DemonicAngel
Familiar for Hire
A story I started writing with a friend. Note: it is unfinished but when we hit that point if people want me to continue, I'll see what I can do. Opinions are appreciated but if your going to criticize then only constructive criticism please.
Onyx clenched his jaws tightly together to keep from exclaiming in pain, as the needle penetrated his skin. A slivery liquid was injected, and the needle removed. "What is that stuff? What does it do?" He asked, his arm starting to throb.
"Oh, you'll find out soon enough." A sinister voice replied.
Onyx's head began to ache, his thoughts were fuzzy "wh who are you?" now his words were starting to slur, he fought against the darkness to ask, "what ha' y done t' me? It's messin' wif mah brain." Onyx tried to lift his hands to his head, but they wouldn't do what he wanted them to. he shook his head to clear it. Pain shot through his brain and the blackness rushed in, a moan escaped his lips, and his head fell forward.
"Hehehe, phase one of the experiment went as planned. Keep an eye on him but move him into the back room." A tall man instructed his lackeys. They nodded and left dragging Onyx along with them."I think that master Brown will be pleased." He said to himself before exiting the room himself.
Onyx opened his eyes his vision slowly returning. His limbs felt like pounds of lead coated them. He couldn't move more than to breathe and blink. So he turned to his clouded thoughts, though even that was effort. What had happened? How did he get here? Where was here? Who were these people? And what did they want from him? The events from the previous night flashed through his mind. What was that stuff? What did it do? And many other questions filled his mind until he couldn't tell them apart any longer. He tried to quiet his thoughts when he heard a voice. It sounded like the voice of a adolesent boy, but was smooth and silky it made you wish to obey anything it told you to do.
"You don't need answers to these questions. You just need to get out of here. Do you know how to do that?" The voice said.
"No." Onyx thought in reply. "How?"
"I can't tell you that" the voice slipped like silk across his ears "you must find the answer yourself, before it's too late. Time is running out. "Think Onyx!"
Onyx's fuzzy head immediately cleared, and that left room for thought, unfortunately it also made room for a throbbing pain that he hadn't noticed before. he pushed it to the back of his mind, and took in his surroundings. he sat in a wooden chair, his ankles were tied to the legs of the chair and his hands to the armrests, the room was dimly lit, but he made out a low ceiling, a small curtain that concealed one corner, and a small curtained window that let in what little light there was. but whatever else could be said about the tiny room, it was so impeccably clean the old wood seemed to have a luminescence of it's own, Onyx could not, however, seem to locate a door.
'That's fine.' he thought, 'I don't need a door, yet, what I NEED is a way to untie myself. Now, how to do that?' He tried struggling against the bonds in hopes to loosen them, but to no avail. He had to think harder more unexpected. He scooched his chair across to the window and grasped the curtain in
between his his teeth, so as to open it. It didn't lead outside just to the rest of the building he was in. And of course there was nothing to help him there. So he tried the curtained corner of the room once he had pulled back the curtain though.He gasped at the sight of this thing sitting before him. It was an elderly man.
"Go away you said you'd leave me alone so long as I didn't try to escape." The old man cried out, and covered his face.
"I'm not going to hurt you. But I do have some questions that I think you can answer." Onyx said softly trying his best not to frighten the man any more. "What's your name?" At the sound of Onyx's voice the old man trembled all the more and crouched further into his corner. the man was as skeleton thin, with salt and pepper hair and a straggly mustache. "It's okay," Onyx assured him in what he hoped was a soothing tone, "I'm a prisoner here too, I won't hurt you, my name is Onyx" the man peeked up through his fingers, in the dim light Onyx saw his eyes, the irises were a neon yellow, and the pupils were diamond shaped slits.
"Onyx?" the man's murmur was almost inaudible, so quiet that Onyx had to strain to hear, and he got the feeling that the old man wasn't talking to him. "Hmmm, he doesn't look like one of them, does he Titka, no they wear the white things and never tell names. Look at that Titka, he's tied to a chair, They're never tied to chairs, maybe he can help us what does Titka think?"
a tiny voice came from somewhere in the corner, "Titka think he tell truth, but he not prisoner, he like Xno.
"What do you mean not prisoner? I'm being held against my will. That makes me a prisoner." Onyx said.
"Shhhh, not so loud Onyx. We not prisoner because we is test subjects. Titka says will untie if you quiet, and help us." Xno replied.
Onyx nodded his head in agreement and a tiny girl stepped out of the shadows and towards him. She was less than a foot high, and very slender, she had shoulder length red hair, and auburn eyes. she reminded Onyx of the leaves in the fall. "This must be Titka." Onyx thought. He decided to ask Xno some questions about what was going on while Titka untied him. "Ummm, do you mind answering some questions for me Xno?"
Xno looked at him warily, "Onyx not expect answer, then can ask. But must be quiet."
"Where is this place?" Onyx whispered. "And what can I do?" he tried not to squirm as Titka's tiny hands worked at his bonds and made his wrists itch.
