeal and passed on after two years, around the time Damion was entering high school. He and Katie fell into their individual depressions and barely ever spoke anymore, even to their parents, or to anyone at school.


One day, when Damion was in his sophomore year of high school and Katie in her there was an intense shockwave that resonated through their city, and both of them displayed symptoms of remarkable abilities that not even they themselves could understand. Their family had attempted to turn them in to the government, as many people had done so, and if it were not for the two fighting back and escaping, seeking to protect each other. They relied on each other for survival, but remained distant as a result of their guilt for leaving the other alone in their time of pain. They lived carefully in the shadows, avoiding the authorities to the best of their ability, doing anything possible to avoid being cataloged and separated, resorting to living like human cockroaches just to survive.


After several months of living together in this way, they began to grow closer. Eventually, they rekindled their former relationship, supporting each other out of their depressions. Damion and Katie lived peacefully together from then on, making money however they could, from petty theft to working part-time to underworld contracts, they did anything to stay alive, even after the fervor surrounding the mutations subsided; they had no other life to go back to, after all. During this time, they had grown significantly in their powers, discovering their properties and usages quickly and applying them to survival. They were able to get away from authorities easily using their powers to distract them while posing as simple street rats, escaping cleanly from every time... almost.


Around 9 months after the mutations, they were found by a squad of the Heroic Mutants assisting the police on a drug raid. Damion and Katie were simply taking refuge in the area and were mistaken for accomplices to the mutants of organized crime who fought against the heroes to protect their cargo. Damion and Katie fought back to escape, eventually finding an opening. Once they were out, they tried running away, only to be found by the police surrounding the perimeter, who opened fire upon them. Damion tried protecting the both of them, but had not yet learned to solidify his paper yet. Katie was hit in the stomach by a policeman's bullet and died four hours subsequent to the incident. Damion was left alone, having lost his entire family, and his reason to live. However, before Katie's death, she encouraged him to keep living his life so that he might be able to keep fighting. She wanted him to be able to find someone to take her place, so that one day, he could protect her when the time came.


Damion spent weeks in sorrow to mourn her death, then picked himself up and began experimenting with his paper to discover even less conventional uses for it. He discovered its hardening capabilities and its dissipating and reassembling factors and how they associated with his own body. He spent several months investigating more ways to use paper, and nearing his tenthth month since the mutation, he was caught. While manipulating his powers as usual, he was discovered by the military mutants who took him into custody after identifying that he was, in fact, a mutant. They cataloged him swiftly, but due to the process of making new additions to the database, he was kept incarcerated for the remainder of the month. During his stay, he was subject to the torment and cruelty exhibited by the military to mutants, and unlike before, he fully understood how humans thought of their kind. After witnessing and experiencing their physical abuse first hand, he realized that mutants were little more than animals to common humanity, and how childish humans truly were.


On the day of his release, only four weeks from the end of the first year, he was abandoned outside the building with nothing to his name once again except for the clothes on his back. He went on his regular way and became a street rat as before. There was a bank being robbed by a group of criminal mutants from the gangs, and he took advantage of the situation to relinquish a large portion of the money for himself ($36,750 to be exact), which was remarkably easy considering it was mostly paper. He then set out to become a secure member of society once more and he started by relieving all accusations against him. He exchanged the stolen money securely through the mutant underworld for licensed dollars, then began to buy himself back to the middle-class lifestyle. He rented a proper apartment to call home and regularly bought groceries. He established a source of income by investing a significant portion of his money ($14,000) into a growing corporation ushering the world into an age of mutant labor known as Black Fist. Despite their animosity toward the mutated population and his animosity to people of such nature, Damion admitted that they were an extremely profitable company to invest in, the dividends coming out over 15% his original investment.


He lived laxly until the end of the year. the whole month, until a group of radicals protesting against the mutants vandalized his apartment building, burning it to the ground because the landlord was a mutant. It was only then that Damion realized that there was no hope for a home for mutants as long as such hate resides in the hearts of the people. From that day on, he placed all his financial assets in a bank account (totaling $110,543 after receiving final dividends and selling his numerous Black Fist shares), which might never be used again, and lived his life as a city hermit, scouring the city of New York as a sheet of paper drifting softly in the wind, watching closely as the days went past and left him behind. While not remaining active in the affairs of normal and mutant humans, he does help all those who ask for it with the greater good in mind, and, to an extent, believes that the ends justify the means.









 

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Jabrark said:
Name: Damian Portney
Code Name: "That One Guy"


Age: 16


Gender: Male


Appearance:


- Normal (Not white haired)


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-Day of Cataloging (Full Body Image)


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Costume Appearance:


- Full Costume, nearly completely paper except for pants and scarf (Ignore black face mask and red eyes), Hair covered in several minuscule paper scraps to give white appearance as a disguise.


View attachment 101416


- Face Shot (Ignore red eyes)


View attachment 101415


- Mask (Paper folded intensely into a ceramic-like form and material; hardened into density of ceramic items)


View attachment 101417


Power: PAPER - Damian's power over paper is surprisingly versatile; he can control every form of paper, as well as create pulp and stock out of trace elements. Through special folding abilities and techniques, which would normally require hundreds of pounds of mechanical force, he can form deceptively durable paper armor, as well as projectile weapons.


