Saiyans Have No Limits (OOC Discussion)

Yeah Nira was the first one in and pretty much all of where Nomiya was positioned in related post was from a post that gave no chance for Nira to respond. Hence her positioning was never mentioned and would have been in a position to see all of that. It does seem to be Nomiya not doing things then retconning so she did them perfectly. But Nira wasnt lieing, she stated what she saw, I mean in the panic its more than likely for someone to forget the minor details which was what i was putting it up to......but Nomiya keeping bringing up things with details changing etcn i put it as (This womans deluded herself to protect her pride/realised she made mistake and is quick to try and explain it away) to which Nira is simply smiling still since she knows what she saw.

But yeah time to move past it, Nomiya got embarassed that some she sees beneath them noticed very simple things that she overlooked due to her pride.
 
PlusUltra said:
Yeah Nira was the first one in and pretty much all of where Nomiya was positioned in related post was from a post that gave no chance for Nira to respond. Hence her positioning was never mentioned and would have been in a position to see all of that. It does seem to be Nomiya not doing things then retconning so she did them perfectly. But Nira wasnt lieing, she stated what she saw, I mean in the panic its more than likely for someone to forget the minor details which was what i was putting it up to......but Nomiya keeping bringing up things with details changing etcn i put it as (This womans deluded herself to protect her pride/realised she made mistake and is quick to try and explain it away) to which Nira is simply smiling still since she knows what she saw.

But yeah time to move past it, Nomiya got embarassed that some she sees beneath them noticed very simple things that she overlooked due to her pride.
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Just sort of curious, what exactly did she overlook?
 
Few things that then they tried to explain away with added details each time to discredit/discount Nira's own (ie no she wasnt there, she couldnt see etc).
In the end its not that important i suppose, Nira was just honest with how things went down, Nomiya's pride get stung. Best to move past it for now.
 
PlusUltra said:
Few things that then they tried to explain away with added details each time to discredit/discount Nira's own (ie no she wasnt there, she couldnt see etc).
In the end its not that important i suppose, Nira was just honest with how things went down, Nomiya's pride get stung. Best to move past it for now.
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Yeah but .... What was overlooked?
 
Her initial actions said nothing about most of the later stuff, it was grab, move panick without any mention of looking around. They said their life was saved thanks to them, but at same time that she had no injurys. She said she couldnt see any injurys before she started poking around, but never address the fur covering...... (Can go on but yeah, going past that now)
 
PlusUltra said:
Her initial actions said nothing about most of the later stuff, it was grab, move panick without any mention of looking around. They said their life was saved thanks to them, but at same time that she had no injurys. She said she couldnt see any injurys before she started poking around, but never address the fur covering...... (Can go on but yeah, going past that now)
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Ight
 
Yeah. Nomiya say and did a lot but isn't good at telling things how they happened.

She's a doer. Not a teller. So asking her to explain something is like asking a 5 year old to describe the process of writing a film. Lol. It'll be interesting, but full of holes.
 
Yeah so compare that to someone who observing, active listening and filtering information....your gonna have a much harder time getting details past them.
 
Zedalb said:
Name: Kichiga
Picture:
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Power Level: (Starting power level, ask me to help you choose it)
Techniques:
KI Flight
Ki Blast
Ki Enhancement
Magic Materialization
Sealing
Dark Magic Empowerment
Magic Teleportation
Magic Warrior Creation

Special Traits:
Magic User:
Spear Fighter:
Magic Spear:
Weapon Maker:

Years of Experience: 3
Rank: "Specialist"
Role: "Specialist"

Age: 36
Height: 6'2
Weight: 185
Body Type: Ectomorph
Voice: (Please find a voice example, either song or spoken dialogue)

Personality: (Please give us a one paragraph personality description (about 5 sentences))

Biography: Kichiga was born a low class warrior and sent to be an infiltration baby. He ended up on a small distant world filled with weak natives. These natives however were different from most in that they used the arts of magic instead of KI. So as he grew up he learned their arts, living and working underneath a strong mentor. His capabilities exceeded others, not because of his skill with magic, which while good was limited, but by his KI something the inhabitants barely had.

