Story Planet Black (storyline)

Planet Black

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Alice Freecell, a 21 year old female Korean human, wakes in a silk blue nightware clothing in her somewhat dark, poorly lighted, bedroom. The tv is the only source of light of her sky blue walled bedroom. She slowly removes her massive green blanket. She slowly gets awake enough to turn on the black coffee pot on a small wooden stand next to her queen sized 1980's waterbed. Halo, season one, is playing on her thin 225 inch Roku tv as she sets up in her bed, then slowly gets out of the water bed, and puts on her clothing for the day. Alice Freecell wears a black silk wireless braw, black silk boxer underwear, blue jeans with a hole over the right knee, a white short sleeved cotton t-shirt, over that, a white cotton button up heavy cotton short sleeved dress shirt, over that she puts on her blue and white linen sweater vest, she puts on three whitegold chains that hang from her neck, and over that: a mens blue long sleeved jacket that hangs to her knees with pure silver buttons: Winter Warm Vintage Tailcoat Jacket Overcoat Outwear Buttons Coat. Suddenly the coffee pot finished, and she grabs her pink mug from off her massove wooden oak dresser with a massive mirror backface, and poors some coffee into her pink glass mug thats large enough to put the hole pot into the mug. Sitting on the edge of her waterbed she slowly drinks the coffee, black, and flips off the coffee pot after watching ten minutes of Halo. She takes her blue pillbox hat, down from one of the small wooden hooks along the wall, and puts it on her head with her shoulder length black hair from the sides, that she wallwalks back behind her ears, with both hands. She takes her pure gold nossarossma-bobby-pin and tacks the pin in the left side, and places it back behind her left ear. She goes into her dark blue tiled bathroom lighted only by a red nightlight, she removed Shift from the sink, sets the pink and yellow cat onto the floor, grabs the yellow toothbrush, and brushes her teeth, following it up with mouthwash. She walks back into her bedroom and puts on her large pink leather Hello Kitty backpack, and her black plastic crocks, before going into the dark middle sized livinging room with a yellow couch.
 
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Planet Black

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Freecell steps out of her apartment and into a brightly lighted hallway with grey marble walls. She turns, and places her hand on the blue box beside the front door of her apartment. She places her right hand on the box, and locks the front door to her apartment. The hallway is rather long, with gold carpet all the way down it. Halfway between each apartment in the hall is a green bush plants, four feet tall, in yellow round pots. Freecell walks down the hall and comes to a big lobby. The lobby is a roomlooking just like the hallway, but there is a signin desk, a few large yellow couches, and nine matching yellow chairs. There are two food vending machines on the wall on Freecells left filled with candy and junk food inside. There is also two vending machines for drinks. There are three female staff workers behind the signin desk all wearing yellow and red cotton uniforms. There are two old white males in their 80's playing Nintendo VR virtual golf wearing golf clothing in the far corner of the lobby. There are two security officers standing by the doorway leading out into the tunnel hallway. The first security officer is a white male in his middle 20's with red hair, wearing a cotton black and white security uniform. The second security office is a japanese female in her 20's wearing the same uniform. They both have three foot long black nightsticks, and a black handheld handgun, and black bullet proof vests over their shirts.

Freecell walks to the vending machine and pumps four bucks, in coins, into the soda vending machine, from the pocket of her blue jacket. She presses a button on the vending machine, and a green round can of Mountain Dew comes out of the machine. She reaches down, opens the can, and drinks down the can. She walks past the security officers, and puts her hand on the blue box next to the front door. A few seconds later there is a small beeping sound coming out from the box, and the large metal doors open slowly. She steps out into the large tunnel hallway, with three foot square black and white tiles looking like a checker board flooring. The tunnel is twenty eight feet wide, and there is a Burger King across the tunnel on the other side. In the middle there is a series of different market venders selling homemade cooked foods. There are thousands of people walking in both directions, up and down this long underground tunnel that is walled with white marble. Freecell tosses the empty can into the big metal green trashcan in the big tunnel. She walks over to one of the venders in the middle of the tunnel, with coins from her blue jacket pocket, she buys a plastic clear hot tupperwear bowl with a red plastic top, from the 300 pound black female in her middle 40's. As she walks down the large tunnel, she is eating japanese style sesame seed chicken mixed with black dirty race, eating with wooden chopsticks, that she got from a plastric transparent ziplock bag, from her pocket of her jacket. She walks down the tunnel eating, and avoids talking to people, as she walks west, down the tunnel, towards the massive subway station. It takes Freecell alomst one hour, to make the walk to the massive subway train station, now seen in the distance as she finished eating off the last of her japanese style sesame seed chicken. She toss the clear tupperwear bowl with a red plastic top into a nearby metal white trashcan. She places the chopsticks back into the ziplock bag, and sticks the bag with chaopsticks inside: back into the her pocket of her blue jacket.
 
