Gravitational Force
Dark Lord of Creativity
The three Phantom Thieves , Hamlet, and Romeo stared at the door leading to the Treasure they'd come to steal and reflected on what had brought them to this moment.
Luna Fukushima, Markus Verenzai, and Devon Alvarado hadn't known each other before, each of them finding their own way to a jail cell awaiting trial in front of Court of Common Pleas Judge Mitchell Giles. He was known to be "Tough on crime" by sentencing anyone who ended up in front of him to lengthy imprisonment in juvenile detention centers.
Their belongings had been taken from them, but one of the teens had managed to smuggle in their smart phone. As they hopelessly searched through their Apps in an attempt to ward off their rising panic, they discovered the Meta-Nav App. Clicking it pulled up the image of an eye. Hearing the guards returning, the teen hid their phone. The phone's voice recognition software still heard "Mitchell Giles" "court house" and "train."
The teenagers vanished, whisked into the Metaverse. There they found themselves inside a train station where a horrifying-looking train had just pulled in.
The train seemed to be built out of the parts of the courthouse and human body parts, with most of the cars being jail cells. Locked inside were children with coal instead of heads (the Judge's Cognitions of the defendants who appeared in front of him), their faces visible through the barred windows of the train. As the teens watched in horror the children were marched to the train's furnace by shovel-brandishing Shadows and shoveled in to fuel the train's engine. They were unable to help though as the path to the train was obstructed by a 10-ft high fence.
Milling about in the train station itself were the Judge's cognitions of the prison owners and others who profited from inmate labor, proclaiming themselves to be "Reformers of Corrupted Youth." The Judge's cognition of the prosecutor was the train's engineer, cackling to himself over all the fuel he provided for the train and how well he kept the engine running.
The "Reformers" each had a golden ticket that they explained would gain them entry into the luxury cars. The train would take everyone on it to "Justice," a land where the evil were punished and the good prospered. From what the "Reformers" were describing though it was obvious that those deemed "evil" were just those caught in circumstances outside their control while the "good" were those with the money to exploit the "evil." The Judge's visualization of the railway to Justice was as twisted and warped as his heart.
The teens tried to fight their way through the gate, but were caught by the Shadow attendants (in the form of ticket-takers) who demanded that they produce their tickets to be stamped. Since they had no tickets they were dragged to the train's Conductor, only to find themselves in front of a distorted version of Mitchell Giles in a golden conductor's uniform.
The Judge's Shadow laughed in their faces, gloating that it didn't matter whether they were innocent or guilty or if they deserved imprisonment. The fact that they were in front of him meant they were worthless except as fuel to propel society's worthy to more glorious destinations. He gleefully explained that he got a kickback for every child he sent to a detention facility and was using the money to fuel his luxurious lifestyle.
As the teens tried to figure out what to do, a small figure burst into the room. She resembled a anthropomorphic crow and after firing a slingshot into one of the Shadow attendants, smashing the head of the other with a cartoonishly large mallet.
As the teens gaped, their animal savior called out to them.
"Come on, are you going to let this stand?!"
Each of the teens clutched their face as a personal voice echoed in their head:
Luna:
Luna backed up, her eyes wide and filled with worry only for the door behind Luna to shut automatically, the slam echoing through the area as the judge grinned maliciously from the balcony he stood above on.
"I don't believe you'll be leaving any time Fukushima," The judge announced, his golden eyes meeting her frightened blue eyes as for the first time, the composed and snarky female was silent with her fear being evident no matter how much she clenched her jaw. The male looked down at the costumed males and creature before smirking to himself. "Your friends are doomed. Though, I can leave you without a scratch. With a price of course. Shouldn't be too much considering your family."
Luna balled her hand into a fist, unsure of what to do.
"Are you actually considering his offer?" One of her companions asked harshly. Luna looked at them as if they were insane for asking her that. "What do you expect? Don't you see he's in power?" She snapped. "We're just teens. Kids! He's an adult. This is better."
"Better? And allowing many more teens suffer because of him."
Luna bit the inside of her cheek as that fact was thrown at her, the gravity of the situation to evidently set in.