"Xno not know where place is, asleep when get here, Titka not know, never see outside of room. Xno and Titka help Onyx, Onyx help Xno and Titka, we no stay here. Here bad."
"That's right," Titka put in, "It's no good here, 'speriments don't get'nuff food," A loud thump sounded from not far away and Titka scurried down from her perch to join the cowering Xno behind his curtain. footsteps approached rapidly.
Onyx let his head fall back against the chair and feigned unconciousness, leaving his eyes open in tiny almost imperceptible slits.
Onyx's chair suddenly shook hard, and a voice said. "You've slept long enough boy. Get-up I have some people here who would love to meet you." But Onyx wasn't thinking about that he was thinking about how the people had just seemed to materilize in the room. Onyx opened his eyes but didn't raise his head. "Have at 'im." the man said. And suddenly Onyx was surrounded by people. They shined lights in his eyes, and poked him in various places.
"Not good." *Onyx thought. *"They're definitely going to find that the ropes are untied."
"We can't have that Onyx they would spread the word that you were to be watched at all times. If one of them gets to near I may have to help. Which, I hate to sound lazy but I'd rather not. Especially considering that the old man doesn't seem like he needs that kind of shock right now." It was the same smooth voice that Onyx had heard earlier.
Just as Onyx thought of a plan the people all left. And as the guy who had spoken earlier left he said. "We'll be back in about two hours. Then you can have another dose of that delightful silver-" He cut himself off. "Stuff." He finished. Then left laughing hartily as he did. But in his teasing he had been careless and Onyx now knew right were the door was. Now all he needed to know was how to open it he remained still for a minute or two just to make sure everyone was gone. It took him entirely to long to wiggle the rest of the way out of the loosened bonds, ten minutes at the least, Onyx rubbed at his rope burned wrists and swollen hands. his head was aching again, so he rubbed that too. five minutes later the pounding in his head settled a bit and he was able to look about him again.
Warily Onyx attempted to stand, and failed, his legs had fallen asleep in the time he had sat there. 'No,' Onyx thought 'I'm NOT going to lose because of this.' slowly, painfully he began to rub life back into his deadened limbs. pins and needles shot up and down his leg wherever he massaged. he finished one foot and went on to the next this was taking much too long and when he finally got to the thighs he was pounding on them with his fists. with his legs finally back to life he was able to stand, albeit wobbly, he waited a few extra minutes to gain his balance and cursed himself for it all the while. he had less than an hour to get to the door, unlock it if need be, and figure out how to open it. he made his relatively unsteady way to the place where the man had exited the room, and in the dim light Onyx was able to make out a hairline seem in the wood, he had found the door.
Onyx clenched his jaws tightly together to keep from exclaiming in pain, as the needle penetrated his skin. A slivery liquid was injected, and the needle removed. "What is that stuff? What does it do?" He asked, his arm starting to throb.
"Oh, you'll find out soon enough." A sinister voice replied.
Onyx's head began to ache, his thoughts were fuzzy "wh who are you?" now his words were starting to slur, he fought against the darkness to ask, "what ha' y done t' me? It's messin' wif mah brain." Onyx tried to lift his hands to his head, but they wouldn't do what he wanted them to. he shook his head to clear it. Pain shot through his brain and the blackness rushed in, a moan escaped his lips, and his head fell forward.
"Hehehe, phase one of the experiment went as planned. Keep an eye on him but move him into the back room." A tall man instructed his lackeys. They nodded and left dragging Onyx along with them."I think that master Brown will be pleased." He said to himself before exiting the room himself.
Onyx opened his eyes his vision slowly returning. His limbs felt like pounds of lead coated them. He couldn't move more than to breathe and blink. So he turned to his clouded thoughts, though even that was effort. What had happened? How did he get here? Where was here? Who were these people? And what did they want from him? The events from the previous night flashed through his mind. What was that stuff? What did it do? And many other questions filled his mind until he couldn't tell them apart any longer. He tried to quiet his thoughts when he heard a voice. It sounded like the voice of a adolesent boy, but was smooth and silky it made you wish to obey anything it told you to do.
"You don't need answers to these questions. You just need to get out of here. Do you know how to do that?" The voice said.
"No." Onyx thought in reply. "How?"
"I can't tell you that" the voice slipped like silk across his ears "you must find the answer yourself, before it's too late. Time is running out. "Think Onyx!"
Onyx's fuzzy head immediately cleared, and that left room for thought, unfortunately it also made room for a throbbing pain that he hadn't noticed before. he pushed it to the back of his mind, and took in his surroundings. he sat in a wooden chair, his ankles were tied to the legs of the chair and his hands to the armrests, the room was dimly lit, but he made out a low ceiling, a small curtain that concealed one corner, and a small curtained window that let in what little light there was. but whatever else could be said about the tiny room, it was so impeccably clean the old wood seemed to have a luminescence of it's own, Onyx could not, however, seem to locate a door.
