Sci-Fi Writing

[Portal]

• Author Remarks
• Earth 2104: City Fall
• Earth 2104: Relocation

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  The contents of this thread will contain a series of writing in, around, and after 2104 and is for the most part original content. The story will be broken down into different "Chapters" and will follow Experiment A23JU94 aka Syrus. I will forewarn any readers there will be a lot of acronyms (because I have such a weakness for them) and Sci-fi is not one of my strongest areas so this is more for fun and experimentation with the genre. For RpN this will include various BBcode and Pictures to enhance the story and hopefully add a bit of immersion to it. There may be times where I ask for the reader's opinion on various situations during the story so fate may be in your hands!
  
  
  I would recommend watching this thread if you are at all curious to see if this train derails or proceeds to destination.
  
  
  I will be adding updates and additional information here as it occurs to me.
  
  
  Cheers!
  
  
  
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[Grey]

Will you be wanting feedback?

 

[Portal]

Will you be wanting feedback?

Privately, yes. Especially from you, Signore Grey, I'd be honored.

 

[SkyGinge]

If you don't mind, I'll join this critiquing bandwagon too

 

[Killigrew]

I'll be over here, supportive... enjoying the prose...

 

[Grey]

I'll be over here, supportive... enjoying the prose...

YOU'RE NOT REALLY SUPPORTIVE IF YOU'RE NOT MASHING THEIR FACE IN THEIR FAILURES!


WHY MUST YOU BE SO DECEPTIVE AND DESTRUCTIVE?!


I learned everything I know about teaching young people by raising cats.

 

[Killigrew]

I think both are necessary. One to direct, the other to encourage. One gives a place to go and the other gets them walking. Without both, the person either wanders or loses the will to go.

 

[Hux]

Poetry not my forte. But i'll take a look at it!

 

[Portal]

Poetry is not my forte. But i'll take a look at it!

Poetry? Que? Prose~ not poetry~

 

[Hux]

Poetry? Que? Prose~ not poetry~

Opps xD I thought it was poetry by mistake. I'll still watch it though.