"Ignore them Luna. You know better, correct?" The judge cooed, reaching her ears. Luna clenched her jaw, making her decision.
"Yes... I do," Luna replied, turning to face the judge. But her gaze rather than being filled with fear was rather filled with fury and defiance as her fuse was lit. "I know better than to listen to some undignified, greedy, trashy, cowardly pig terribly disguised by a fancy title!”
And with that announcement, Luna's flames of rebellion were lit.
"I see you finally decided to trust your sight."
Luna widened her eyes, which now took on a golden hue, as her mind exploded in pain. The female put her hand on her forehead as if attempting to contain it as a small whimper escaped her. Only for the pain to intensify as she found herself doubled over, restraining herself from screaming out in pain, gritting her teeth and whimpering as the voice continued, getting more intense over time.
"For years, you've done nothing, allowing others. But you knew. We both knew that you were better than, correct?"
"Cor...Correct."
"THEN LET US PROVE IT! USE THE FLAMES OF REBELLION AND BECOME THE TRUE STRATEGIST OF THIS GAME AND TAKE A HOLD OF YOUR FUTURE!"
Luna yelled out in pain only for the pain to suddenly cease as a pair of large goggles formed on her face. Her mask. The female panted as she straightened up, seeming to regain her composure surprisingly quickly. "Understood... Come to me Deborah!"
In a swift moment with a loud cry of pain and fury, Luna ripped off the goggles, the straps wrapped around her head ripping off. Blood dripped down her face only for her entire figure to be encompassed As the flames dissipated, a ship flew out of them, carried by three pairs of large wings as it hovered above them. Inside the ship sat a smug Luna, now adorned in clothing that seemed to match the theme of her companions, smirking as screens appeared above her.
Luna quickly pressed a button that healed her team, raising their defenses slightly in progress. "You have made quite the mistake for choosing to underestimate my team. Gentlemen, Eliza, Deborah. Let us truly start this fight."
Devon:
"So then, you've finally taken notice ..."
Devon Alvarado clutches his head, screaming and falling to his knees.
"This quiet acquiescence was simple ignorance ... Your desires are not so timid."
Sweat pours down Devon's forehead as he crumbles to the floor, vomiting from the pain.
"Now that you see, what will you do?"
Devon coughs and splutters, slipping as his hands attempt to steady him.
"Will you hide your true self as before?"
Slowly, Devon manages to put one of his feet back to the floor and lift himself up, using his knee to brace his arm as he rises.
"Or fight, for romantic beauty and freedom!?"
Devon stands up straight, wipes a speck of sick from his lips, and smirks.
Devon: "You already know the answer to that."
It is then that the enemy notices his mask - a white mask with floral engraving. Devon grabs the side underneath his bangs, revealing it to be black with a red slit for an eyepiece, and grimaces in pain as he attempts to remove it.
"Tch ... it's hurt worse before ... get out here and show them what you - no, what we are capable of!"
Devon grips the mask hard enough for it to crack before ripping it off his face, spraying his blood - and showing a single glass eye beneath his bangs.
"Come forth! ANGELO!"
Blue fire erupts from Devon's body, sending powerful winds to push back his foes. Angelo's voice chuckles.
Angelo: "Very well. The contract has been forged."
The fires fade slowly, revealing Devon in a black dress suit complete with corsage, his eyes both in plain view, the glass eye rolling in its' socket.
"Do not hide your scars. Let them bring beautiful fear to the hearts of your foes."
As Angelo rises from behind Devon's form, the latter cocks his head backwards, allowing his glass eye to roll until it stared down upon his foe.
Devon: "You have no idea what hell you've unleashed ... let's show them, Angelo!"
Markus:
A silver tragedy mask appeared over Markus’ face and a voice echoed on his head.
“Will you allow your honor to be besmirched by this enforcer of the 'natural order?'”
His head throbbed with pain and he fell to his knees.
“Will you allow yourself to be cast as the villain of this story, unfairly judged, and accept the fate they force upon you?”
His eyes bulged as he made up his mind.
