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Star WarsThe Old Republic: Master and apprentice.

bingus44

Elder Member
the treaty of coruscant.





After the sacking of the jedi temple on coruscant led by Darth malgus, and the empires take over of coruscant the republic took a major blow. Their capital planet stolen from them in one fell swoop by the Resurgent Sith Empire. The republic was weakened by that and they were in the palm of the empire, Darth Malgus a famed general during the galactic war between the empire and republic, wanted to crush the republic, where sith politicians wanted to sign a treaty between the republic and empire. The treaty was signed. At last peace between the jedi and sith?


The Cold War Era.





Now that the peace treaty is signed it is called the Cold War because the treaty meant nothing to the sith/empire and jedi/republic. During the treaty times the sith and jedi were growing stronger, training, and preparing for the second war. The republic and empire are both preparing and are very large and strong, they are of equal power, millions of sith and millions of jedi, also millions of troopers on each side as well. They are both stronger then ever before. Before the sacking when the empire first came back they established a new sith academy on Korriban where they were and still are training infinite numbers of future Sith Lords and darths. The Jedi also have their jedi temple back after the treaty was signed so they are also training countless future jedi knights and masters.


The treaty is coming to an end...





During the treaty/coldwar the republic and empire were still at war really. On the planet Balmorra there is an active battle going on between the sith and jedi, and every single other planet is on the brink of battle and war. During this time the sith and jedi are both launching secret attacks on each other. Sith and jedi are still clashing on some areas where they wouldn't be in the view of the citizens, like on the outskirts of Hoth, the deserts of tatooine, the Jungles of yavin, and many more places.


War has come.





The republic and empire politicians have declared war. Almost every planet is an active battle field now.


Some of the only planets that aren't a current battlefield are Dromund Kaas (the empires Capitol, home to some of the most famous Sith Lords and Darths, even the emperor himself.), Coruscant (the republics capital, Home to the jedi council and some of the best jedi masters and knights.), Tython (where the republic is currently training tons of new Jedi.)., and Korriban (the planet where the Sith Academy is held where they are training tons of new sith. Also the dark council themselves are there, the most powerful and strong sith in the galaxy.)


Where we come in.





My character will be a Sith Lord who fought during the wars prior the the treaty, and during the Cold War went on countless operations of killing jedi masters and taking out republic strongholds. My character needs an apprentice to train, he will teach them in the ways of the Darkside, so they could one day maybe be his successor.


Now your character who was a sith acolyte just finished his/her training at the sith academy's on Korriban. Now you are an apprentice but have no master. My character goes to Korriban for a meeting but finds you and takes you as his dark apprentice.


During the first act of the rp the treaty is still going on, but coming to an end soon. it will mainly focus on just you and I training. Little action, but of course there will be some action.


The second act I promote you to Sith Lord. Now you are ready to fight side by side with me, although I am a Darth which is one rank above you, I trained you so well that we are almost equal in power, you can't quite defeat me yet because I have much more combat experience from fighting in the war and whatnot. Now the treaty has ended so you and I will have to go on the battle ground to assassinate Republic generals and jedi masters, also even jedi council members. High action.


The third act will focus on us getting a task from the emperor himself! He has ordered us to kill the false emperor Darth Malgus. malgus Is claiming to be the emperor but he is clearly not, he is very powerful though and is a force to be reckoned with, so it will take both you a Sith Lord and I a Darth, together to take him down. We will also have to kill his followers who are fellow sith, but during this time there was a lot on infighting in the sith empire, Sith Lords would kill each other to gain fame, power, and rank. But that doesn't mean they wouldn't team up as well. Fair amount if action.


The fourth and final act.


You have been growing stronger and stronger during our training together you are my equal. Now to become a Darth you must defeat me, your master, the one who cared for you and taught you everything he knows, but maybe he held back a little in preparation for this day? He knows how the sith work, you must kill your master to become a Darth, he's done it and every sith before him has. So during the final act will focus on you preparing to defeat me and me preparing to defeat you. Some action, but mainly preparation for our battle.


Who I'm looking for to join me!





The type of person I'm looking to rp with is someone who knows their Star Wars lore. I would like you to know of the SWTOR ERA, either through books or the video game, or even internet research. If you do not know of this era check this short video out to summarize it. ([media]



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Now that you know of the lore comes your writing abilities. You should be able to write atleast 2 long, good, detailed paragraphs. I personally will write 3-4 paragraphs a post. You should also have good grammar, I understand everyone makes mistakes but I want a fairly good writer to write with. I also want someone who can contribute to the plot with good ideas! It's no fun if I make the whole story myself now is it, so don't be afraid to contribute! If you want to do something big just tell me first and I will be good with it 95% of the time!
 
This looks pretty interesting.


Unfortunately, I'm not terribly familiar with the Star Wars lore outside of the movies. Though I can certainly spend time researching the extended universe (as well as watching the provided video clip) and whatnot. And I do think I'm a relatively decent writer. However, I prefer shorter paragraphs compared to meaty paragraphs so, as a result, I'm happy to provide several small paragraphs.
 
Syrena said:
This looks pretty interesting.
Unfortunately, I'm not terribly familiar with the Star Wars lore outside of the movies. Though I can certainly spend time researching the extended universe (as well as watching the provided video clip) and whatnot. And I do think I'm a relatively decent writer. However, I prefer shorter paragraphs compared to meaty paragraphs so, as a result, I'm happy to provide several small paragraphs.
That is perfectly fine by me! The video pretty much sums everything up so you don't have to do a lot of research. I also kind of summed it up anyway in the post, also the paragraph thing is fine. I'm not picky about it all!
 
Bro i love this. Though my knowledge of the Star Wars lore isn't the best but i can look up things or ask you when needed.