Planet Black

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Alice Freecell walks from the large tunnel into the small brightly lighted room with brick walls painted yellow, and a cement floor. There is food vending machines along the left wall. Freecell gets in the nine person line, and after a while is able to make it to the paystall, she injects five bucks in coins into payturn to go to the subway station, she then heads down the massive black steps that goes down into the platform of the subway station. The subway station is filled with people waiting for the next train. The station is brightly lighted, and has homeless people sleeping on the large blue hard plastic benches throughout the platform subway station. Freecell slowly walks down the steps, and stops next to the young red headed sixteen year old girl (Who looks like Sophia Lillis, and is what we will call her from now on.) standing at the bottom wearing a white DAZY Women's Off Shoulder Multilayered Lace Bell Sleeve Dress, with a black pocketbook, with white flats on. They walk side by side and join the group of people waiting on the platform for the subway train. Lillis looks over at Freecell, looks over her body, and gives an evil smile at Freecell. Within a few minutes the C-35 subway train arrives at the subway train station. People exchange on and off the train as soon as the train comes to a stop on the platform, and the doors open. Lillis and Freecell are able to get on the train just as the doors shut closed behind them inside the packed subway cart. The inside of the cart is filled with people shoulder to shoulder. It stinks, and there is a piss smell throughout the cart. High above there heads are thin Roku tv's mounted to the sides of the train showing news. The closest tv has Dragonball Z character stickers along the bottom edge of the screen. Lillis and Freecell stay on the train for the next six stops at subway stations, and people slowly get off more and more from inside the cart. No one gets on the train, and as the train pulls out for the seventh time there are only three people still on the train. Person one is a white American female, with blonde short hair wearing a brown, green, and yellow Burger King uniform. Person two is a black male in black Van shoes, blue jeans, and a yellow cotton hoody with black alien 'Predator' like braided hair. The third person is a Chinese male is his 60's with short black hair, wearing blue jean shorts, blue flip flops, and a many colored cotton hawaiian shirt with black Ray*Ban sun glasses who is eating a cold slice of cheese pizza. Lillis stands next to Freecell looking deeply into her eyes. Freecell gets a bad feeling inside like this girl next to her make want to kiss her on the lips. Freecells heart races as the girl goes in for a kiss.

Suddenly there is a blinding light that shines inside the train cart. The light is so bright it is blinding. Lillis pushes Freecell down onto a chair, sits down beside her, and holds her hand while in the bright blinding light. Just then there is sounds of gunfire, and what sounds like three different guns firing over and over, again and again; as someone is now hugging Freecell. About two miuntes later the light is gone, but it takes Freecell a few minutes to regain her vision to see Lillis is strained over Freecell with her knees spread over Freecells lap, and is hugging Freecell with her hands around Freecells shoulders. Freecell pulls Lillis off of her, and she falls onto the floor. Freecell gets up to discover the people on the train are all shot and bleeding. They are all alive but in alot of pain. There are seven footprints, in blood, about a mans size nine long, going from the center of the train, leading towards the other passangers. The footprints are not shoes, but are feet with what appears to have six toes total. There are guns and bullets laying on the floor at one end of the train cart. Lillis runs over to Freecell who is looking at the footprints, grabs her by the hand, and runs with her to the door. As they reach the door inside the cart, the train comes to a stop, the doors open, and Lillis and Freecell get off together onto the new train station that is lighted well but stinks like trash.
 
Planet Black Post 4++

Freecell sat with Lillis on a blue hard plastic bench in the subway train station platform with vending machines, and has green and yellow walls. Freecell sat there wondering what had happened on the train? What was that bright light? What was with the gun fire? What did those people see? Then there was Lillis? Was Lillis in love with her? Was she a lesbian or was it fear? What did Lillis see? What was she thinking? Why did this happen? The station smells like trash, and is brightly lighted. Lillis brings up her finger, signing 'one moment.' Lillis got up from the bench, pumps three bucks in coins into a vending machine, and Freecell watches from the bench as Lillis walks around the empty station wondering what she is doing next. Lillis walks back to the bench, and sits down next to Freecell. Lillis hands Freecell a Snickers candybar, Freecell spots the candybar, and takes the candybar from Lillis. Freecell wondered why she took the candybar, but could never turn away free food.

'Everything is going to be fine Honeybear. By the time you finish eating it, you will be right as rain,' Lillis said with a smile looking into Freecell's eyes.

