ehmygirl
Five Thousand Club
I'm having a few concerns with this rp thread. Firstly, I can't seem to follow which class you guys are in. I've figured that you were in a water class and that you've moved on to a spirit class, but you guys aren't making it very clear where you are and what you're doing. Are you all friends, enemies, competitors? How did Soul get to be a tutor? What are the risks involved in talking to the shades of the dead? What other kinds of spirits can you talk to? Do you run the risk of getting in touch with the Fae? Probably, as he Fae are spirits, and can change their nature and trick mortals into doing things.
From what it appeared to me, everyone had their morning classes and were heading to lunch before their afternoon classes. I can tell you that some of the more mature RPers on the board will have trouble trying to follow the lines of conversation trying to figure out what people are doing, where they are and what's happening. They're going to want to know what's the overarching theme? What are the dangers and risks? What I'm trying to say is, give a little more, get people to not only read this story but want to add to it. Let us know who these people are.
Also, Soul, can I ask you why you don't have spaces after your punctuation? It's just driving me crazy is all.
Anyway, as it stands, I've got a fire character who is sitting at a table in the cafeteria asking Crystal (who apparently hasn't shown up to lunch yet) who her family is and what not. I'll rejoin the discussion once the two timelines are meshed properly.
Oh yeah, and England is 5 hours ahead of the East Coast and 8 hours ahead of the West Coast. We're about 5000 miles away from California and about 2000 away from the East Coast. Being from CA but currently in England, I have a very good reason for knowing this.
From what it appeared to me, everyone had their morning classes and were heading to lunch before their afternoon classes. I can tell you that some of the more mature RPers on the board will have trouble trying to follow the lines of conversation trying to figure out what people are doing, where they are and what's happening. They're going to want to know what's the overarching theme? What are the dangers and risks? What I'm trying to say is, give a little more, get people to not only read this story but want to add to it. Let us know who these people are.
Also, Soul, can I ask you why you don't have spaces after your punctuation? It's just driving me crazy is all.
Anyway, as it stands, I've got a fire character who is sitting at a table in the cafeteria asking Crystal (who apparently hasn't shown up to lunch yet) who her family is and what not. I'll rejoin the discussion once the two timelines are meshed properly.
Oh yeah, and England is 5 hours ahead of the East Coast and 8 hours ahead of the West Coast. We're about 5000 miles away from California and about 2000 away from the East Coast. Being from CA but currently in England, I have a very good reason for knowing this.