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[Dragonlord318]

Name:​

Jarmelo Cain​

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Nickname:​

Melo, Mel, Jar Jar, MC​

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Team:​

None yet​

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Occupation or Year in Academy:​

2nd​

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Age:​

17​

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Gender:​

Male​

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Species:​

Faunus​

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Symbol:​

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Alignment:​

Lawful Neutral​

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Family:​

None​

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Appearance:​

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Regular outfit:​

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Combat armor:​

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Weapon(s):​

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"The Matsumune"​

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2nd Form:​

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Ranged form:​

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"Big Bang"​

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Semblance:​

Judgment Of The Beast-Melo's semblance is more of a transformation but can be used as a final attack if possible.But this is activated when he surrounds his body in a smoke screen of dust.The transformation version of the semblance is when he absorbs the dust in his body and gains a boost in power and reflexes by x3 and stops until he stops it or it runs for an hour.The attack version happens when he absorbs the dust in his weapon and his swords turns into its second form and he lets out a blinding fury of combos for 3 minutes​

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Strengths:​

-He flourishes in the art of close combat​

-Extremely sturdy​

-Can be a social butterfly​

-Is a good fighter ​

-Ironed willed​

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Weaknesses:​

-Doesn't really like being a leader​

-Isn't as good as a ranged fighter as close ranged​

-Is used to working by himself​

-Doesn't really like sharing​

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Personality:​

Melo is a cool person to some, sometimes he can be considered an a-hole but he doesn't mean anything personal. He loves his friends but sometimes can't stand the stupid stuff unless it's to funny for him to care and sometimes if he's in the mood might turn into a goofball too. He can be rather stubborn and doesn't like being told what to do but if he lives through to sock the person he'll listen. He also is very prideful and will easily fight if felt like being challenged or belittled so he doesn't tolerate disrespect so he tries to respect everyone even if done wrong by them. He may seem like a mean and hard person and have the blackest and evil-looking eyes ever but he's a sweetheart. He also has a history of being almost constantly around woman but he's not a pimp he's just a lady's man without really embracing it.​

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WIP​

Everything written looks good. Please re-upload all pics except weapons. Attachments inaccessible.

 

[DSLIX]

Everything written looks good. Please re-upload all pics except weapons. Attachments inaccessible.

Looking better

 

[Dragonlord318]

Looking better

Approved. Good job.

 

[Dragonlord318]

Looking better

Hey DSLIX . Platypus and I were reviewing the character post and we just need one more thing from you.

Either A: Make his semblance not so...overpowering...
or B: Add a critical weakness

 

[DSLIX]

Hey DSLIX . Platypus and I were reviewing the character post and we just need one more thing from you.

Either A: Make his semblance not so...overpowering...
or B: Add a critical weakness

How bout now

 

[Platypus]

How bout now

That depends, when you say that "activating his semblances leaves him open for an attack for a minute" what exactly do you mean?

 

[DSLIX]

That depends, when you say that "activating his semblances leaves him open for an attack for a minute" what exactly do you mean?

I mean he's completely exposed for about the time he's in the process of activating his semblance which if hit hard enough you can stop him from activating it also he's exposed for about 4 minutes

 

[Dragonlord318]

I mean he's completely exposed for about the time he's in the process of activating his semblance which if hit hard enough you can stop him from activating it also he's exposed for about 4 minutes

Four minutes is good. Approved. Make sure to edit your CS accordingly

 

[Dragonlord318]

Let's get this party started!