It will begin mere moments after the injections were given and the change will take a day or two in-story. It will not be a pleasant transformation, to say the least.
I only got to skim through, but I noticed a couple things. 1) After the events of Colosseum, The Under was destroyed and filled in. However, I really love that town and I'm super sad they got rid of it in XD, so you can keep it as is and we'll just pretend it still exists. Just thought I should address that! 2) Bane, the gang led by Governor Xavier Cross, is THE gang of the region. Russia has the Mafia, Japan has the Yakuza, Orre has Bane. Pyrite is the hub of criminal activity, so that's where they're base of operations is located, though they can be found in any town. Because of that, I ask that you make Reza's gang to be centered in only The Under, not both. They can certainly be attempting to take some Pyrite though, which would no doubt lead to some scuffles with Bane and other gangs.
Oohh, that could be fun! The other way also provides an interesting bit of conflict. You can pick either one or a mix of both, just as long as Reza and her people know that Bane is in charge of all things.
Yeah! Perhaps they're old friends who met on the street. They taught each other how to steal and survive and then when Reza decided to form a gang of her own, my character Rhody wanted nothing to do with her.
Hmm. Definitely awkward. Rhody wants nothing to do with any kind of crime or criminal, she simply wants to survive day by day and lay low. She would probably resent Reza for choosing The Under and a new gang over her.
That's alright. Just keep me updated if you can, please!
Will do! I work retail and my schedule changed weekly, so sometimes are busier than others.
Ohh, do I know that pain. Alright, just please try to get at least character up tonight!
Same! This has been a story a couple years in the making, so I hope netball works out.
It looks great! If you could mention how Chinatsu's sickness affected her life though, it'll be perfect.velleity Alright Chinatsu is done! Ignore the vulpix gijinka in the second image xD
Let me know if anything needs to be changed and I'll do it in the morning!
I edited in about her being sick into the middle of stuff. I made it subtle because with her personality she wouldn't make it a big thing. Let me know if that's good enough~
That bit's fine, since it affects some more than others, as long as it's apparent that she has strange fears and avoidance (water, being underground).
I mentioned a bit that she runs at a warmer temperature than normal, do you want me to add in the fears like that? I don't think I have anything like that listed, or just make sure those are known when they come around?