“Very well, then. I have sensed the resolve within your mind, and have begun the schemes to reveal these false-hearted fools. I am thou, thou art I. Reject the role society has cast you in and write your own script!”
Standing up, eyes glowing brightly yellow, dressed in strange costumed garb, Markus smirked.
“Let the show go on, Don John!”
As the teens ripped off their masks costumes appeared on them and strange beings came into being behind them. The masked crow did the same, summoning a Persona resembling a rainbow hurricane holding a massive hammer she called "Gideon." Seeing that he was outnumbered and overpowered, Judge Giles's Shadow used an emergency lever to eject them from the train and sent the train moving in reverse away from the station. This left the three teens and crow stuck on the train tracks as the "Arrival Time" sign on the train station reset one week.
Introducing herself as Eliza, the crow explained the nature of the Meta-verse as Humanity's collective unconscious, how it worked, and what they could do (Shadows, Personas, Palaces, stealing hearts etc.) to the teens. Hardened by their determination to right the wrongs they had experienced and that were spread throughout society, they banded together as the Phantom Thieves.
Appearing back in their jail cell, the teens learned that their cases had been postponed a week due to the judge being sick and nobody being able to fill in. Using that time to infiltrate the Judge's Palace (managing to forge a ticket into the luxury cards by stealing a letter from the local prison to the Judge and then bringing it into the Metaverse) and find his Treasure (having defeated the Engineer, battled through the ticket takers, and broken into the Engine), the Phantom Thieves only had one thing left to do: send a Calling Card and steal the Judge's Treasure.
The local paper reported the letter that had been mailed to the judge and attached to every surface near the courthouse not watched by security cameras.
Written on red and black paper with cut out letters from magazines, the letter read:
"Two-faced Sinner of Avarice Mitchell, your corruption ends here. You sell kids like property and rob them of their future with no regard for them as people. You take advantage of others under the guise of justice. We will show you that judgment is not truly blind. We, the Phantom Thieves will steal your heart and make you confess your crimes with your own mouth."
While it didn't get much attention outside the city, it did get enough attention to be a topic on social media right when the Phantom Thieves broke in to the Palace to break out with the Treasure.
When they arrived at the station the train was already leaving it. Thinking quickly the Thieves managed to reroute the train onto an unfinished track and off a cliff. From their they climbed down through the cars.
Making their way to the Treasure in the engine car (an opulent space easily the size of a courtroom with tacky expensive furnishings and the Judge's seat on top of the massive furnace), the Phantom Thieves went to seize the Treasure (a massive, solid gold conductor's cap) when it was snatched out of their hands by Judge Giles's Shadow.
"You little shits don't get it, do you? You're society's waste, only good to fuel the truly deserving like me along the fast track to riches! THAT is Justice! Accept your fate and feed the furnace! I DECIDE ALL THE DESTINATIONS! GET OFF MY TRAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The Judge slams his fist down on a button on his podium, and the Phantom Thieves are sent flying out of the compartment yet again. Feeling confident they can just go back down again, the Thieves are shocked as a massive metal hand slams down on the edge of the cliff and starts dragging the rest of it up. The train has twisted itself into a new monstrous shape that towers over them with murderous intent.
MITCHELL MOLOCH EXPRESS NON-STOP PUNISHMENT MECHA!!!
The furnace pumps steam through pistons with a sound like a mechanical heart in the middle of the monster's chest. Train cars make up the limbs with shadows oozing to form hands (each holding a massive gavel) and black sludge flowing from the 'feet'. Where the head would be is the engine car, with the Judge's Shadow inside piloting the mecha. At its feet the coal-children are still being pushed forward by the Shadow ticket takers in a coal-cart.
The Judge's voice booms out over the train mecha's speakers: "FEAR THE WRATH OF THE PRISON-INDUSTRIAL COMPLEX! "
(ARE YOU READY?!)
Eliza calls out to the other Phantom Thieves: "We've got to take that thing down. The furnace looks like the weak point, but we've got to take out his fuel first and it's covered by the other limbs. Take out the coal carts, cripple the limbs, and then shut down that furnace! Let's go! Blow them away Gideon!"
