Fantasy Silent Rapture - OOC

[Lioness075]

Let me know if there are any discrepancies in my post. ^^ I think it flows smoothly for my first post. :3

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

SilverFlight do you have room for some twins?

 

[Goonfire]

SilverFlight I’d like to add 60-ft grayscale dark vision to Ambrose’s sheet. Got any further weaknesses for me to add, aside from the obvious?

 

[SilverFlight]

SilverFlight do you have room for some twins?

Nope, I do say one character per. And Lion re-stated it here too.

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

Nope, I do say one character per. And Lion re-stated it here too.

Okei! Good luck with the Rp!!

 

[SilverFlight]

SilverFlight I’d like to add 60-ft grayscale dark vision to Ambrose’s sheet. Got any further weaknesses for me to add, aside from the obvious?

Only what I stated in the first appraisal.

 

[SilverFlight]

sox How's it going? Do you have time for a post before Friday?

 

[sox]

sox How's it going? Do you have time for a post before Friday?

Yes sorry I just have two exams this week so it's going slowly.

 

[SilverFlight]

Yes sorry I just have two exams this week so it's going slowly.

Ok no worries, we'll wait a bit longer.

 

[sox]

Ok no worries, we'll wait a bit longer.

Thank you for your patience ~ My post is up.

Edit: I'd also like to add a picture of Joy's wraith form to her bio in a spoiler, if that's alright.

 

[SilverFlight]

Thank you for your patience ~ My post is up.

Edit: I'd also like to add a picture of Joy's wraith form to her bio in a spoiler, if that's alright.

Thank you for your patience ~ My post is up.

Edit: I'd also like to add a picture of Joy's wraith form to her bio in a spoiler, if that's alright.

Good post but there is one thing you must edit. The cat in my first post is not writable by anyone else. There is a good reason for this. You'll have to find a different way to the rendez-vous point.

 

[Lioness075]

Thank you for your patience ~ My post is up.

Edit: I'd also like to add a picture of Joy's wraith form to her bio in a spoiler, if that's alright.

I think most of us put pictures in our posts either with the spoiler or other coding. Just at least use the height restriction coding in case the picture ends up being way too big in the post. I usually downsize it anywhere between 250-450 depending on what looks best.

 

[SilverFlight]

Post coming up!

 

[SilverFlight]

I also updated the rules concerning writing the npcs.

 

[sox]

Good post but there is one thing you must edit. The cat in my first post is not writable by anyone else. There is a good reason for this. You'll have to find a different way to the rendez-vous point.

Ooh I see, I'll do that

 

[SilverFlight]

Ooh I see, I'll do that

Thank you :3

 

[Lioness075]

I’ll write my next post today. ^^ I’ll be aiming to encourage the rest of the group to follow my character into the rave, so we can get some group interaction going on inside.

 

[Lioness075]

Eh, it ended up making more sense to just interact with Elias once I wrote out the entire post. Progress nonetheless!

 

[Lioness075]

Goonfire Hey, just wanted to let you know that Falarion, Elias, and Impala are all still outside. They have yet to enter the rave. The connection our characters feel now could help him find them outside. I just wanted to clarify locations and all. ^^

 

[Goonfire]

Right, edited that.

 

[Lioness075]

Right, edited that.

Thanks, sorry if that came across negatively at all. It’s just one of my biggest RPing pet peeves. :s

 

[Goonfire]

I’m not concerned about it. It’s a simple misconception that we were heading inside, so it helps to point out errors as they’re made before mass confusion stops everything.

 

[SilverFlight]

Hey Yatasal , Ima be straight with you: I don't think this character is a good fit for the story I've got here.
There are a few things:
1. Small thing: your personality section is too short, I specify the length very clearly.
2. The team we have is a group of skilled supernatural fighters that have a genuine stake/interest in preventing an apocalypse. Your character as he is, from his history and personality, doesn't seem like he'd have any sort of reason to be on a team like that, or that he's savvy at all about the supernatural beyond his cards.
3. Your character's power seems like it could be very OP unless I have clear limits to it defined well.

Based on this, I need to refuse him. I'm sorry.

 

[Yatasal]

No worries! I'm sure I'll be able to use him in another RP.

 

[SilverFlight]

sox The only people who actually walked past the doorman are your character and Charun. Everyone else is still outside. Not even the npcs I wrote are inside. One is in a vestibule before the doors taking coats.