Jealous of his strength his own mentor tried to kill him. Kichiga won, Ki blast and powerful punches were simply to fast and deadly compared to the long slow process of spell casting. Kichiga took his dying mentor, and sealed his power inside of a Naginata. Now the weapon is far more than simple steel. Kichiga lead and fought a war for several years before the world fell to his rule.

He did not get to rest long before the Sayians reached out to him, explained his place and sent for him. For the last three years he has been training his KI learning how to use it by watching other sayians. His magic has allowed him to make and give a few weak, but special weapons to the Sayian people. Thus he has a special rank and class, as one of very few sayians who can use magic, or even more rarely make powerful equipment.







WIP:
Need sleep.
But also looking for feed back, and viability before throwing into charchter thread.
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Hi there. I've moved your character to the "Characters" page. Even if it's a WIP, it belongs in that thread. I'll give you an analysis once I've had time to look over it a bit more. Shouldn't be too long from now.
 
Mirgris Mirgris

Hi there.

So first off, magic isn't a thing in this role-play so any and all magical elements will need to be removed from this character. The world of Dragon Ball has some magic in it, but this role-play does not include those elements.

This eliminates most of the backstory you've provided for him, but honestly it won't take you very long to come up with one more suitable to this role-play's lore and direction.

If you've any further questions, feel free to ask away either here or in a private message and we'll help get you on your feet and ready to participate as soon as possible.

Thanks!
 
Ok seems OOC stopped updating again. Yeah Nira Heard Nom, though thing is.....you said its going to stress them. Its pretty clear from just looking at her that Jz's character is stressed from the circumstances already, so calming them down so they can actually get rest/go with the doctors to get rest needs to come before actual treatment. This isnt a medical thing btw its more a human thing, if your stressed out your not going to co-operate with doctors/if your as freaking out as Jz's is telling them its all going to be ok/reassuring them is the most important thing to anyone in a stressful situation.

OOC Nira's not a Doctor, but like you said talking to people. Getting a person to do want you want/convincing them of best interests needs to build some trust first, forcing the character into somethings just gonna make things worse.
 
PlusUltra said:
Ok seems OOC stopped updating again. Yeah Nira Heard Nom, though thing is.....you said its going to stress them. Its pretty clear from just looking at her that Jz's character is stressed from the circumstances already, so calming them down so they can actually get rest/go with the doctors to get rest needs to come before actual treatment. This isnt a medical thing btw its more a human thing, if your stressed out your not going to co-operate with doctors/if your as freaking out as Jz's is telling them its all going to be ok/reassuring them is the most important thing to anyone in a stressful situation.

OOC Nira's not a Doctor, but like you said talking to people. Getting a person to do want you want/convincing them of best interests needs to build some trust first, forcing the character into somethings just gonna make things worse.
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Nope, that's not gonna work
 
Sadly i think imma have to drop this RP. It moves a bit quickly for me best of luck and i hope you a long RP life.
 
Jz-ahn Jz-ahn For clarity, the hand wasnt reaching for her, it was left offering letting her make the first move.....I think the doctors were actually off to leave when they walked off but i could be wrong...so it was just one person really infront of them.
 
PlusUltra said:
Jz-ahn Jz-ahn For clarity, the hand wasnt reaching for her, it was left offering letting her make the first move.....I think the doctors were actually off to leave when they walked off but i could be wrong...so it was just one person really infront of them.
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No one has to be scratched, it's just if anyone was in the vicinity or didnt move their body away fast enough they would be. So if her hand was close enough it'd be scratched
 
PlusUltra said:
Jz-ahn Jz-ahn For clarity, the hand wasnt reaching for her, it was left offering letting her make the first move.....I think the doctors were actually off to leave when they walked off but i could be wrong...so it was just one person really infront of them.
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The other doctors are still there. Nomiya's the only one who left.
 
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