Jewel
spirited
Please give me feedback!!
I’m always looking to improve my characters and you can help by giving me some pointers! Let me know if you think there’s something I should change or tell me if you like my character! (This is my first time posting one of my characters, I’m new to this, please be nice) Also, if you really love my character and want to rp, my DMs are open.
Okay, here’s my character:
Princess Epsteinia Bloodnight is her name. She’s an assassin with long black hair with bright red tips and short bangs. She wears 12” heels even in combat. She can crush human bones with her teeth. She has glowing red/gold/black/yellow eyes and pale skin. She can detect small animals from great distances with her animal-like senses. She’s the best assassin in the entire world and knows how to fight with swords, glaives, tiny knives, brass gauntlets, electrical industrial drills, crossbows, nail clippers, and everyday cutlery. She has never lost her keys. She knows all forms of magic in existence—necromancy, psychiatry, sadomasochism, telekinesis, terraforming, divination, and she can predict the future with perfect accuracy. She kins God. She can disarm any man with just a smile, and she regularly kills to satiate her immense bloodlust.
She spends her free time drawing blueprints for large suspension bridges to be built with eco-friendly recyclable materials. She has never broken a nail. She can regularly be seen scaling large mountains using only her hands and her teeth. She is the assistant mayor of a small rural town in Minnesota. She has interned at Apple, Sony, Sirius Cybernetics, and SpaceX. She has shaken hands with every major American President. Her favorite thing to eat is ice, and her favorite time of day is 6am, which is when she prays to a shrine of herself. She cooks 5-minute rice in under 30 seconds. She has never told a lie. She has sharp fangs, a forked tongue, a pointed red tail, and cat ears instead of human ones. She is married to Matthew McConaughey.
She can speak ten thousand human languages and six animal languages. She never forgets a birthday. She is an outspoken advocate of orca rights (she can turn into an orca) and personally oversaw the overthrow of OSHA’s headquarters. She’s a poet, a libertarian, a mother, a gun-owner, and a renown philosopher. She is twelve years old.
She has received two BRIT awards, three Academy Awards, and her old-school hip-hop album won her the Noble Peace Prize in 2016. She does not perspire. She’s an outgoing, exuberant, cheerful girl but she has a darkness inside her that nobody can see (except for her soulmate, Matthew McConaughey). Unlike most humans, she is bipedal. Once, when she was young, she spent six months in the Danakil Desert rescuing refugee penguins from volcanic rupture. She was behind the assassination of John F. Kennedy. She’s cute, bloodthirsty, and doesn’t care what others think of her. She wears a child’s size 6 shoe. Her favorite band is My Chemical Romance and she blames herself for their breakup. Her eyeliner is permanent. She graduated from Princeton and got her master’s degree in electrical engineering. She is immortal. She has never found love. She aspires to be a child dentist.
PLEASE give me feedback! And if you LOVE her like I do, tell me that too
Princess Epsteinia Bloodnight is her name. She’s an assassin with long black hair with bright red tips and short bangs. She wears 12” heels even in combat. She can crush human bones with her teeth. She has glowing red/gold/black/yellow eyes and pale skin. She can detect small animals from great distances with her animal-like senses. She’s the best assassin in the entire world and knows how to fight with swords, glaives, tiny knives, brass gauntlets, electrical industrial drills, crossbows, nail clippers, and everyday cutlery. She has never lost her keys. She knows all forms of magic in existence—necromancy, psychiatry, sadomasochism, telekinesis, terraforming, divination, and she can predict the future with perfect accuracy. She kins God. She can disarm any man with just a smile, and she regularly kills to satiate her immense bloodlust.
She spends her free time drawing blueprints for large suspension bridges to be built with eco-friendly recyclable materials. She has never broken a nail. She can regularly be seen scaling large mountains using only her hands and her teeth. She is the assistant mayor of a small rural town in Minnesota. She has interned at Apple, Sony, Sirius Cybernetics, and SpaceX. She has shaken hands with every major American President. Her favorite thing to eat is ice, and her favorite time of day is 6am, which is when she prays to a shrine of herself. She cooks 5-minute rice in under 30 seconds. She has never told a lie. She has sharp fangs, a forked tongue, a pointed red tail, and cat ears instead of human ones. She is married to Matthew McConaughey.
She can speak ten thousand human languages and six animal languages. She never forgets a birthday. She is an outspoken advocate of orca rights (she can turn into an orca) and personally oversaw the overthrow of OSHA’s headquarters. She’s a poet, a libertarian, a mother, a gun-owner, and a renown philosopher. She is twelve years old.
She has received two BRIT awards, three Academy Awards, and her old-school hip-hop album won her the Noble Peace Prize in 2016. She does not perspire. She’s an outgoing, exuberant, cheerful girl but she has a darkness inside her that nobody can see (except for her soulmate, Matthew McConaughey). Unlike most humans, she is bipedal. Once, when she was young, she spent six months in the Danakil Desert rescuing refugee penguins from volcanic rupture. She was behind the assassination of John F. Kennedy. She’s cute, bloodthirsty, and doesn’t care what others think of her. She wears a child’s size 6 shoe. Her favorite band is My Chemical Romance and she blames herself for their breakup. Her eyeliner is permanent. She graduated from Princeton and got her master’s degree in electrical engineering. She is immortal. She has never found love. She aspires to be a child dentist.
She spends her free time drawing blueprints for large suspension bridges to be built with eco-friendly recyclable materials. She has never broken a nail. She can regularly be seen scaling large mountains using only her hands and her teeth. She is the assistant mayor of a small rural town in Minnesota. She has interned at Apple, Sony, Sirius Cybernetics, and SpaceX. She has shaken hands with every major American President. Her favorite thing to eat is ice, and her favorite time of day is 6am, which is when she prays to a shrine of herself. She cooks 5-minute rice in under 30 seconds. She has never told a lie. She has sharp fangs, a forked tongue, a pointed red tail, and cat ears instead of human ones. She is married to Matthew McConaughey.
She can speak ten thousand human languages and six animal languages. She never forgets a birthday. She is an outspoken advocate of orca rights (she can turn into an orca) and personally oversaw the overthrow of OSHA’s headquarters. She’s a poet, a libertarian, a mother, a gun-owner, and a renown philosopher. She is twelve years old.
She has received two BRIT awards, three Academy Awards, and her old-school hip-hop album won her the Noble Peace Prize in 2016. She does not perspire. She’s an outgoing, exuberant, cheerful girl but she has a darkness inside her that nobody can see (except for her soulmate, Matthew McConaughey). Unlike most humans, she is bipedal. Once, when she was young, she spent six months in the Danakil Desert rescuing refugee penguins from volcanic rupture. She was behind the assassination of John F. Kennedy. She’s cute, bloodthirsty, and doesn’t care what others think of her. She wears a child’s size 6 shoe. Her favorite band is My Chemical Romance and she blames herself for their breakup. Her eyeliner is permanent. She graduated from Princeton and got her master’s degree in electrical engineering. She is immortal. She has never found love. She aspires to be a child dentist.
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