Eliza's Persona appears and blasts the coal cart with a mini tornado, mildly damaging it.
Luna Fukushima, Markus Verenzai, and Devon Alvarado hadn't known each other before, each of them finding their own way to a jail cell awaiting trial in front of Court of Common Pleas Judge Mitchell Giles. He was known to be "Tough on crime" by sentencing anyone who ended up in front of him to lengthy imprisonment in juvenile detention centers.
Their belongings had been taken from them, but one of the teens had managed to smuggle in their smart phone. As they hopelessly searched through their Apps in an attempt to ward off their rising panic, they discovered the Meta-Nav App. Clicking it pulled up the image of an eye. Hearing the guards returning, the teen hid their phone. The phone's voice recognition software still heard "Mitchell Giles" "court house" and "train."
The teenagers vanished, whisked into the Metaverse. There they found themselves inside a train station where a horrifying-looking train had just pulled in.
The train seemed to be built out of the parts of the courthouse and human body parts, with most of the cars being jail cells. Locked inside were children with coal instead of heads (the Judge's Cognitions of the defendants who appeared in front of him), their faces visible through the barred windows of the train. As the teens watched in horror the children were marched to the train's furnace by shovel-brandishing Shadows and shoveled in to fuel the train's engine. They were unable to help though as the path to the train was obstructed by a 10-ft high fence.
Milling about in the train station itself were the Judge's cognitions of the prison owners and others who profited from inmate labor, proclaiming themselves to be "Reformers of Corrupted Youth." The Judge's cognition of the prosecutor was the train's engineer, cackling to himself over all the fuel he provided for the train and how well he kept the engine running.
The "Reformers" each had a golden ticket that they explained would gain them entry into the luxury cars. The train would take everyone on it to "Justice," a land where the evil were punished and the good prospered. From what the "Reformers" were describing though it was obvious that those deemed "evil" were just those caught in circumstances outside their control while the "good" were those with the money to exploit the "evil." The Judge's visualization of the railway to Justice was as twisted and warped as his heart.
The teens tried to fight their way through the gate, but were caught by the Shadow attendants (in the form of ticket-takers) who demanded that they produce their tickets to be stamped. Since they had no tickets they were dragged to the train's Conductor, only to find themselves in front of a distorted version of Mitchell Giles in a golden conductor's uniform.
The Judge's Shadow laughed in their faces, gloating that it didn't matter whether they were innocent or guilty or if they deserved imprisonment. The fact that they were in front of him meant they were worthless except as fuel to propel society's worthy to more glorious destinations. He gleefully explained that he got a kickback for every child he sent to a detention facility and was using the money to fuel his luxurious lifestyle.
As the teens tried to figure out what to do, a small figure burst into the room. She resembled a anthropomorphic crow and after firing a slingshot into one of the Shadow attendants, smashing the head of the other with a cartoonishly large mallet.
As the teens gaped, their animal savior called out to them.
"Come on, are you going to let this stand?!"
Each of the teens clutched their face as a personal voice echoed in their head:
Luna:
Luna backed up, her eyes wide and filled with worry only for the door behind Luna to shut automatically, the slam echoing through the area as the judge grinned maliciously from the balcony he stood above on.
"I don't believe you'll be leaving any time Fukushima," The judge announced, his golden eyes meeting her frightened blue eyes as for the first time, the composed and snarky female was silent with her fear being evident no matter how much she clenched her jaw. The male looked down at the costumed males and creature before smirking to himself. "Your friends are doomed. Though, I can leave you without a scratch. With a price of course. Shouldn't be too much considering your family."
Luna balled her hand into a fist, unsure of what to do.
"Are you actually considering his offer?" One of her companions asked harshly. Luna looked at them as if they were insane for asking her that. "What do you expect? Don't you see he's in power?" She snapped. "We're just teens. Kids! He's an adult. This is better."
"Better? And allowing many more teens suffer because of him."
Luna bit the inside of her cheek as that fact was thrown at her, the gravity of the situation to evidently set in.
"Ignore them Luna. You know better, correct?" The judge cooed, reaching her ears. Luna clenched her jaw, making her decision.