Freecell opens the plastic package over the candybar, and takes her first chomp out of the bar. 'Did she just call me Honeybear,' Freecell wonders before thinks she must have just heard Lillis wrong. Lillis stands up, and then pulls Freecell up from the bench, and gives Freecell an evil looking smirk while looking at Freecells nice beautiful lips. Suddenly, a female Russian, about sixteen years old wearing white tennis shoes, wearing a cotton black and white maid uniform, with a thick black trench coat going down to her knees, comes down the big black stairwell into the subway train station. The girl walks down and stands onto the end of the platform waiting for the train. They stand there creeping the girl out, watching the strange girl dressed as a maid. Lillis licks Freecell in the ear while Freecell watches the other girl. Freecell presses Lillis away from her head as she was starting to chew on Freecell's ear drumb. Lillis runs over to the girl and stands behind her. Lillis holds out her hands like she is going to push the girl off the platform. Just then the train starts to roll into the station, and dock at the train station. Freecell knows Lillis is going to push the girl off the platform: so that the girl is ran over by the docking subway train. Freecell runs over to Lillis and grabs Lillis with her hands. A red rage comes over Lillis as the two of them fall to the floor made of brown and green tiles.

Freecell holds Lillis next to her body, keeping her from being able to push the girl off, by placing both hands around Lillis, and Freecell joins her hands together behind Lillis' back. Lillis goes from being filled with rage, to being filled with lust. Seconds later the train comes to a stop, the doors open, and the girl steps into the train. Freecell lets go of Lillis, but Lillis doesn't get up. Lillis kisses Freecell, and unbottons Freecell's jacket. Freecell pushes Lillis off of her body. Lillis stands up, and looks over Freecells body with lust as Freecell lays on the floor. Freecell is creeped out, and gives a look of shock on her face as Lillis looked over her. Freecell takes a bite of the candybar, and Lillis reaches down pulls Freecell up off the floor. Lillis brushes off Freecell's pink Hello Kitty backpack with her right hand. Lillis gives an almost crazy like laugh to Freecell as Lillis takes her by the hand, and walks with her to the black stairwell.

'I have five hundred and thirty two bucks. I think there is a Nintendo Store on the tunnel from this station. Do you want to go shopping with me,' Lillis asked with a straight face while looking at Freecell?

Lillis looks at the black stairs, and points at them, and then lowers her hand. She then looks back at Freecell.

'Come on, lets go on a quest,' Lillis said while taking the Snickers bar, pulls off all the remaining plastic, takes a bite, and then sticks the rest of the bar into Freecells mouth.

Before Freecell can re-act, Lillis takes Freecell by the hand, Freecell's face has a small blue tone showing she is shocked, as Lillis runs her up the big black stairwell. 'Who is this crazy girl,' repeats over and over in Freecell's head since Lillis puts the Snickers bar into her mouth after eating some of it.
 
Planet Black Post 5++

The Nintendo Store is at the top of the large black stairwell. It is next to the subway station in the massive underground tunnel. The outside of the store is red and white, and there are cardboard Mario cutouts on the windows. Lillis still holds Freecells hand as they enter the Nintendo Store that is brightly lighted with thick red carpet throughout the store. Lillis takes a bite of the other end of the Snickers candy bar still in Freecells mouth, making her kiss Freecell on the lips. Freecell presses Lillis off her and walks around looking at the inside of the store. Everything they could make into anything in marketing is for sell, from bed sheets, rugs, Mario socks, umbrellas, back packs, flags, video games, t-shirts, hoodies, jackets, shoes, to pokemon cards. Lillis buys herself and Freecell a Kirby plush toy at the check out counter. The clerk is a Japanese man in his middle 20's, wearing a cotton white and red store uniform with black cargo pants with no pockets, with black hair. At the check out counter, Lillis puts both Kirby plush toys, into Freecells pink Hello Kitty backpack. A young thirteen year old, Mungolian female, wearing a black and white cotton school uniform comes up to the check out counter, and tries to buy Mario Kart 64 for her old Nintendo 64 that her older brother gave her for her birthday, according to what she said to the clerk.

'It's your (content deleted) birthday? Realy? You are turning the big, unlucky age. HAPPY BIRTHDAY,' Lillis said loudly with a smile, and gives the unknown un-named girl 15 bucks, so she is able to buy the game.

Lillis takes Freecell back to the Nintendo VR section by pulling her along by grabing Freecell's hand. Once at the Nintendo VR section, Lillis starts going through the many different VR packages, and looks over all the new games. She picks up a red and white box VR package, the best and top one, and gives it to Freecell whom looks at it wondering what it is.

