Haku1
Ze Hamster of Lurkdom
Okay, people, this thread is for how you can RICE up and PIMP up cliches
Here, I do my version of rocks fall, people die... in panaroma vision. I've shown some of you the uncut raw version in the chat room. This is it cleaned up.
And yeah, if you want it, you have my permission to nick it to show how upset you are with a player.
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The heavens slowly darkened as storm clouds gathered swifter then natural. A chill breeze blow, rustling the grass and leaves of the trees around you.
Slowly the sounds of the insects and wild life around fade away into silence.
A crack of thunder could be heard before the world became soundless. In that moment, a tree near you bursts into flames as it split in twain.
Another thuder crack as a small smoking crater forms beside you. Soon more smoking craters form around you in the plains, each heralded by thunder claps.
Looking to the heavens above, you see the sky raining fire, shooting arrows of fiery death at the world.
***
So, who wants to pimp up some cliche?
Here, I do my version of rocks fall, people die... in panaroma vision. I've shown some of you the uncut raw version in the chat room. This is it cleaned up.
And yeah, if you want it, you have my permission to nick it to show how upset you are with a player.
***
The heavens slowly darkened as storm clouds gathered swifter then natural. A chill breeze blow, rustling the grass and leaves of the trees around you.
Slowly the sounds of the insects and wild life around fade away into silence.
A crack of thunder could be heard before the world became soundless. In that moment, a tree near you bursts into flames as it split in twain.
Another thuder crack as a small smoking crater forms beside you. Soon more smoking craters form around you in the plains, each heralded by thunder claps.
Looking to the heavens above, you see the sky raining fire, shooting arrows of fiery death at the world.
***
So, who wants to pimp up some cliche?