"Yes... I do," Luna replied, turning to face the judge. But her gaze rather than being filled with fear was rather filled with fury and defiance as her fuse was lit. "I know better than to listen to some undignified, greedy, trashy, cowardly pig terribly disguised by a fancy title!”
And with that announcement, Luna's flames of rebellion were lit.
"I see you finally decided to trust your sight."
Luna widened her eyes, which now took on a golden hue, as her mind exploded in pain. The female put her hand on her forehead as if attempting to contain it as a small whimper escaped her. Only for the pain to intensify as she found herself doubled over, restraining herself from screaming out in pain, gritting her teeth and whimpering as the voice continued, getting more intense over time.
"For years, you've done nothing, allowing others. But you knew. We both knew that you were better than, correct?"
"Cor...Correct."
"THEN LET US PROVE IT! USE THE FLAMES OF REBELLION AND BECOME THE TRUE STRATEGIST OF THIS GAME AND TAKE A HOLD OF YOUR FUTURE!"
Luna yelled out in pain only for the pain to suddenly cease as a pair of large goggles formed on her face. Her mask. The female panted as she straightened up, seeming to regain her composure surprisingly quickly. "Understood... Come to me Deborah!"
In a swift moment with a loud cry of pain and fury, Luna ripped off the goggles, the straps wrapped around her head ripping off. Blood dripped down her face only for her entire figure to be encompassed As the flames dissipated, a ship flew out of them, carried by three pairs of large wings as it hovered above them. Inside the ship sat a smug Luna, now adorned in clothing that seemed to match the theme of her companions, smirking as screens appeared above her.
Luna quickly pressed a button that healed her team, raising their defenses slightly in progress. "You have made quite the mistake for choosing to underestimate my team. Gentlemen, Eliza, Deborah. Let us truly start this fight."
Devon:
"So then, you've finally taken notice ..."
Devon Alvarado clutches his head, screaming and falling to his knees.
"This quiet acquiescence was simple ignorance ... Your desires are not so timid."
Sweat pours down Devon's forehead as he crumbles to the floor, vomiting from the pain.
"Now that you see, what will you do?"
Devon coughs and splutters, slipping as his hands attempt to steady him.
"Will you hide your true self as before?"
Slowly, Devon manages to put one of his feet back to the floor and lift himself up, using his knee to brace his arm as he rises.
"Or fight, for romantic beauty and freedom!?"
Devon stands up straight, wipes a speck of sick from his lips, and smirks.
Devon: "You already know the answer to that."
It is then that the enemy notices his mask - a white mask with floral engraving. Devon grabs the side underneath his bangs, revealing it to be black with a red slit for an eyepiece, and grimaces in pain as he attempts to remove it.
"Tch ... it's hurt worse before ... get out here and show them what you - no, what we are capable of!"
Devon grips the mask hard enough for it to crack before ripping it off his face, spraying his blood - and showing a single glass eye beneath his bangs.
"Come forth! ANGELO!"
Blue fire erupts from Devon's body, sending powerful winds to push back his foes. Angelo's voice chuckles.
Angelo: "Very well. The contract has been forged."
The fires fade slowly, revealing Devon in a black dress suit complete with corsage, his eyes both in plain view, the glass eye rolling in its' socket.
"Do not hide your scars. Let them bring beautiful fear to the hearts of your foes."
As Angelo rises from behind Devon's form, the latter cocks his head backwards, allowing his glass eye to roll until it stared down upon his foe.
Devon: "You have no idea what hell you've unleashed ... let's show them, Angelo!"
Markus:
A silver tragedy mask appeared over Markus’ face and a voice echoed on his head.
“Will you allow your honor to be besmirched by this enforcer of the 'natural order?'”
His head throbbed with pain and he fell to his knees.
“Will you allow yourself to be cast as the villain of this story, unfairly judged, and accept the fate they force upon you?”
His eyes bulged as he made up his mind.
“Very well, then. I have sensed the resolve within your mind, and have begun the schemes to reveal these false-hearted fools. I am thou, thou art I. Reject the role society has cast you in and write your own script!”