'Do you already have one of these,' Lillis asks Freecell with a smile looking into her eyes?

Freecell looks at the box, and then looks back at Lillis. Was Lillis trying to buy her way into becoming a friend, a girl friend, or was she just trying to "wow" the girl she was in love with? Was Lillis trying to buy her way into Freecells heart she wondered? Freecell shakes her head, from side to side, signing no, 'that she did not have a Nintendo VR.' Lillis points at a game, and looks back at Freecell. Lillis points to the next game, and then looks back at Freecell. Lillis does this nine times before Freecell undertsands Lillis is wanting to get Freecell some additional games: other then the three games that come in the box.

'I hear Mortal Kombat One Gold has all the extra characters, and it is fun,' Freecells said.

Lillis gives an evil smile as if she liked the thought, the Freecell liked violance in a VR game. Lillis grabs the game and puts it on top of the box.

'I new you liked violance. Lets go to my house and play. I only live two tunnel-ways down.' Lillis said as they walked back up to the check out counter while looking into Freecells eyes.

Lillis pays for everything, and puts the game inside Freecell's pink Hello Kitty back pack as Lillis holds the VR box. Together they walk out of the Nintendo Store back into the massive tunnel.
 
Planet Black Post 6++

Freecell and Lillis walk down the massive tunnel before coming to the apartment tunnel Lillis lives at. The tunnel has grey marble walls, is brightly lighted, and has three foot wide black octagon stone tiles. There are few people in the tunnel since it is hour eighty one, of the ninety five hour period these under ground cities call a day. Out front of the apartment tunnel: is a fountain with a knight on top, in the center of the massive tunnel. Water rushes out of the mouth, down into the massive base pool surrounding the bottom. The floor of the massive base pool is lined with a large number of coins, that people toss in as they often do when making a wish. The fountain is in the center of the tunnel, with two massive pine trees on both sides. There is an old black American man, in his 90's pushing a hotdog portable stand, wearing a cotton black and white uniform. Lillis pulls Freecell by the hand to the hot dog stand and buys them both two hotdogs for sixtenn bucks, with two side orders of fish and chips in small plastic bowl containers for fourteen bucks. As they stand there eating hot dogs, the vender slowly walks away down the tunnel. The other people in the tunnel are gone as well, as they walk off. It takes Freecell a minute to eat her hot dogs, because Lillis downed her hot dogs within secends. Lillis eats her fish and chips with her hands, as Freecell removes her wooden chop sticks from a sealed plastic zip lock bag, from her jacket pocket. Lillis looks over Freecells body as Freecell slowly eats from her plastic bowl. Lillis tosses the rest of her food into the big metal black trashca: her small plastic bowl container still one thirds full, having not ate all her fish and chips. Lillis waits on Freecell to finish eating. A few minutes later, Freecell finishes her fish and chips, and walks over to Lillis to toss away her empty small plastic bowl container into the trash can. Freecell puts her chop sticks back into the bag, and places them back in her pocket.

Lillis and Freecell walk to the fountain with Lillis having her left arm over Freecell's shoulders. Freecell feels rather strange about how Lillis has some strange relationship with her that can not be explained with logic and reason. Freecell thinks Lillis is a crazy spoiled girl. Lillis smiles at Freecell with lust in her eyes, and gives an evil smile. Once at the fountain, Lillis sets down the red and white Nintendo VR box on the ground. Lillis hands Freecell a coin to toss into the fountain. Freecell wishes that Lillis was not, so crazy, as she tosses the coin into the fountain. She watches the coin fly from her hand, through the air, the coin makes slashdown, it goes down through the water, and land on the bottom. Just then, a stange brightly glowing white light appears on the bottom, next to the coin Freecell tossed into the fountain. The little amount of light grows, becoming larger, and larger, and brighter and brighter. Just as Lillis starts to toss in her coin into the fountain, a long silver chain wraps around her neck. The chain; coming from the light pulls Lillis down into the water of the fountain. Lillis is trying to fee herself with her hands, trying to remove the chain. Freecell is unable to pull Lillis out of the water of the fountain. Three minutes and nine seconds later, Lillis cant not hold her bearth any longer and bubbles shoot out into the water. Just then Freecell spots the chain around her throat. Together they pull off the chain, and Freecell pulls Lillis out of the fountain the second the chain is off her throat. It takes Freecell a minutes to gather Lillis back to reality as Lillis is still trying to remove the chain that is no longer there. Freecell pulls Lillis' hands back down to her side every time Lillis reaches up to try to remove the chain. About five minutes later Lillis starts breathing right, and her heavy panic breathing passes, and the panic Lillis is having, passes a few minutes later. While still shivering from the cold water, Lillis kisses Freecell, thankful, out of pure joy, that she is alive.