He is also able to convert his body to adopt the qualities of paper, allowing him to use wind currents to move around, albeit erratically so. He is also capable of a type of teleportation, which consists of suddenly transforming his body into numerous scraps and pieces of paper that quickly disperse, then converge in another location, making him difficult to catch or find.


Limitations: Anything that damages or destroys paper (e. g. Fire, Water, etc.,), Sharp Items not included (Intensified density as described above) Powers unusable if any part of body comes in contact with water, including paper dissipation. Paper recedes back together rapidly reforming him should water touch any of it. Power usable in fire, but will ultimately burn completely if attempted.


Class: Neutral plus relatively calm and passive; however, insanely aggressive, to a borderline blood lust-type sadism, against attackers from any faction.


Bio: Damion lived with his younger and older sisters, Katie and Rachael, ever since he was a child. They had become closer to him than anyone else in his small world. On the brink of entering college, his older sister, Rachael, was rushed to the hospital and diagnosed with a terminal case of AIDS, inherited from their mother, who was a carrier. Rachael was left in a comatose state after her first ordeal and passed on after two years, around the time Damion was entering highschool. He and Katie fell into their individual depressions and barely ever spoke anymore, even to their parents, or to anyone at school.


One day, when Damion was in his sophomore year of highschool and Katie in her there was an intense shockwave that resonated through their city, and both of them displayed symptoms of remarkable abilities that not even they themselves could understand. Their family had attempted to turn them in to the government, as many people had done so, and if it were not for the two fighting back and escaping, seeking to protect each other. They relied on each other for survival, but remained distant as a result of their guilt for leaving the other alone in their time of pain. They lived carefully in the shadows, avoiding the authorities to the best of their ability, doing anything possible to avoid being cataloged and separated, resorting to living like human cockroaches just to survive.


After several months of living together in this way, they began to grow closer. Eventually, they rekindled their former relationship, supporting each other out of their depressions. Damion and Katie lived peacefully together from then on, making money however they could, from petty theft to working part-time to underworld contracts, they did anything to stay alive, even after the fervor surrounding the mutations subsided; they had no other life to go back to, after all. During this time, they had grown significantly in their powers, discovering their properties and usages quickly and applying them to survival. They were able to get away from authorities easily using their powers to distract them while posing as simple street rats, escaping cleanly from every time... almost.


Around 9 months after the mutations, they were found by a squad of the Heroic Mutants assisting the police on a drug raid. Damion and Katie were simply taking refuge in the area and were mistaken for accomplices to the mutants of organized crime who fought against the heroes to protect their cargo. Damion and Katie fought back to escape, eventually finding an opening. Once they were out, they tried running away, only to be found by the police surrounding the perimeter, who opened fire upon them. Damion tried protecting the both of them, but had not yet learned to solidify his paper yet. Katie was hit in the stomach by a policeman's bullet and died four hours subsequent to the incident. Damion was left alone, having lost his entire family, and his reason to live. However, before Katie's death, she encouraged him to keep living his life so that he might be able to keep fighting. She wanted him to be able to find someone to take her place, so that one day, he could protect her when the time came.


Damion spent weeks in sorrow to mourn her death, then picked himself up and began experimenting with his paper to discover even less conventional uses for it. He discovered its hardening capabilities and its dissipating and reassembling factors and how they associated with his own body. He spent several months investigating more ways to use paper, and nearing his tenthth month since the mutation, he was caught. While manipulating his powers as usual, he was discovered by the military mutants who took him into custody after identifying that he was, in fact, a mutant. They cataloged him swiftly, but due to the process of making new additions to the database, he was kept incarcerated for the remainder of the month.


On the day of his release, only four weeks from the end of the first year, he was abandoned outside the building with nothing to his name once again except for the clothes on his back. He went on his regular way and became a street rat as before. There was a bank being robbed by a group of criminal mutants from the gangs, and he took advantage of the situation to relinquish a large portion of the money for himself ($36,750 to be exact), which was remarkably easy considering it was mostly paper. He then set out to become a secure member of society once more and he started by relieving all accusations against him. He exchanged the stolen money securely through the mutant underworld for licensed dollars, then began to buy himself back to the middle-class lifestyle. He rented a proper apartment to call home and regularly bought groceries. He established a source of income by investing a significant portion of his money ($14,000) into a growing corporation ushering the world into an age of mutant labor known as Black Fist. Despite their animosity toward the mutated population and his animosity to people of such nature, Damion admitted that they were an extremely profitable company to invest in, the dividends coming out over 15% his original investment.


He lived laxly until the end of the year. the whole month, until a group of radicals protesting against the mutants vandalized his apartment building, burning it to the ground because the landlord was a mutant. It was only then that Damion realized that there was no hope for a home for mutants as long as such hate resides in the hearts of the people. From that day on, he placed all his financial assets in a bank account (totaling $110,543 after receiving final dividends and selling his numerous Black Fist shares), which might never be used again, and lived his life as a city hermit, scouring the city of New York as a sheet of paper drifting softly in the wind, watching closely as the days went past and left him behind. While not remaining active in the affairs of normal and mutant humans, he does help all those who ask for it with the greater good in mind, and, to an extent, believes that the ends justify the means.
He does not literally turn into a piece of paper, right? And I would like for you to remove the "teleportation" part. Under limitations I think you can tone down the water part a bit. For instance I think you should still be able to use your powers regardless of weather you are wet or not, but wet paper is harder to control or something along those lines. Anyway, I trust you understand what I mean.
 

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