[To Reign in Hell]Lucier, master swordsman

[Halofreak117]

Name:Lucier


Rank:Count


Epithets: Master of the blade, Striker of fear


Circle: Pride


Domain: Mountains of Steel


Appearance:


Taking the form of a muscular male made from steel, He wears armour wherever he goes. Wearing a crown of steel, decorated with blades and the heads of slain enemies. The sight of Lucier is one to behold.


Bio:


He is the strongest, quickest and most agile of swordsman. He takes pride in this boasting to many of the lords and counts of the circle of pride. He is occasionally called down to earth to help train and make the strongest swordsman but alas those who use the power of Lucier fade quickly and weaken even quicker.


He seeks to bring himself above and beyond all other demons of pride. Any one who enters his realm can ask for help, that is if they can beat him in sword combat.


His realm or domain is a torrent affair marked with blood, guts and the endless amounts of swords. His throne is a huge chair made from swords of fallen men


Attributes:


Strength 5


Dexterity 5


Fitness 4


Intellect 2


Intuition 2


Willpower 3


Bearing 3


Guile 2


Composure 3


Skills:


Athletics: 4


-Sprinting 5


Awareness 3


Defence 5


Parry 5


Melee 5


-swordsmanship 5


Ranged 2


Stealth 1


Unarmed 3


Social skills:


Animal handling 2


Empathy 1


-lying 2


Mingling 1


Persuasion 2


Preform subterfuge 2


Threats 4


Academic skills:


Academic 2


Administration 1


Artisan 1


Craft 3


Investigation 1


Lore 2


Medicine 2


Survival 4


Resonance :


Essence: 20


Strike like the wind: strike faster then ever before attacking before your opponent can event think


Resounding strength: Luciers strength and durability grow expidentially, allowing lucier to withstand any physical or ranged Attack


Blood be mine: the more the opponent bleeds the more strength and speed lucier gets


Blasphemeries:


Taste of steel: when in battle gain 5 resurgence per opponent killed


God killer: the longer a battle goes on the stronger, more durable and faster lucier gets


Steel rain: a shower of 10 swords fall on the enemy 1 damage per hit

 

[Grey]

The Blasphemies are not customizable - they are outlined quite clearly for Pride.


As for the Powers, they need some slight adjustment.


Strike Like The Wind can allow Lucier to strike first, by spending 5 Essence.


Resounding Strength adds +1 Soak for each Round Lucier remains in combat.


Blood Be Mine can increase Lucier's damage by 1 for every point of Health damage he deals.


You need to pick one more Power.


Any Skill over 3 has a focus - so in reality, for example, your Melee Skill is 3, with the Swordsman Focus at 5.


Defense 3


- Parry 5.


And so on, in similar vein. You cannot have that Empathy Focus in Lying, however - it should be Empathy 3, which still covers lying.


Is that any clearer?

 

[Halofreak117]

thanks ill fix it up

 

[Grey]

Also, what's the value of his Domain? Why is it worth owning?