'Thank you, you saved me life. Another minute, and I would have died,' Lillis said while hugging Freecell in a big bear hug.

Freecell wonders if she does have feelings for Lillis after all, because anyone else, hanging out with a crazy person, like her; would have let Lillis drown in the water of that fountain. Freecell questions her feelings as she looks over the shoulder of Lillis, looking at the fountain, to see a normal fountain, no bright light, and no chain.
 
Planet Black Post 7++

Lillis and Freecell stand in the center of a big white room. The walls are made of white brick, the floor is made of white Vinyl Sheet Flooring products: and there are bright, eight inch long, white neon lights along the edges of the room next to the bottom of the walls. Behind them in a windowless white metal door with a copper white handle on it. In front of them is another door looking like the one behind them. Lillis walks over to the other door in front of them, and slowly opens it, and looks back at Freecell, who was still wondering if someone is after her for being with Lillis? Was Lillis wanted dead by some unknown paranormal violent active force? If so, what was it?

'What is after you,' Freecell asked?

'I thought, maybe whatever it is, you would know? I thought this was your doing? Something wants us...' (small pause) 'Dead, or so it appears,' Lillis said.

Freecell walks to the doorway slowly wondering if she should just run away, almost afraid of Lillis? The floor and the stairwell is cemented up nine floors, all painted white, with white neon lights along the white cement walls. Stair, steps, are typically eight (7) inches high. Ten feet is a good estimate for the height of a white underground tunnel building apartment flooring. So going up one floor requires about 21 white cement steps.

'Nine floors, apartment one hundred fourteen. Do you think, you can do that,' Lillis asked looking upwards throughout the center of the white stairwell?

Freecell starts walking up the steps, and Lillis follows up the stairs with her, just a few steps behind Freecell. They stop on the third floor, and Freecell takes the Nintendo VR box from Lillis, taking a turn to hold the red and white box. Freecell leads again, walking up to the fourth floor, with Lillis right behind her as they go upward. As they start to make it to the fourth floor: Freecell vanishes right in front of Lillis. Lillis is afraid that something took Freecell. Freecell looks back to see Lillis gone, and she looks around, and then down the center of the stairwell to discover she is on another floor. Lillis looks up and spots Freecell on the sixth floor: Freecell is looking down in shock wondering what happened to her. Lillis starts to run up the steps, and suddenly appears behind Freecell. As Freecell is now with Lillis, suddenly, there is a white glowing light at the bottom of the stairwell. Just then, a loud roar of a lion can be heard inside the stairwell.

'What the (deleted content) was that,' Lillis asked?

Lillis and Freecell look downwards to spot a white glowing lion at the bottom of the white steps. The lion glows white, and is white too with black eyes, with a white tail with white bone spikes on the end, and each foot has long white claws. The lion has long white sharp teeth, and along the back of the lion, there are massive white wings, with long white feathers.

'Look, a white glowing lion,' Lillis said shocked at what she has spotted.

Lillis points downward, wondering how they had traveled from the fourth floor stairwell, to the sixth floor stairwell. Freecell is filled with fear, her face turns white, and her body starts to shiver as if it was cold. Freecell knows if they do not escape, and if this lion catches them, they would both be killed.

'Run, go now, get to the apartment,' Freecell said.

Lillis takes Freecell by the hand as the glowing white lion starts running up the stairwell, and they run together upwards on the steps. As they run together the lion gains on them, faster and faster, upwards and onwords, faster and faster: breathing heavier and heavier as they run. On the nineth floor, the lion reaches the bottom of the nineth floor steps. Lillis places her hand on the big blue pad along the white wall, and unlocks the big white windowless metal door with a white handle as the the lion is almost there. The white lion jumps forward, and is now very close to them. Freecell tosses the Nintendo VR box into the face of the lion, who stops to investigate the red and white cardboard box, and claws at it. Lillis grabs Freecell, and pulls her into the dark cold apartment quickly, and within a few seconds, the lion stops glowing and vanished away as the door shuts closed, and locks.

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Planet Black Post 7.5++ (rewrite) by nerdy tangents

Lillis and Freecell are trapped in abandoned building. Everywhere they look is white, not a speck of dust or a hint of color to be found. It makes something inside them shiver in unease. They start moving up the stairs, desperate to find an escape. As they move the sense of unease grows until one of them disappears. Lillis freaks out, desperately trying to see where Freecell has gone.