My post length mostly varies honestly, i can post up to 6 paragraphs but sometimes my posts are barely a paragraph long. It just varies on what's happening in the roleplay.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Bro i love this. Though my knowledge of the Star Wars lore isn't the best but i can look up things or ask you when needed.
My post length mostly varies honestly, i can post up to 6 paragraphs but sometimes my posts are barely a paragraph long. It just varies on what's happening in the roleplay.
Yeah I was saying to the other person I'm honestly not picky at all about post length, just as long as it isn't like three sentences every time. Like I said in the post, during conversations we are going to have short posts like probably only one paragraph.


 


Syrena said:
@Greg2344 Great! I have to run out and get dinner and pick my dog up from the vet. But I'll watch the video tonight!
Sounds good! I'll see ya when you get back.


 


RevolverOshawott said:
Bro i love this. Though my knowledge of the Star Wars lore isn't the best but i can look up things or ask you when needed.
My post length mostly varies honestly, i can post up to 6 paragraphs but sometimes my posts are barely a paragraph long. It just varies on what's happening in the roleplay.
Also the video is only 15 mins long and it explains what's going on right now.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Alright i'l come back to ya once watched it.
 
I'm back c:
Hello! So the three of us could do this. It'll be quite interesting because you'll have to both have to yourselves worthy of becoming sith, and I could pit you both against each other. We could do that, or I could do a 1x1 with both of you, it's both of your choices, but I say we all do it together.
 
Greg2344 said:
Hello! So the three of us could do this. It'll be quite interesting because you'll have to both have to yourselves worthy of becoming sith, and I could pit you both against each other. We could do that, or I could do a 1x1 with both of you, it's both of your choices, but I say we all do it together.
Hmm that's a good idea actually yea i'm totally fine with the three of us doing this but lets see if @Syrena would agree.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Hmm that's a good idea actually yea i'm totally fine with the three of us doing this but lets see if @Syrena would agree.
Alright sounds good. Either one is fine by me.


 


RevolverOshawott said:
Hmm that's a good idea actually yea i'm totally fine with the three of us doing this but lets see if @Syrena would agree.
https://www.rpnation.com/threads/star-wars-the-old-republic-sith-master-and-apprentice.93752/ here is the thread, I posted the character sheet. You can make your character now if you'd like.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Would it be ok if i leave the bio blank? ;p
Why would you want to? All you have to do is make a background for your character, it doesn't have to be be super long.
 
Greg2344 said:
Why would you want to? All you have to do is make a background for your character, it doesn't have to be be super long.
Because outside of the basic plot of this roleplay i'm not sure how would one become a Sith Acolyte thus i'm bit hesitant on the backstory.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Would it be ok if i leave the bio blank? ;p
Also if you don't mind, could you provide me with a writing sample of yours?


 


RevolverOshawott said:
Because outside of the basic plot of this roleplay i'm not sure how would one become a Sith Acolyte thus i'm bit hesitant on the backstory.
Ahh I see, what you could do is write about what you were before becoming an acolyte, where you a slave, a farmer, a regular citizen, ETC. Also what did you do that got you sent off to the sith academy.


 


RevolverOshawott said:
Because outside of the basic plot of this roleplay i'm not sure how would one become a Sith Acolyte thus i'm bit hesitant on the backstory.
Don't be afraid to ask questions if you aren't sure btw, I don't bite, I'll gladly answer any questions anyone has :) . To become an acolyte usually when you are like 16-20 or so your parents will send you off to the sith academy if they see that you are force sensitive. Force sensitive just means someone who can use the force.
 
Also now i don't feel too confident on the three of us being in the rp. Since you guys have a lot better writing than i do and i kinda feel really noobish.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Also now i don't feel too confident on the three of us being in the rp. Since you guys have a lot better writing than i do and i kinda feel really noobish.
Yeah this is kind of an experienced writer Rp, I did say in the original post I'm looking for good and detailed writers. If You feel like you can't meet the two paragraph requirement and whatnot this may not be the rp for you.
 
Oh i can definitely post two paragraphs unless there's nothing really happening in the roleplay for me to work with. I.E our characters sitting in a room not talking or anything just sitting there.


I think we should just have a separate roleplay, since i would have a bit more confidence in my writing that way.
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Oh i can definitely post two paragraphs unless there's nothing really happening in the roleplay for me to work with. I.E our characters sitting in a room not talking or anything just sitting there.
I think we should just have a separate roleplay, since i would have a bit more confidence in my writing that way.
I see. Could you provide me with a writing sample of yours, if you are comfortable with that.
 
Greg2344 said:
I see. Could you provide me with a writing sample of yours, if you are comfortable with that.
Ok sure i'l PM them to ya but they will be copy pasted from a past roleplay of mine :P .
 
RevolverOshawott said:
Ok sure i'l PM them to ya but they will be copy pasted from a past roleplay of mine :P .
That would be great! Thank you.


 
I have work tomorrow, so we can resume this tomorrow. I'll be home at about 4:00 Pm EST.
 
Hey! Sorry about the wait.


Anyway. I don’t have any issues with participating in a small group roleplay. Having different characters is great. Plus, I like writing with new people. ^.^


However, I cannot post multiple times a day. My odd work hours often prevent such a thing from occurring. And coming back to see that a roleplay has grown by several pages—I can read everything and catch up, but it isn’t very fun. If you think that this particular roleplay might have that kind of quick, snappy pace, then I’ll gracefully step to the side.


I don’t want to slow you down. And I also want to be upfront about my slower speed before it becomes an issue. Especially since different posting speeds can kill a group roleplay. Plus, a slightly slower pace is not everyone’s cup of tea.


On that note, if you still want me around, should I send a writing sample to you?


@RevolverOshawott
 

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