Standing up, eyes glowing brightly yellow, dressed in strange costumed garb, Markus smirked.
“Let the show go on, Don John!”
As the teens ripped off their masks costumes appeared on them and strange beings came into being behind them. The masked crow did the same, summoning a Persona resembling a rainbow hurricane holding a massive hammer she called "Gideon." Seeing that he was outnumbered and overpowered, Judge Giles's Shadow used an emergency lever to eject them from the train and sent the train moving in reverse away from the station. This left the three teens and crow stuck on the train tracks as the "Arrival Time" sign on the train station reset one week.
Introducing herself as Eliza, the crow explained the nature of the Meta-verse as Humanity's collective unconscious, how it worked, and what they could do (Shadows, Personas, Palaces, stealing hearts etc.) to the teens. Hardened by their determination to right the wrongs they had experienced and that were spread throughout society, they banded together as the Phantom Thieves.
Appearing back in their jail cell, the teens learned that their cases had been postponed a week due to the judge being sick and nobody being able to fill in. Using that time to infiltrate the Judge's Palace (managing to forge a ticket into the luxury cards by stealing a letter from the local prison to the Judge and then bringing it into the Metaverse) and find his Treasure (having defeated the Engineer, battled through the ticket takers, and broken into the Engine), the Phantom Thieves only had one thing left to do: send a Calling Card and steal the Judge's Treasure.
The local paper reported the letter that had been mailed to the judge and attached to every surface near the courthouse not watched by security cameras.
Written on red and black paper with cut out letters from magazines, the letter read:
"Two-faced Sinner of Avarice Mitchell, your corruption ends here. You sell kids like property and rob them of their future with no regard for them as people. You take advantage of others under the guise of justice. We will show you that judgment is not truly blind. We, the Phantom Thieves will steal your heart and make you confess your crimes with your own mouth."
While it didn't get much attention outside the city, it did get enough attention to be a topic on social media right when the Phantom Thieves broke in to the Palace to break out with the Treasure.
When they arrived at the station the train was already leaving it. Thinking quickly the Thieves managed to reroute the train onto an unfinished track and off a cliff. From their they climbed down through the cars.
Making their way to the Treasure in the engine car (an opulent space easily the size of a courtroom with tacky expensive furnishings and the Judge's seat on top of the massive furnace), the Phantom Thieves went to seize the Treasure (a massive, solid gold conductor's cap) when it was snatched out of their hands by Judge Giles's Shadow.
"You little shits don't get it, do you? You're society's waste, only good to fuel the truly deserving like me along the fast track to riches! THAT is Justice! Accept your fate and feed the furnace! I DECIDE ALL THE DESTINATIONS! GET OFF MY TRAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The Judge slams his fist down on a button on his podium, and the Phantom Thieves are sent flying out of the compartment yet again. Feeling confident they can just go back down again, the Thieves are shocked as a massive metal hand slams down on the edge of the cliff and starts dragging the rest of it up. The train has twisted itself into a new monstrous shape that towers over them with murderous intent.
MITCHELL MOLOCH EXPRESS NON-STOP PUNISHMENT MECHA!!!
The furnace pumps steam through pistons with a sound like a mechanical heart in the middle of the monster's chest. Train cars make up the limbs with shadows oozing to form hands (each holding a massive gavel) and black sludge flowing from the 'feet'. Where the head would be is the engine car, with the Judge's Shadow inside piloting the mecha. At its feet the coal-children are still being pushed forward by the Shadow ticket takers in a coal-cart.
The Judge's voice booms out over the train mecha's speakers: "FEAR THE WRATH OF THE PRISON-INDUSTRIAL COMPLEX! "
(ARE YOU READY?!)
Eliza calls out to the other Phantom Thieves: "We've got to take that thing down. The furnace looks like the weak point, but we've got to take out his fuel first and it's covered by the other limbs. Take out the coal carts, cripple the limbs, and then shut down that furnace! Let's go! Blow them away Gideon!"
Eliza's Persona appears and blasts the coal cart with a mini tornado, mildly damaging it.
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