She eventually finds her friend several stories above her. She tries to run to greet her but her body vanishes. She finds herself next to her friend, stumbling a bit at the abrupt change in location. Now both girls are freaking out. Something unnatural is going on. Something is taking over their bodies, moving them around like puppets. Suddenly they hear a roar at the bottom of the stairwell. They look down and see nothing at first, although they get the feeling of some unseen force staring them down. They panic, grabbing each others hands and racing towards the stop of the stairwell.

At the top of the stairs they see their first bit of color, a big blue pad in the wall near a door. Lillis places her hand on the pad as they hear some invisible creature racing up the stairs behind them. They finally get the door open, desperately throwing a Nintendo VR Box behind them to hopefully distract the creature. They slam the door shut behind them and watch as it locks.
 
Planet Black Post 8++

Alice Freecell, a 21 year old female Korean human. She sits down wearing a black and white SHEIN Essnce Women's Plaid Suspender Skirt, with matching wool long sleeved black shirt, and black leather flats. Over her clothing, Freecell wears a light pink Women-s-Double-Breasted-Woolen-Coat-With-Contrast-Color-Edge jacket hanging down to her knees. Freecell wears her blue pillbox hat, and has a set of plastic black Beats wireless headset around her neck that is Bluetooth'ed to her Play-Station 19 Portable Music Player. Freecell sits down in a black hard plastic chair at a white hard plastic table in a massive lobby in a Burger King.

Hundreds of people sit at tables around Freecell as she eats her Texas Double Whopper with side order of Chicken Fries covered in Paul Newman ranch dressing. Freecell eats half of her Double Whopper before taking a drink of Mountain Dew from her white styrofoam 118 ounce cup with white plastic top, and with a long red plastic straw: almost a gallon. The lobby smells funny, and the staff have not been doing their job well, since there is trash along the floor, and some of the empty tables need cleaning. About nine minutes later, a 18 year old female Japanese human, sits down at the table next to her, sitting in another hard black plastic chair, wearing black plastic Crocks, a mans wool black fedora, and a light pink and black (black, matching the color of her short hair) Vintage Victorian Gothic Cosplay Costume Civil War Southern Belle Ball Gown Dress Halloween Theater Edwardian Dress: at the table Freecell eats at.

'Hello, my name is Dell Locks, and I need to eat at a clean table,' Locks said with a smile towards Freecell.

Freecell wonders why Locks picked to sit down at her table she is sitting at instead of another, as Locks takes her Whopper out of the plastic white cover-sheet, and slowly eats her burger, with Crafts Honey Mustard and extra slices of American yellow cheese, before finishing her side order of french fries covered with a thin layor of Duke's Mayo. Freecell eats her Chicken Fries covered in Paul Newman ranch dressing: with her wooden chopsticks, from a plastic transparent Ziplock bag, from her small inside pocket she had put into her clothing by a taylor.

'Did you hear about people vanishing from Angels, coming out of balls of light,' Locks asks trying to be nice and making small talk?

'Angels,' Freecell asked wondering if Locks had seen Angels?

Freecell wondered if the things coming from balls of light are from the after life, but, winged glowing lions and chains from fountains? Maybe being from a devil of some kind, from Hell, Freecell wondered?

'I do not think assassins with guns on the subway, chains from fountains, and winged killer lions in a stairwell, come from Heaven, Angels, or the after life. My, so-called, friend, Lillis was attacked. I have seen these things, whatever it is, they come from balls of light, and I have not seen any Angels,' Freecell said while making sure to keep eye contact with Locks.

'We should try to investigate,' Locks asks?







 
Planet Black Post 9++

Freecell and Locks stand next to eachother in the center of, this well lighted, place called Yellow Square. There are five different subway trains that stop here at this large dirty over populated station. The big pink trash cans are full, and there is trash all over the floor. There are always about three thousand people inside this large subway station at any given time, coming and going, getting off and on trains all hours of the 95 hour periods they call a day: in this underground reality. There is alot of different kinds trash along the yellow tile floor, with its yellow marble walls. There are two Japanese food places to eat on each end of the station, and there are vending machines along the yellow western wall. Locks stands there eating an oatmeal cookie with white chocolate chips watching as passengers pass her by.

'I need to catch the next train after this, then take that train north, then get off, and switch trains,' Freecell said while looking at Locks as she finished eating the oatmeal cookie.

They stand there until, the train they need pulls up and stops. The train they need is covered in an almost kelly paint (sometimes called, leaf green) with different gang tages spray painted over that green paint in different colors and languages. They quickly run over and step inside the cart with the doors closing behind them. The cart itself had its chairs along its inner walls removed, and there is a silver poll in the center of the kelly green cart that is filled with many passengers, and it is hard to move around freely inside the packed cart. Suddenly there is a bright light at one end of the cart, and the light is almost blinding.

