OOC [Toulouse Academy of Refinement~Year 2]

I wouldnt know how to translate properly, and there would be no reason for akio to write like that xD  
Thanks twi ^^
 
On another side of the emotional scale I haveth another Poem I was asked to write. I wisheth for thoust opinion on it.


Brightest steel


Darkes night


Flashing blade


A warrior of light.


Pray tell me,


Why doth thou fight?


Is not this world beauty?


And yet....


I find thy words understandable


Thy actions morally sound


And though sometimes you art speaking of unusuall things


I find I cannot dislike thee.


A friend you art


An ally in need


And yet you hold on


Adrift at sea.


Pain is your training


Suffering your bed


And yet in life you find


Hope has yet to flee.


I trust in thee


Warrior strong


I pray thou findest hope


And that thy end is filled with love.


Take this favor


Understand thy hope.


I shall offer only my aide


And trust thy strength.


Carry on, Sir. Carry on in life.
 
saphire go write poems for a living right now, get up and find a publisher and show them these. If you make stuff like this off the top of your head.. Damn girl
 
So @Bree other then damn you havent told me what you think, did i do well with that good by letter. Usually damn would be enough but it could be damn that was terrible or damn that was amazing !! xD
 
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