'That's fine.' he thought, 'I don't need a door, yet, what I NEED is a way to untie myself. Now, how to do that?' He tried struggling against the bonds in hopes to loosen them, but to no avail. He had to think harder more unexpected. He scooched his chair across to the window and grasped the curtain in
between his his teeth, so as to open it. It didn't lead outside just to the rest of the building he was in. And of course there was nothing to help him there. So he tried the curtained corner of the room once he had pulled back the curtain though.He gasped at the sight of this thing sitting before him. It was an elderly man.
"Go away you said you'd leave me alone so long as I didn't try to escape." The old man cried out, and covered his face.
"I'm not going to hurt you. But I do have some questions that I think you can answer." Onyx said softly trying his best not to frighten the man any more. "What's your name?" At the sound of Onyx's voice the old man trembled all the more and crouched further into his corner. the man was as skeleton thin, with salt and pepper hair and a straggly mustache. "It's okay," Onyx assured him in what he hoped was a soothing tone, "I'm a prisoner here too, I won't hurt you, my name is Onyx" the man peeked up through his fingers, in the dim light Onyx saw his eyes, the irises were a neon yellow, and the pupils were diamond shaped slits.
"Onyx?" the man's murmur was almost inaudible, so quiet that Onyx had to strain to hear, and he got the feeling that the old man wasn't talking to him. "Hmmm, he doesn't look like one of them, does he Titka, no they wear the white things and never tell names. Look at that Titka, he's tied to a chair, They're never tied to chairs, maybe he can help us what does Titka think?"
a tiny voice came from somewhere in the corner, "Titka think he tell truth, but he not prisoner, he like Xno.
"What do you mean not prisoner? I'm being held against my will. That makes me a prisoner." Onyx said.
"Shhhh, not so loud Onyx. We not prisoner because we is test subjects. Titka says will untie if you quiet, and help us." Xno replied.
Onyx nodded his head in agreement and a tiny girl stepped out of the shadows and towards him. She was less than a foot high, and very slender, she had shoulder length red hair, and auburn eyes. she reminded Onyx of the leaves in the fall. "This must be Titka." Onyx thought. He decided to ask Xno some questions about what was going on while Titka untied him. "Ummm, do you mind answering some questions for me Xno?"
Xno looked at him warily, "Onyx not expect answer, then can ask. But must be quiet."
"Where is this place?" Onyx whispered. "And what can I do?" he tried not to squirm as Titka's tiny hands worked at his bonds and made his wrists itch.
"Xno not know where place is, asleep when get here, Titka not know, never see outside of room. Xno and Titka help Onyx, Onyx help Xno and Titka, we no stay here. Here bad."
"That's right," Titka put in, "It's no good here, 'speriments don't get'nuff food," A loud thump sounded from not far away and Titka scurried down from her perch to join the cowering Xno behind his curtain. footsteps approached rapidly.
Onyx let his head fall back against the chair and feigned unconciousness, leaving his eyes open in tiny almost imperceptible slits.
Onyx's chair suddenly shook hard, and a voice said. "You've slept long enough boy. Get-up I have some people here who would love to meet you." But Onyx wasn't thinking about that he was thinking about how the people had just seemed to materilize in the room. Onyx opened his eyes but didn't raise his head. "Have at 'im." the man said. And suddenly Onyx was surrounded by people. They shined lights in his eyes, and poked him in various places.
"Not good." *Onyx thought. *"They're definitely going to find that the ropes are untied."
"We can't have that Onyx they would spread the word that you were to be watched at all times. If one of them gets to near I may have to help. Which, I hate to sound lazy but I'd rather not. Especially considering that the old man doesn't seem like he needs that kind of shock right now." It was the same smooth voice that Onyx had heard earlier.
Just as Onyx thought of a plan the people all left. And as the guy who had spoken earlier left he said. "We'll be back in about two hours. Then you can have another dose of that delightful silver-" He cut himself off. "Stuff." He finished. Then left laughing hartily as he did. But in his teasing he had been careless and Onyx now knew right were the door was. Now all he needed to know was how to open it he remained still for a minute or two just to make sure everyone was gone. It took him entirely to long to wiggle the rest of the way out of the loosened bonds, ten minutes at the least, Onyx rubbed at his rope burned wrists and swollen hands. his head was aching again, so he rubbed that too. five minutes later the pounding in his head settled a bit and he was able to look about him again.
Warily Onyx attempted to stand, and failed, his legs had fallen asleep in the time he had sat there. 'No,' Onyx thought 'I'm NOT going to lose because of this.' slowly, painfully he began to rub life back into his deadened limbs. pins and needles shot up and down his leg wherever he massaged. he finished one foot and went on to the next this was taking much too long and when he finally got to the thighs he was pounding on them with his fists. with his legs finally back to life he was able to stand, albeit wobbly, he waited a few extra minutes to gain his balance and cursed himself for it all the while. he had less than an hour to get to the door, unlock it if need be, and figure out how to open it. he made his relatively unsteady way to the place where the man had exited the room, and in the dim light Onyx was able to make out a hairline seem in the wood, he had found the door.
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