'This is not the train we was on, and this is not the time? I do not understand? Do we not need to get on the train, I was on with Lillis,' Freecell asked loud enough for Locks to hear, over the other passengers, who have started yelling in a panic?

'I can not make it out, whatever it is. I am recording to review later,' Locks said while recording on her new red and white I-NintendoWeb 33, (smart phone) and in a few seconds, she is just able to see other passenger in the cart are taking pictures and recording too.

The yelling quickly becomes loud screaming sounds: Freecell can hear what sounds like fast and quick chopping sound between the different people screaming, and calling out for help. Within a few minutes the sound of screaming becomes less and less high volume screams as the people next to them get tighter and tighter: passengers trying to move as a collective away from the light. Freecell's face turns blue, and her heart races as she becomes filled with fear. Freecell looks at Locks for a second and spots she is shivering with fear while standing next to her. A few seconds later the light goes away, but the people are still in a panic inside the cart. Finaly, Locks can see what is happnening over the shoulders of the people pressed in front of her with her camera feature. There is what looks like a strange mans body, tall and strong looking, wearing a red cotton milk man uniform, with the head of some kindof pig-man, who swings a massive chopping machete. The pig-man and the machete are covered in blood, as it chops and kills everyone next to it.

The pig-man slices the heads of the passengers as it moves along leaving a wake of murder, and death as it moves toward the other end of the now bloody cart. A few seconds later there is what sounds like, three shots, of a Smith & Wesson Classics Model 25 45 (Long) Colt 6.5in Blued Revolver. Three seconds later the pig-man falls over backwards, onto the blood covered floor of the cart, as the train pulls into the next station. As the train comes to a stop: Freecell and Locks are pushed out onto the platform of the next station, as the other passengers still alive, all run out the doorways of the cart. Locks pulls Freecell over to the window as they move outwards, and as she is still filming: records the dead shot up laying on the floor pig-man, and all the headless dead people still bleeding out on the floor of the cart. People do not get on the train but record the inside of the cart from its doors with their cell devices.

'Well, that was new,' Freecell said, with a look of shock, her face still blue looking, as her heart still races, as Locks posts her video to Blackbook. (Blackbook is a video social media service, like Youtube or Tiktok, but only on the Planet Black that has a 20 bucks a month membership)

'We are still no closer to understanding what is happening and why this is happening. THIS IS REALY (content deleted) UP,' Locks said still shivering looking while into Freecell's eyes!
 
Planet Black Post 10++

Freecell and Locks stand in a small little tunnel, its not on a map, and it doesn't have a name. The bricks are gray, and rather old with green moss along them here and there. There are little light bulbs at the top of the tunnel every eighty three feet apart. The ground is green standard grass, with a mix of field bindweeds, and the middle of the tunnel has what looks like a four wheeler dirt line tracks. Next to them is Locks' red Polaris Sportsman fourwheeler with silver chains on the wheels. Sitting on the ground is a black leather bag with two large strap handels. They stand there in the tunnel for twenty two minutes, until a bright green Dodge four wheeler, with head lights, seen in the distance coming down the tunnel towards them, being driven by what is a man, wearing a full black Revzilla suit, with a black helmet, and tented black visor. He slows down, and comes to a stop, and gets off the four wheeler, only about nine yards from them. He stands there for a minute looking around, and then stands there as if something might be wrong. Freecell wondered if the man was debating if the two of them was under cover police: trying to make a bust. Then, without saying a single word, he walks over to them, stands two feet from Locks, takes off his black school back pack, sits it on the ground, picks up the leather black bag next to Locks, gets back on the four wheeler, looks over at them, then looks around before looking inside the bag at the money inside, and quickly drives off back down the tunnel in the direction he came from.

Locks bends down and opens the black back pack. She puts one of the black leather gun straps over Freecell's left shoulder. Locks then puts the other black leather gun holder strap over her own left shoulder. Locks pulls out two black 9mm Uzi's. She loads both guns with two silver clips filled with 32 round silver bullets in each gun, then Locks puts the two black guns in Freecells holder strap. Locks then does the same thing to herself, but her Uzi's are pink with lasor red scopes. Locks gets on the four wheeler, as Freecell rides bitch, and they ride off down the tunnel. They go down a large series of these old forgotten tunnels, and come out in the main tunnel that is closed from construction. The walls are a blue marble, with blue stoned tile flooring, with what looks like old public places to eat that are empty. Closed cafes and old restaurants are fillled with dust. Someone has spread big white wool blankets over the seats, tables, outside booths, and all other furniture.

