Fantasy Race of Twelve

[JINNI]

Tagging the people who seemed interested into joining. Teehee!


{ @Nanax @Mitchs98 @Uxie }

 

[JINNI]

Name: Marcus Black
Age: 17


(The age may be whatever you wish)


Weight: 175 pounds


Height: 6'0"


Body Type: A+


Skin Color Tan Caucasian


Country of Origin: Greece


Zodiac Sign: Tiger


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Personality: Loyal, Natural leader, Charismatic, Courageous


Flaws: Too loyal, Rash


Hobbies: Swimming, Sword Fighting, Parkour


Likes/Dislikes


Likes: Swimming, Fighting, Helping People, Teaching People Dislikes: Bullies, Liars, the color Pink, Country Music


Abilities


Leading People, Charisma, Silver tongued, Any kind of sport, Agility


Weapons

Occupation: High School Student/Sword Fighting Teacher


History: Marcus has been training for this day all of his life. He wanted to be chosen to help fight the evil. So he trained and trained his body and his mind. He only socialized through school which helped him with his people skill. It helped him with his ability to talk to people, and boost up there moral.

Your profile's good and all, but could you go in-depth? A realistic picture of the character could also help.


An example of 'in-depth': elaborate on your personality. How is he a natural leader? How is he courageous? Does he not run away from fights? So, I would like you to work on your profile a bit more. The History-- it's a bit too vague. How exactly has he been training all his life? Did his father teach him? How did he know of the race's existence? Did his family tell him? Things like that are needed, ehe. There's also a slight mistake-- I asked for Body Type, not Blood Type ^w^ as in lean, slender, or whatever you wish.

 

[JINNI]

@Taiga


Everything about your character is fine, but, well! Please elaborate on Katherine's hobbies and history. For the hobbies, I don't need long paragraphs-- one to three lines should be fine. Why does she love reading? Does it ease her mind? You described why she's stretchy, right? That should work for her hobbies, hehe.


Also, for the history, please elaborate a bit more! Russia is a very wide place. Was she born in a rural village, or a modern city? For her parents, 'they were the most dangerous Russian mafia' doesn't quite cut it. If they were dangerous, surely their name were to be popular. What were the mafia's name? Why does she love the dragon? Merely because she was born under the sign? She didn't 'become a letter' xD . I meant given a letter as in, an envelope containing a letter. A, uh, message in paper. Sorry, that mistake was on my end, not being detailed enough xP. All of this information will be used later on in the rp, so please bear with me >w<. Thank you for showing interest in my rp!

 

[LastRomeo]

I'll begin to work on my CS and I'll have some form of WIP coding up soon!


@FinalStraw

 

[AnarchyReins]

Okay @FinalStraw I fixed my cs.

 

[JINNI]

I'll begin to work on my CS and I'll have some form of WIP coding up soon!
@FinalStraw

Okay @FinalStraw I fixed my cs.

Your characters have been accepted! I'm waiting for either Katherine @Taiga to edit her cs or another person to join before I make the opening post.

 

[AnarchyReins]

Okay cool. I have a challenge for you though. Try to guess what anime I based the idea for my history. I will give a hint CSR

 

[JINNI]

Okay cool. I have a challenge for you though. Try to guess what anime I based the idea for my history. I will give a hint CSR

eh its probably chrome shelled regios :<

 

[AnarchyReins]

Dang it you win you win.

 

[Taiga]

@FinalStraw I finished editing my character, I hope its good now *^^*

 

[JINNI]

@FinalStraw I finished editing my character, I hope its good now *^^*

Excellent change! Unfortunately, there is no such book that contains any information about the so called game. Normal people do not have knowledge about the game, only the 12 families do. You could imagine what chaos would be in motion if everyone knew that evil was going to attack them anytime. Flesh that part out, and your character is accepted!


Note : all of you must be confused. what is the format of the game?? i do not know anything about it?? well, the opening post will be the first hint, to win the race.

 

[Taiga]

@FinalStraw Could she hunt for some information and somehow find out about the families and then hunt for them with her mafia?

 

[JINNI]

@FinalStraw Could she hunt for some information and somehow find out about the families and then hunt for them with her mafia?

That is no need! The families have been preserving the information for the game for ages. What I am saying is, the guardians tend to come from one lineage! Talking to her dad about the game would do. After talking to her dad, she can disclose the information to her mafia, and get her to play the game with her. However, the game's format changes everytime, so what she knows may not be what she experience.

 

[Taiga]

@FinalStraw Oooh, that makes more sense to me now! I'll change that part

 

[JINNI]

wonderful change! your character is accepted. @Taiga

 

[philocaly]

Hmm... Monkeys are supposed to be mischievous if I remember correctly.


I'm a Chinese myself and so, I know my zodiacs, both star signs and the ones based on the Lunar calender.


Also, I'm a monkey myself.

 

[philocaly]

Here's a link too... Because I just happened to have it open.


Chinese Zodiac Monkey Personality, Characteristics, Fate

 

[JINNI]

Hmm... Monkeys are supposed to be mischievous if I remember correctly.
I'm a Chinese myself and so, I know my zodiacs, both star signs and the ones based on the Lunar calender.


Also, I'm a monkey myself.

Truly! They are masters of pranks. I just happened to forget listing that xP

 

[JINNI]

@Uxie


I finished reading your CS, and fell in love instantly! She's a great addition to the team, being diverse from them all. Especially how she got the 'protect humanity' letter! I love every bit of your cs ;3


Now, I'll just wait for you to figure out your BBCoding!

 

[Uxie]

Thank you so much!!


Now give me, like, an hour or so, it's been a while since I've done this pff

 

[philocaly]

ALL THE ONES I WANT ARE GETTING SNAPPED UP.


DAMMIT BBCODE.

 

[Uxie]

ALL THE ONES I WANT ARE GETTING SNAPPED UP.
DAMMIT BBCODE.

LMAO


EVERYTIME SOMEONE POSTED I WAS SO SCARED THAT ALL MY WORK WOULD GO TO WASTE


I FEEL YA, GURL

 

[philocaly]

LMAO
EVERYTIME SOMEONE POSTED I WAS SO SCARED THAT ALL MY WORK WOULD GO TO WASTE


I FEEL YA, GURL

I CRI.


I WANTED TO CORRESPOND TO MY IRL ZODIAC.


BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

[Uxie]

I CRI.
I WANTED TO CORRESPOND TO MY IRL ZODIAC.


BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

what's your irl zodiac ???? was it monkey im so sorry


also i see ur signature :^))


:^)))))))))))))

 

[JINNI]

@Chibii


@Uxie


XDDDD! At any rate, you are welcome to post, Uxie!


And Chibii, better grab the others before they're gone as well xD