Nymian
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I'm working on a short story. Theme is royals. Can be any genre, just has to be about royals in some form or fashion. Max word count is 5000.
I'm going to post what I have so far - I feel like I'm off to a somewhat strong start, but the dialog portion I'm not sure I'm on the right track. I'm having a hard time finding the right path forward. I'll highlight what I'm mostly happy with to differentiate where I feel I'm struggling.
I welcome any critiques or advice!
I generated a random plot so I had something to work with. For some reason, it gave me Stardust vibes (if you haven't seen this movie I HIGHLY recommend you stop what you're doing and watch it right meow. Robert de Niero as a gay pirate. Truly one of my favorite movies.) I'm working with it very loosely, so ignore the paranormal/humans living in harmony. I'm not sure I'm including that bit lol.
Plot: A spoiled young prince is the only rightful heir in a kingdom where paranormal beings live in harmony with humans. Power gained at such an early age is corruptive, and the prince is no exception. The story follows the dark coming-of-age of a spoiled child who acts out his twisted fantasies of darkest evil on those beneath him. The ancient gods bless the young boy who will turn out to be the hero in the once forsaken land.
I'm going to post what I have so far - I feel like I'm off to a somewhat strong start, but the dialog portion I'm not sure I'm on the right track. I'm having a hard time finding the right path forward. I'll highlight what I'm mostly happy with to differentiate where I feel I'm struggling.
I welcome any critiques or advice!
I generated a random plot so I had something to work with. For some reason, it gave me Stardust vibes (if you haven't seen this movie I HIGHLY recommend you stop what you're doing and watch it right meow. Robert de Niero as a gay pirate. Truly one of my favorite movies.) I'm working with it very loosely, so ignore the paranormal/humans living in harmony. I'm not sure I'm including that bit lol.
Plot: A spoiled young prince is the only rightful heir in a kingdom where paranormal beings live in harmony with humans. Power gained at such an early age is corruptive, and the prince is no exception. The story follows the dark coming-of-age of a spoiled child who acts out his twisted fantasies of darkest evil on those beneath him. The ancient gods bless the young boy who will turn out to be the hero in the once forsaken land.