'This tunnel connects to First Tunnel at the end. This was Food Court Two, they closed it to work on it, and update it. It must have fell between the cracks, because they never got the money to support the update. We should look into that too,' Locks said, and then jumps up off the four wheeler.

'That is just government for you,' Freecell said as she looked over at Locks and steps off the four wheeler.

Locks walks over to one of the empty closed cafes, and removed her new red and white I-NintendoWeb 33, (smart phone) and records some of the empty places. A few minutes later Locks posts her videos on Blackbook. (Blackbook is a video social media service, but only on the Planet Black that has a 20 bucks a month membership). Locks walks back over to show Freecell that video, and as Freecell watches the video it gets over one thousand "Likes."

'Are you sure we need guns,' Freecell asks as she looks back at Locks?

'Guns worked on the pig-man,' Locks said with an evil smile, while putting away the phone.

'I guess thats logical,' Freecell said with doubt in her tone?

Locks reaches over and kisses Freecell, who feels a little shocked and creeped out by the kiss.

'I will not let anything happen to you,' Locks said confidently!

Freecell becomes worried, and her face turns a light blue as the thought of her own death fills her mind.

'We should go get my friend, Lillis,' Freecell said.

'If that is what you want,' Locks said with a strange look of wonder, and then confusion on her face?
 
Planet Black Post 1++
Pie

Pie is a 21 year old blue eyed, Japanese girl with black shoulder length hair that was tied up in a bun, that wore red framed glasses. Pie sat in the dark with her flashfligh eatinrg cold corn out of her last can of food. Pie sat on her yellow couch in her dark and cold living room wearing her brown and white Everlane "The Supima" cotton short sleeve shirt dress with brown snake skinned boots. She places her plastic spoon in the can, and sat it still half full on her wooden oak coffee table. For two days Mace, her sister, has been gone, and had not returned with more food. Pie sat there looking at the gun Mace left behind for her to use in the event someone broke into their small resident. A hour later Pie gets up and slowly walks to the front door. She puts on her long black leather trench coat, and her bright yellow and red Pokemon backpack. This is a blackhole backback that is larger on the inside then the outside. She walks back to the coffee table, eats the rest of the corn, before picking up the hot pink Sig Sauer 9mm Luger 3.1in two tone pistol with 10 shot clip and pink lasor sites: placing it inside the hidden pocket on the inside of her trench coat. Pie picks up the empty can from the coffee table, and gives it a light toss. While the can spins in the air while falling, Pie super kicks the can. The can changes speed and direction into the small dark kitchen, and lands right in the plastic green trash can.

Pie "Field goal, mother [deleted]"

Pie walks to the 225 inch Roku flat skinned tv and takes apart the ports. She places her Nintendo Switch, and her Nintendo VR into her backback along with the cords. She walks, back to the, white metal front door, and steps out into the hallway. She closes the door leaving it unlocked in the event of Mace's return. Halfway down the red carpeted hallway her flashlight starts to fade. She turns off the flashlight, and places it in her blackpack with the hope of finding a place to recharge it later. Pie walks down the hallway and through the lobby. Through the massive glass doors she can see two shadow human like figures on the other end of the tunnel. She quickly places the door open for five inches without a sound. She uses the stopper along the bottom of the door to keep it in place. She quietly gets out her gun.

Unknown Subject "かn うぇ [deleted] へr のw?"

Pie reaches her gun through the opening, and with her lasor quickly shoots the person speaking in the head. The body falls, lands face down on the marble floor, and what look like a man, bends down and shakes the man she shot. As he stands up to look around, Pie shoots him in the head. As he falls over dead, another shadow figured person runs over. They fire nine 9mm bullets that land in the doors tummerwear bullet proof glass, putting the door on the edge of shattering. Pie shivers as her heart races. The shadow figure unloads the clip into the air, the gun sounding like something in the Glock family, as they run away down the tunnel to escape.

Pie gun in hands slowly walks over to the bodies, and finds weapons on both asian men. Pie spots the first man is about 35 years old. She puts her gun away back in her trench coat, and picks up his HK-G 36 Gewehr, putting the two extra clips, from his belt, into her backpack. The second man looks, maybe 28 or 29. On the second man she finds a 1848 Colt .44 Revolver and an unopened box of blue-berry Pop-tards: that she puts in her backpack. Pie stands up holding the HK-G36 Gewehr and spots a very bright light in the distance of the tunnel about 3 and a half miles away.

Pie (whispering) "What the?"

Planet: Black
Location: Tunnel Two: Housing Zone 34,9876, Blue Zone. City of Nexxus.
Character: Pie and 3 unknown people.
By: megatron2024
 
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