Digital New song written you can hear it

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The lyrics can be found in the description and the following spoiler (the above audio has no voices, only instrumental), as well as the sheet music listed below. Please tell me what you think.

Spoiler: lyrics

I'll Fly away, my Lord
(I'll Fly away, my Lord)
I'll Fly away from this Land
(I'll Fly away from this Land)

And I must
Find my Way
Back Home
Again

Have I Wand'rd astray?
Have I Lost my way?

Is she still
Waiting there
For me Somewhere?
Or shall I
Drift away?

Have I Wand'rd astray?
Have I Lost my way?
Can I Fly
Back Home
Again?

Fly Away

EDIT: This is an already outdated version. I'm working on something more for it right now.

 

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it's really more of a melody than a song huh? maybe a kalimba and some sensual congos might spice em up?