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The original poster (who posted the thread) isn’t the GM. They just posted the thread for the GM.
How does that change that the OP is absolutely horrible and boring. Sure, I put minimal effort into my op by just copying and pasting the interest check op but at least it looks nice.
 
How does that change that the OP is absolutely horrible and boring. Sure, I put minimal effort into my op by just copying and pasting the interest check op but at least it looks nice.
Oh shoot I thought you meant the person who wrote the thread. xD

But yeah, the first post is boring.
 
And that second guy just endorsed her by aknowledging her existance.

Roleplay 101: don't just interact with the first person you see. It just gets awkward.
 
And that second guy just endorsed her by aknowledging her existance.

Roleplay 101: don't just interact with the first person you see. It just gets awkward.
I agree. That's why I just prefer to write my first post as an introduction. Mainly.
 
and Emmi posts with who will probably be the biggest bastard in the whole school. Which means trouble for that stupid Marry Sue.
 
Oh wow okay, so it appears ms marry sue has decided your character is ripe for crushing material. Typical marry sue. Goung for the bad boy bastard.
 
Oh wow okay, so it appears ms marry sue has decided your character is ripe for crushing material. Typical marry sue. Goung for the bad boy bastard.
Lol
I would've crushed the Mary Sue even harder
But I just quit because it wasn't worth it
 
Somebodyelse seems to be trying, at least. They obviously aren't marry sue but I'm kind of ineasy with how they wrote dialogue. Too rigid.
 
Yeah,
There's a character who's a "psychopath" even though there isn't any research put into it that tells me, "oh.. he is a psychopath". Currently, he's an edgy demon teen.
 
Yes. "A quiet life". Totally. A quiet life where you're very special and everyone pays attention to you. And she's doing that thing that gets on my nerves where people don't put soaces following puntuation.
 
Jesus christ. Some of these people can't write dialogue for the life of them.

Sometimes things are gonna have to be ommited. Put them in and your dialogue either looks messy or looks too rigid to be natural (if your characters a robot you get a pass on the rigid part but your dialogue's still gonna look cluttered).
 

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