Steven & Bubba

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Steven & Bubba

Games the Character has been involved with

Been in roleplays on Wattpad, but not many.

Basics

Name: Steven & Bubba


Age: 14


Race: Dragon


Gender: Male(Steven) & Female(Bubba)


Sexual Orientation: (Incest) Pansexual


Occupation: Rebels against Alpha Maphias and Rallios' leadership

• Appearance
• Personality
• Equipment
• Skills

• Appearance
  
  Height: 6'3" / 5'9"
  
  
  Weight: 179 / 150
  
  
  Hair: Bright orange with majority of it covering the right eye(Steven) Pale, curly orange hair it often in her face (Bubba)
  
  
  Eyes: Blue-green
  
  
  Body: Thick, with broad shoulders
  
  
  Attire: (Steven) Neon green shirt with a rainbow lightning bolt across the chest, tan pants/shorts, black converses, and a pair of reddish pink goggles on his head. (Bubba) Neon blue t-shirt with a rainbow crescent on the chest, a white knitted vest, pale yellow converses
  
  
  
• Personality
  
  Often it is hard to tell what these two are like due to their personality disorder, but they are quite friendly creatures once they get to know you.
  
  
  
• Equipment
  
  Steven has a Loliopop Chainsaw like chainsaw with a staff. Bubba has a bow and arrows and a staff.
  
  
  
• Skills
  
  They can fly and breath fire, as well as a personaitly disorder that can help as well.
  
  
  

 

[Flintlock Timber]

An extra umph of detail wouldn't hurt, considering you've two characters whose characteristics and details could be elaborated on much more. I suggest giving a wider image of what your characters are like, morally and physically. For example, with the 'Skills' tab, instead of just stating they can fly and breath fire, you could add more.


-- What is the source of this skill, this power?


-- How did they manage to get it?


-- Does this bring any disadvantages?


Both the 'Personality' and 'Equipment' tabs could do with some expansion, too. Don't stop at the basics, work your way through their reactions and inner feelings. Why keep at their weapons when you could instead improve by describing it further, and going onto different ideas. Equipment isn't restricted to the basic weapon list.


Altogether, this seems more a list of statistics than a character sheet. Sorry if I came off offensive, but criticism and suggestions are what you're going to get in a 'Feedback' section.